Spartacus Wrote:Cool new demo. Like the movement. I think it flows very well.
Art is amazing as per usual. Can't wait to see more content (re)added.
If you ever need someone to check your grammar send me a note. Doesn't have to be me, but please get it checked. There are some glaring errors

Hi m8,
sure, I'm already checking each phrase with word and google, but I'm thinking more to ask guys to check it while in demo in development phase.
If you are interested, just send me PM, we can talk it over.
EliteMaster512 Wrote:Love the new update. I just feel like sometimes the movement is awkward, especially say if you get stuck on a table, but I love everything else. I love how dialogue is presented, I love the story so far. I just wish there was more content, with Kelly, the Boss, Sam, and that pizza delivery girl you added before.
Also can't wait to see the intro. Keep this up! It seems great.
Thanks guys, your feedback is really important for me.
So far you're right, I'm actually redoing and reconnecting scenes and characters back to the game. So far Jack and Sam are done in basic version and I'm working on the Boss right now.