Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.02 ALPHA (ON HIATUS)

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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Fri Jul 25, 2014 12:55 am

Frontside pose (full)

krystal poses so far.jpg

Bartangelus Wrote:Isn't her furr on her cheeks a little bit to long in front side?

I really like her cheeks. It makes them 'furrier' ;)

Bartangelus Wrote:But very good work still.

Thanks! Too much work to make those.

Zeus Kabob Wrote:Krystal from SF:Assault

I love that face ;) But I really wanted more fur in her cheeks.

Zeus Kabob Wrote:Her chin is a little bit more defined

I'll try to improve that but please pay attention that even the Playshapes Krystal has the current shin size I made.

Zeus Kabob Wrote:The fur at the sides of her face also transition smoothly into the base of her ears.

I'll try to improve that.

VintageBass Wrote:Also, it's weird that the backside model doesn't have the drape covering her crotch.

I'll make the outfits for those poses later.

MPLDAM9919 Wrote:The new face looks amazing! I like the one on the left better.

Thanks! ;)
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby dark441 » Fri Jul 25, 2014 1:45 am

Are the hands twisted in the rear view?
Nice work maaaaaaan^^
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby dark441 » Fri Jul 25, 2014 1:47 am

i mean back view^^
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby VintageBass » Fri Jul 25, 2014 1:51 am

dark441 Wrote:Are the hands twisted in the rear view?
Nice work maaaaaaan^^

... How's that nice?
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Fri Jul 25, 2014 1:56 am

VintageBass Wrote:... How's that nice?

Fixed.
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby dark441 » Fri Jul 25, 2014 1:57 am

I meant good work up to now should be no negative criticism
just wanted to also point out some
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby VintageBass » Fri Jul 25, 2014 1:59 am

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
VintageBass Wrote:... How's that nice?

Fixed.

... Sorry for nitpicking, but her bracers are on reverse as well for her back view. Sorry, sorry, I can't help it! DX
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby dark441 » Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:00 am

thats was fast^^
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby dark441 » Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:10 am

in the front view her breasts it would be good if they had a certain distance or? I will not annoy you .I would like to bring only proposals
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby VintageBass » Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:26 am

dark441 Wrote:in the front view her breasts it would be good if they had a certain distance or? I will not annoy you .I would like to bring only proposals

Yeah the breasts don't feel... right on her, and her nipples are pointing towards each other. Shouldn't they be going in the opposite direction?
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Fri Jul 25, 2014 3:13 am

VintageBass Wrote:Yeah the breasts don't feel... right on her, and her nipples are pointing towards each other. Shouldn't they be going in the opposite direction?

I updated once more......now I have to sleep... "One, little two, little three, little indians......four, little five, little six, little indians....."
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby dragonking9746 » Fri Jul 25, 2014 3:50 am

do you think that you can update your legend of Krystal game so that the player cann choose wether ir not to marrie the male lizard
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby NikSuki » Sat Jul 26, 2014 12:06 am

Hey Ivan-Aedler Love your work have been following it for a while now, tho I got to ask you released on your forum Peach's Untold Tale 2.2.3 but no patch notes cuz forum is broken :(. Is there any place I can check them out? Also love that you took this game and want to work on it really love everything you're doing but I got to ask you will you work on things like:
-Ability to edit Krystal in general meaning (Color/Breast size/Other outfits etc...)
-New jobs
-New characters
-New backgrounds/Levels/Cut scenes (like you're doing with "PUT" would love for this game to be improved a lot)
And many more things but also I would love if you could improve some stuff like:
-Ability to avoid the dire wolf from getting you pregnant (not just by dumb luck cuz I'm never lucky and don't want that to happen every time)
-More sex scenes with the dire wolfs in general
Now my suggestion cuz you don't want to change the layout of the actual map but you can add extra roads like intersection (Like there is left and right arrow) by simply adding a arrow up or down to take a road that would lead you into extra maps and stuff.
If you took the time and read everything that I wrote I have to say thanks, also would like a reply on what do you think and if you ever need any ideas just msg me I have loads but just didn't want to make this any longer. These were just suggestions not general execution of them :)

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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Jul 26, 2014 5:56 am

I've improved her face once again. I prefer her face like that (in the beginning of this page above).

dragonking9746 Wrote:do you think that you can update your legend of Krystal game so that the player cann choose whether ir not to marrie the male lizard

Yes.

NikSuki Wrote:Hey Ivan-Aedler Love your work have been following it for a while now, tho I got to ask you released on your forum Peach's Untold Tale 2.2.3 but no patch notes cuz forum is broken :(.

All is being uploaded to LOK only (here!), until I fix the forum.

NikSuki Wrote:Also love that you took this game and want to work on it really love everything you're doing but I got to ask you will you work on things like:
-Ability to edit Krystal in general meaning (Color/Breast size/Other outfits etc...)

I can't promise.

NikSuki Wrote:-New jobs

I can't promise.

NikSuki Wrote:-New characters

Maybe not. I intend to focus only on Krystal.

NikSuki Wrote:-New backgrounds/Levels/Cut scenes (like you're doing with "PUT" would love for this game to be improved a lot)

Of course!

NikSuki Wrote:And many more things

NikSuki Wrote:-More sex scenes with the dire wolfs in general

Like 20 scenes for each creature? Possible.

NikSuki Wrote:-Ability to avoid the dire wolf from getting you pregnant (not just by dumb luck cuz I'm never lucky and don't want that to happen every time)

Ok, like skip the wolf.

NikSuki Wrote:Now my suggestion cuz you don't want to change the layout of the actual map but you can add extra roads like intersection (Like there is left and right arrow) by simply adding a arrow up or down to take a road that would lead you into extra maps and stuff.

Possible.

NikSuki Wrote:If you took the time and read everything that I wrote I have to say thanks, also would like a reply on what do you think and if you ever need any ideas just msg me I have loads but just didn't want to make this any longer.

You can put it here (in spoiler), then I'll analyse them. ;)
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Jul 26, 2014 7:02 am

I want some opinions here.
Which is better? The two faces in the left, or in the right?

krystal poses so far.jpg
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby MPLDAM9919 » Sat Jul 26, 2014 7:32 am

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:I want some opinions here.
Which is better? The two faces in the left, or in the right?

krystal poses so far.jpg

They both fine to me.
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby Asion » Sat Jul 26, 2014 8:14 am

dragonking9746: one thing, if you're do a work and you reach the the first event befor the fisrt summer, then do the event, if the event is clered and the wolves attack you, then click the same colored button as the work color (waitress purple, nurse yellow ect) and you can avoid the wolves actions in both cases.
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby dark441 » Sat Jul 26, 2014 1:04 pm

The left much better^^
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby VintageBass » Sat Jul 26, 2014 1:07 pm

Left model looks better with her fluff pointing down.
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Re: Legend of Krystal AE (from G) - 1.01 ALPHA -23 July 2014

Postby Enkidu » Sat Jul 26, 2014 5:56 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:WARNING!! TAGGED AS ALPHA!
GAME (SWF) (right click to save as in your machine, if you want to play it offline)
If its a white screen, please wait it load. If you know how to fix the white screen, please PM me.


Re: White screen. You need a preloader. There is a pretty good one on newgrounds that can provide you with a base code template or be used as is. If you have a large file, you ideally want to set up your file structure so that the preloader is a separate file which initializes the loader and then includes the larger file(s). If you cannot break your project up into multiple files and still upload it correctly here, you will have to make the preloader the initial part of your file. You may still get a second or two of whitescreen in this case, but it will be much less than previous. If you use the first technique, there will not ever be whitescreen.
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