Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[Toyloli]

The new Chomp scene is great! I assume that there will be a doggy style one soon?

Also in the time of waiting for you and Quiz analyzing my scripts, I came up with achievement names and ideas.

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Peachy Experiment: Have lesbian sex for the first time

I Have the Power!: Collect every power-up in the game at least once

Hi I'm Daisy!: Have lesbian sex with Princess Daisy for the first time

Rosie Rump: Have lesbian sex with Princess Rosalina for the first time

Mona Pussy: Have lesbian sex with Mona for the first time

Cum with Krystal: Have lesbian sex with Krystal for the first time

You Go Girl!: Unlock all the lesbian sex scenes

Three Little Princesses: Have a three some with Daisy and Rosalina

Peach Pie: Have a lesbian orgy with all four girls

Mac or PC?: Have sex with TEC-XXX for the first time

Binary Babe: Unlock all TEC-XXX sex scenes

Dildos Ahoy!: Buy your first dildo

Toy Collector: Buy all the dildos from the sex shop

Easy to Please: Masturbate for the first time.

Naughty Princess: Masturbate 5 or more times in one level

I'll come up with more achievement names later.

Why are there mostly lesbian things there?
I also add:

• Tardy - Spend too long completing a level
• Dishonor Student - Be Tardy more than five times
• No sense of Time - Be Tardy more than Ten times.
• Nudist Camp - Complete a level without ever wearing clothes
• Natural Swing - Complete a level without ever collecting mushrooms
• Pure Diet - Complete a level without collecting poison mushrooms
• Victorian - Complete a level without losing or changing outfits
• Tissue Paper Clothes - Lose clothes through impacts more than five times.
• We don't need Clothes - Lose clothes through impacts more than ten times.
• Queen of Goomabs - Lay 40 Goombas
• Queen of Koopas - Lay 40 Koopas
• ^ ( Do this for for each monster)
• Royal Slut - Queen of more than one Race
• Royal Whore - Perform sex for money
• Royal Guard - Complete an entire world in Virgin mode
• Royal Keep - Complete the game in Virgin mode.

There would also be achievements for optional bosses and plot related events. Obviously.
Note: One of my previous ideas had Enemies stop (actively) attacking Peach if she obtained Queen status over them. Although I think we ended up tossing that idea.

I still prefer to make her give birth in the level area. She can try to hide herself (say, if she's near a bush, a button will appear: use the bush!') But I can think about a secondary birth area (in the nurse's room). If she gives birth/eggs out in the open, the eggs will form mini goombas or whatever, then it will run away. Toads will appear naked and they would suck her or go away too. Enemies wont harm her, because, in the game, everyone will respect that hard moment of her. Once 'freed' (by the wish of the player) they will want Peach again

I shall repeat myself here. I think laying eggs during the levels is one thing, and I totally support that. But actual birthing of monsters I would put a big red X over. If you are to birth monsters or have baby monsters then it should be done at the castle. And the baby left at the castle. Although she could interact with them there for people interested in such things.

[QuizmasterBos]

Why are there mostly lesbian things there?

Because MPL has a serious thing with female on female... and toys.

I also add:

• Tardy - Spend too long completing a level
• Dishonor Student - Be Tardy more than five times
• No sense of Time - Be Tardy more than Ten times.
• Nudist Camp - Complete a level without ever wearing clothes
• Natural Swing - Complete a level without ever collecting mushrooms
• Pure Diet - Complete a level without collecting poison mushrooms
• Victorian - Complete a level without losing or changing outfits
• Tissue Paper Clothes - Lose clothes through impacts more than five times.
• We don't need Clothes - Lose clothes through impacts more than ten times.
• Queen of Goomabs - Lay 40 Goombas
• Queen of Koopas - Lay 40 Koopas
• ^ ( Do this for for each monster)
• Royal Slut - Queen of more than one Race
• Royal Whore - Perform sex for money
• Royal Guard - Complete an entire world in Virgin mode
• Royal Keep - Complete the game in Virgin mode.

There would also be achievements for optional bosses and plot related events. Obviously.

I like most of your achievement names, they're very achievement-like. I find the Queen of X and Royal X to be a little on the bland side.
So far I can only think of one:

• First Served, First Come - Performed a sexual technique for the first time (I don't know what to call the description, any ideas?)

I still prefer to make her give birth in the level area. She can try to hide herself (say, if she's near a bush, a button will appear: use the bush!') But I can think about a secondary birth area (in the nurse's room). If she gives birth/eggs out in the open, the eggs will form mini goombas or whatever, then it will run away. Toads will appear naked and they would suck her or go away too. Enemies wont harm her, because, in the game, everyone will respect that hard moment of her. Once 'freed' (by the wish of the player) they will want Peach again

I shall repeat myself here. I think laying eggs during the levels is one thing, and I totally support that. But actual birthing of monsters I would put a big red X over. If you are to birth live monsters then it should be done at the castle. And the baby left at the castle.

Does the monster need to stay at the castle? It could also be released into the wide world, either automatically or by choice.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I also add these!

Nice ones! I would add 'Peach pie, or Peach P hole' if she uses the toilet too much.

But beware, I need to put SOME of them first (achievement mode) and how to show this achievement in each end of level.
And if so, how to list each achievement, because if we are coping with 60 levels or more, we need to browse through many achievements in the achievement area (with pages?)

Does the monster need to stay at the castle? It could also be released into the wide world, either automatically or by choice.

For me, again, I dont see any problem of giving birth out in the open. This is a fairy story, not a real life story.
But, again after again, I will put an option for those who want to go to the castle to be assisted by a female toad.

[QuizmasterBos]

But beware, I need to put SOME of them first (achievement mode) and how to show this achievement in each end of level.
And if so, how to list each achievement, because if we are coping with 60 levels or more, we need to browse through many achievements in the achievement area (with pages?)

Depends on how many achievements the game will have. You could just hover over one and it would show a small window with a description.


By the way, I have an idea for the link on NG. Maybe you should make a post on NG saying you're looking for a voice actress (on your account that is). It's very empty and the game page isn't going to be much of a help. Just make a news post and see if that will help.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Depends on how many achievements the game will have. You could just hover over one and it would show a small window with a description.

Yes but...let's say we've been playing level 50. In the achievement screen, there is 49 completed levels with 2 or more achievement per level. How to show that? In a small list like this (showing up to 1-4), with even smaller letters?

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Then the player hover the mouse in each one and a popup apears like that above?

By the way, I have an idea for the link on NG. Maybe you should make a post on NG saying you're looking for a voice actress (on your account that is). It's very empty and the game page isn't going to be much of a help. Just make a news post and see if that will help.

Ok I'll try to browse along the forums, because its huge!

[MPLDAM9919]

The new Chomp scene is great! I assume that there will be a doggy style one soon?

Also in the time of waiting for you and Quiz analyzing my scripts, I came up with achievement names and ideas.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Peachy Experiment: Have lesbian sex for the first time

I Have the Power!: Collect every power-up in the game at least once

Hi I'm Daisy!: Have lesbian sex with Princess Daisy for the first time

Rosie Rump: Have lesbian sex with Princess Rosalina for the first time

Mona Pussy: Have lesbian sex with Mona for the first time

Cum with Krystal: Have lesbian sex with Krystal for the first time

You Go Girl!: Unlock all the lesbian sex scenes

Three Little Princesses: Have a three some with Daisy and Rosalina

Peach Pie: Have a lesbian orgy with all four girls

Mac or PC?: Have sex with TEC-XXX for the first time

Binary Babe: Unlock all TEC-XXX sex scenes

Dildos Ahoy!: Buy your first dildo

Toy Collector: Buy all the dildos from the sex shop

Easy to Please: Masturbate for the first time.

Naughty Princess: Masturbate 5 or more times in one level

I'll come up with more achievement names later.

Why are there mostly lesbian things there?

I said I would come up with more achievements later. And it was on my mind at the time. I do like your list as well.

Anyways, here somemore achievements:

Toadstool Tour: Have sex with at least one Toad in all 8 main worlds!

Tipsy-Turvy: Get Peach drunk.

Fastest Thing Alive: Complete a level in under 100 seconds.

Fine Piece of Art: Unlock your first pic in the Picture Gallery

Great Taste: Unlock half of the Picture Gallery

Peachy Museum: Unlock all Pictures in Picture Gallery

I Van So Fast: Complete a World under 100 seconds each

Speed Runner: Complete the game quickly

There. How's that? Are you still going to add my other achievements that I came up with earlier Ivan? Or will those have to wait till the other girls will be added to the game?

[Ivan-Aedler]

Also in the time of waiting for you and Quiz analyzing my scripts, I came up with achievement names and ideas.

I dont think its interesting to use Fine Piece of Art, because its too cheap (is that going to appear just because Peach unlocked one picture and nothing else?)
I might add your list, with or without Daisy and others, but I need to have even more levels first. Then, the achievement screen (how it will be shown to the player).

I dont want to make a complex achievement screen. Just a screen with items people gathered along the levels.
And I might make a kind of HALL OF FAME, regarding total laid scenes, coins and score points! It can work (the player will be putting his name and this hall of fame will be on screen).
But only if the player has got a score higher than the 5 first ones and if he has an internet connection.

[QuizmasterBos]

Depends on how many achievements the game will have. You could just hover over one and it would show a small window with a description.

Yes but...let's say we've been playing level 50. In the achievement screen, there is 49 completed levels with 2 or more achievement per level. How to show that? In a small list like this (showing up to 1-4), with even smaller letters?

achievement screen.jpg

Then the player hover the mouse in each one and a popup apears like that above?

I was thinking of a bunch of small squares, with pictures in them if they've been unlocked.
Achievements shouldn't be levelbound, as they never are. If Peach receives the achievement "Tardy" in 1-1, then it should just unlock. That's because it can be obtained in any level.

By the way, I have an idea for the link on NG. Maybe you should make a post on NG saying you're looking for a voice actress (on your account that is). It's very empty and the game page isn't going to be much of a help. Just make a news post and see if that will help.

Ok I'll try to browse along the forums, because its huge!

But I said your main page. You know, when you click on your name, you get to your personal page? You can add news there that you're looking for VA's.
But a forum post can help as well. Just do both, to be sure.

[MPLDAM9919]

Also in the time of waiting for you and Quiz analyzing my scripts, I came up with achievement names and ideas.

I dont think its interesting to use Fine Piece of Art, because its too cheap (is that going to appear just because Peach unlocked one picture and nothing else?)

It's where Peach unlocks the first pic of the gallery of the one of the artists that contributed. Are we still going to have that Art Gallery?

[Darthan]

• First Served, First Come - Performed a sexual technique for the first time (I don't know what to call the description, any ideas?)

I think this should be "First Served, First Cum". We are making a porn game here.

I dont want to make a complex achievement screen. Just a screen with items people gathered along the levels.
And I might make a kind of HALL OF FAME, regarding total laid scenes, coins and score points! It can work (the player will be putting his name and this hall of fame will be on screen).
But only if the player has got a score higher than the 5 first ones and if he has an internet connection.

I would think that the best place for the achievements would be a section in the diary.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I was thinking of a bunch of small squares, with pictures in them if they've been unlocked.

Good idea!

Achievements shouldn't be levelbound, as they never are. If Peach receives the achievement "Tardy" in 1-1, then it should just unlock. That's because it can be obtained in any level.

I see...so we will have an acummulating list of squares, side by side.

But I said your main page. You know, when you click on your name, you get to your personal page? You can add news there that you're looking for VA's.

In Aedler.com? If could be. Yes I'll make a post as soon as I eat an apple for the mind (I'm not kidding).

It's where Peach unlocks the first pic of the gallery of the one of the artists that contributed. Are we still going to have that Art Gallery?

Yes we are.

I think this should be "First Served, First Cum". We are making a porn game here.

MPL had nice ideas, but this one is better! Agreed.

I would think that the best place for the achievements would be a section in the diary.

Possible. We can brainstorm more. If so, Achievement screen via menu will be vanished.

[MPLDAM9919]

It's where Peach unlocks the first pic of the gallery of the one of the artists that contributed. Are we still going to have that Art Gallery?

Yes we are.

That's good to hear. I do need help contacting/finding some artists. I already did a bunch.

I think this should be "First Served, First Cum". We are making a porn game here.

MPL had nice ideas, but this one is better! Agreed.

Would make more sense if it was First Cum, First Served or First to Cum, First to Serve?

[Toyloli]

I dont want to make a complex achievement screen. Just a screen with items people gathered along the levels.
And I might make a kind of HALL OF FAME, regarding total laid scenes, coins and score points! It can work (the player will be putting his name and this hall of fame will be on screen).
But only if the player has got a score higher than the 5 first ones and if he has an internet connection.

I would think that the best place for the achievements would be a section in the diary.

I sortof agree, I think rather than displaying achievements at the end of the level the best format is like in the Steam Games.
The moment you accomplish an achievement a little message is displayed in game. Afterwards, list of the achievements can be viewed by the diary as a set of thumbnails, or even just a list that takes up multiple pages and has check marks on the accomplished ones.

You could even write the descriptions as though Peach herself had written them.

[QuizmasterBos]

• First Served, First Come - Performed a sexual technique for the first time (I don't know what to call the description, any ideas?)

I think this should be "First Served, First Cum". We are making a porn game here.

Ah yes, maybe. Didn't think of that.

But I said your main page. You know, when you click on your name, you get to your personal page? You can add news there that you're looking for VA's.

In Aedler.com? If could be. Yes I'll make a post as soon as I eat an apple for the mind (I'm not kidding).

No, on Newgrounds. Go to your profile on Newgrounds and make a news post there.

Would make more sense if it was First Cum, First Served or First to Cum, First to Serve?

You need to serve one first before they cum, don't you?

Also, it's a play on words.

[Ivan-Aedler]

A good surprise in the next hour!

I sortof agree...The moment you accomplish an achievement a little message is displayed in game. Afterwards, list of the achievements can be viewed by the diary as a set of thumbnails, or even just a list that takes up multiple pages and has check marks on the accomplished ones.

Ok it could be!

You could even write the descriptions as though Peach herself had written them.

Yes and I already have her curvy font.

No, on Newgrounds. Go to your profile on Newgrounds

Ok! Posted in Newgrounds front page.

You need to serve one first before they cum, don't you?

Ok, First Served, First Cum.

[MPLDAM9919]

Would make more sense if it was First Cum, First Served or First to Cum, First to Serve?

You need to serve one first before they cum, don't you?

Also, it's a play on words.

I know it's a play one words. It's just the phrase is "First Come First Served." But it could go either way.

[xPreatorianx]

Found a new artist!

... OK, I could understand the bruising and the tearing, which could come from rough sex... but how do you explain the larger breasts, bigger butt, tattoos and piercings? The Before picture looks great, but why does the After exist in that form? It makes no sense other than to play to fetishes.

It's telling a story in two panels. In the first one she's innocent and either A) inexperienced but not a virgin or B) completely inexperienced and a virgin. While the second panel shows what she looks like after several sessions.(board indicates 58 sessions.) Basically she goes from innocent to an all out whore/cum dumpster. This is further eluded to by the chalk board on the second panel with a total of 58 ticks. Which means she had a total of 58 sexual sessions of various degrees and the end result is what you see her character being in that second panel. An all out whore/cum dumpster who just can't wait for the next fuck.

EDIT: The additions to the body could also be because she decided to augment herself as a result of all those sessions. She wanted our outward appearance to reflect her new personality as a result of all those sexual encounters. And yes I figured this all out in a matter of seconds. I'm surprised no one else figured it out. A picture says a thousand words and those two panels definitely tell you an entire story without even actually writing a few story bubbles.

Final EDIT: I like some of Shadman's art but not all of it. Some of his Kim possible art is awesome. But I definitely agree with everyone in terms of the gore, scat, dick girls, excessive piercings, etc.

[VintageBass]

The new Chomp scene is great! I assume that there will be a doggy style one soon?

Also in the time of waiting for you and Quiz analyzing my scripts, I came up with achievement names and ideas.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Peachy Experiment: Have lesbian sex for the first time
I Have the Power!: Collect every power-up in the game at least once
Hi I'm Daisy!: Have lesbian sex with Princess Daisy for the first time
Rosie Rump: Have lesbian sex with Princess Rosalina for the first time
Mona Pussy: Have lesbian sex with Mona for the first time
Cum with Krystal: Have lesbian sex with Krystal for the first time
You Go Girl!: Unlock all the lesbian sex scenes
Three Little Princesses: Have a three some with Daisy and Rosalina
Peach Pie: Have a lesbian orgy with all four girls
Mac or PC?: Have sex with TEC-XXX for the first time
Binary Babe: Unlock all TEC-XXX sex scenes
Dildos Ahoy!: Buy your first dildo
Toy Collector: Buy all the dildos from the sex shop
Easy to Please: Masturbate for the first time.
Naughty Princess: Masturbate 5 or more times in one level

I'll come up with more achievement names later.

Why are there mostly lesbian things there?
I also add:

• Tardy - Spend too long completing a level
• Dishonor Student - Be Tardy more than five times
• No sense of Time - Be Tardy more than Ten times.
• Nudist Camp - Complete a level without ever wearing clothes
• Natural Swing - Complete a level without ever collecting mushrooms
• Pure Diet - Complete a level without collecting poison mushrooms
• Victorian - Complete a level without losing or changing outfits
• Tissue Paper Clothes - Lose clothes through impacts more than five times.
• We don't need Clothes - Lose clothes through impacts more than ten times.
• Queen of Goomabs - Lay 40 Goombas
• Queen of Koopas - Lay 40 Koopas
• ^ ( Do this for for each monster)
• Royal Slut - Queen of more than one Race
• Royal Whore - Perform sex for money
• Royal Guard - Complete an entire world in Virgin mode
• Royal Keep - Complete the game in Virgin mode.

There would also be achievements for optional bosses and plot related events. Obviously.
Note: One of my previous ideas had Enemies stop (actively) attacking Peach if she obtained Queen status over them. Although I think we ended up tossing that idea.

Anyways, here somemore achievements:

Toadstool Tour: Have sex with at least one Toad in all 8 main worlds!

Tipsy-Turvy: Get Peach drunk.

Fastest Thing Alive: Complete a level in under 100 seconds.

Fine Piece of Art: Unlock your first pic in the Picture Gallery

Great Taste: Unlock half of the Picture Gallery

Peachy Museum: Unlock all Pictures in Picture Gallery

I Van So Fast: Complete a World under 100 seconds each

Speed Runner: Complete the game quickly

There. How's that? Are you still going to add my other achievements that I came up with earlier Ivan? Or will those have to wait till the other girls will be added to the game?

Well I would like to say that with previous talks, I actually like the idea of collecting achievements after completing a level, plus these achievements shouldn't be limited to certain levels or worlds. Plus I like the idea of an image to represent the achievements, even if it's going to end up in the diary... at least that's going to have some use in the future, because I still wonder what's going to go into it. And I have to talk about some of the names:

• Mona Pussy: I think this could have a better name, something more punny or something that's related to Mona's past jobs.
• We don't need Clothes: Personally I like the Tissue Paper Clothes achievement name, so why not follow it up with something more clever? I was thinking something involving Strip Battler, but I'm not sure how that'll work.
• I Van So Fast: I think you mean "Ran." And that's pretty easy considering I could finish 1-5 with less than 50 seconds.

Otherwise it's a good list. If I could come up with something, I'll add more.

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Found a new artist!

... OK, I could understand the bruising and the tearing, which could come from rough sex... but how do you explain the larger breasts, bigger butt, tattoos and piercings? The Before picture looks great, but why does the After exist in that form? It makes no sense other than to play to fetishes.

It's telling a story in two panels. In the first one she's innocent and either A) inexperienced but not a virgin or B) completely inexperienced and a virgin. While the second panel shows what she looks like after several sessions.(board indicates 58 sessions.) Basically she goes from innocent to an all out whore/cum dumpster. This is further eluded to by the chalk board on the second panel with a total of 58 ticks. Which means she had a total of 58 sexual sessions of various degrees and the end result is what you see her character being in that second panel. An all out whore/cum dumpster who just can't wait for the next fuck.

EDIT: The additions to the body could also be because she decided to augment herself as a result of all those sessions. She wanted our outward appearance to reflect her new personality as a result of all those sexual encounters. And yes I figured this all out in a matter of seconds. I'm surprised no one else figured it out. A picture says a thousand words and those two panels definitely tell you an entire story without even actually writing a few story bubbles.

Final EDIT: I like some of Shadman's art but not all of it. Some of his Kim possible art is awesome. But I definitely agree with everyone in terms of the gore, scat, dick girls, excessive piercings, etc.

OK, I can understand what you're saying, but it's that our views are different. I could see what happened in the After, and really what confuses me is her breasts, butt and thighs getting bigger for no explanation. Tattoos and piercings are one thing and I said I have no problems with tattoos only to a certain extent, but why would she have those larger breasts and thighs?

And by the by, work on how you did your quote. It makes it look like I'm the one who originally suggested Shad in the first place (which I didn't). (And I will say that I have a thing for futanari, although give a girl without testicles and I'll be at her).

[Ivan-Aedler]

Version 2.0.3 is up!
Go check the news on page 1

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Hey, you dont need to put all quotes like that :/ It makes your post hard to read.
WOW

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Well I would like to say that with previous talks, I actually like the idea of collecting achievements after completing a level, plus these achievements shouldn't be limited to certain levels or worlds. Plus I like the idea of an image to represent the achievements, even if it's going to end up in the diary... at least that's going to have some use in the future, because I still wonder what's going to go into it.

It should be easy to draw pics, and I want help here, or I can just make them using my mind/creativity.
E.g. Mona Pussy: a small square showing a vectorized open pussy with a name: "Mona". Upon clicking on it, a popup will appear describing the archievement.

[*] Mona Pussy [*] We don't need Clothes: Why not follow it up with something more clever? I was thinking something involving Strip Battler. [*]I Van So Fast: I think you mean "Ran." And that's pretty easy considering I could finish 1-5 with less than 50 seconds.

Yes, we can use Kitty for Mona, and a clever name for 'We dont need clothes'.

[xPreatorianx]

@Ivan - For a VA I would ask Zone-Tan. You know talk to Zone from Zone-archive and see if the VA that does Zone-tan will do it? She does an amazing job with Zone-tan when Zone releases his "news week" flashes/youtube videos. So I don't see why she shouldn't be able to or have any problems with doing female Voice over's for this game!

You can contact Zone-Sama here on twitter here : https://twitter.com/Z0NE
You can contact Zone-Tan herself on Twitter here : https://twitter.com/zone_tan