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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby coolness32 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 4:49 am

Toyloli Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:
Toyloli Wrote:@Ivan - I don't blame peach for her shocked expression in that flash :P
Who new things without gets could jump that emphatically :)

Just woken up, Toy? Your second line didn't make a lick of sense.

Actually I was still asleep. I made that post at 6am, something had disturbed me and I literally got a drink, wrote a couple of replies then went back to snooze.
Today is easter monday, so public holiday. The rest did me good.


I've never heard of sleep typing! Hope you had a good snooze after your replies!

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:We will work with their personalities.


Is it planned for the bosses to have multiple scenes depending on if Peach is a virgin or not? I know that right now it's basically different dialogue. If Peach is a whore, will the scene play out with Peach being a bit more aggressive? or will just the dialogue be more aggressive? If Peach is a virgin though, it could be the boss being more aggressive. Just wondering what's planned in that regard.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Mon Apr 01, 2013 4:55 am

coolness32 Wrote:Is it planned for the bosses to have multiple scenes depending on if Peach is a virgin or not? I know that right now it's basically different dialogue. If Peach is a whore, will the scene play out with Peach being a bit more aggressive? or will just the dialogue be more aggressive? If Peach is a virgin though, it could be the boss being more aggressive. Just wondering what's planned in that regard.

Me, Blargh and Gorepete....(Blargh? Where are you man?) He might be busy.... well, we three can readapt some scenes of Morton, creating a more tender sex (virgin one) and a rape scene. Its easy actually, because right now, the Morton scene is rather large, and there are some tender and some rape there. I prefer shorter scenes but delightful and 'direct to the matter' ones.

Every boss should have two scene variations, yes. And for those who are helping me creating the scenes: it's not hard because we can reuse the same timeline, with a variable who throws the pointer to the correct subscene inside the timeline, depending on whore/embarassed. I prefer 2, not 3 different scenes (embarassed/some sex/whore). Peach tends to be embarassed even with some fucking anyway.

And this variation works well in the 'slut of the day' mechanics, because Peach will be 'opened' to new enemies/friends when she fucks 10 or more characters in a given level. As I've said, she will be like drunk: so many sex => Peach more daring, as a whore. Then, in the next world level after the boss, she will be back to normal. But we would be able to see the boss scene as a whore due to the 'slut of the day'.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby coolness32 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:19 am

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:Is it planned for the bosses to have multiple scenes depending on if Peach is a virgin or not? I know that right now it's basically different dialogue. If Peach is a whore, will the scene play out with Peach being a bit more aggressive? or will just the dialogue be more aggressive? If Peach is a virgin though, it could be the boss being more aggressive. Just wondering what's planned in that regard.

Me, Blargh and Gorepete....(Blargh? Where are you man?) He might be busy.... well, we three can readapt some scenes of Morton, creating a more tender sex (virgin one) and a rape scene. Its easy actually, because right now, the Morton scene is rather large, and there are some tender and some rape there. I prefer shorter scenes but delightful and 'direct to the matter' ones.

Every boss should have two scene variations, yes. And for those who are helping me creating the scenes: it's not hard because we can reuse the same timeline, with a variable who throws the pointer to the correct subscene inside the timeline, depending on whore/embarassed. I prefer 2, not 3 different scenes (embarassed/some sex/whore). Peach tends to be embarassed even with some fucking anyway.

And this variation works well in the 'slut of the day' mechanics, because Peach will be 'opened' to new enemies/friends when she fucks 10 or more characters in a given level. As I've said, she will be like drunk: so many sex => Peach more daring, as a whore. Then, in the next world level after the boss, she will be back to normal. But we would be able to see the boss scene as a whore due to the 'slut of the day'.


This sounds very good to me! how short were you thinking of having the boss scenes be? I feel like they should be at least twice as long as a normal enemy scene.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Toyloli » Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:22 am

coolness32 Wrote:I've never heard of sleep typing! Hope you had a good snooze after your replies!

Is it planned for the bosses to have multiple scenes depending on if Peach is a virgin or not? I know that right now it's basically different dialogue. If Peach is a whore, will the scene play out with Peach being a bit more aggressive? or will just the dialogue be more aggressive? If Peach is a virgin though, it could be the boss being more aggressive. Just wondering what's planned in that regard.


I've said I'm a touch typist in this thread before. That literally means I can type with my eyes closed. :lol:

And yeah using the controversial Royness as an example:
(on arrival trigger hitbox)

Virgin
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Peach: What have you done with Mario? I know you like him, you have him don't you!
Roy: W-What! I'm not like that! I changed my shell and all!
Peach: I find that hard to believe...
Roy: I Tell you I don't know where your plumber is!
Peach: Everyone at the Palace talks about it!
Roy: Why You...
( Edit; I kinda imagine him pulling a rocket launcher out his shell at this point. Ka-click! Bwooom. Peach Epic dodge! Then rush and strike.)
FightFork (On catch, continue)

Roy: You think This is gay?
(Roy picks the princess up and rubs her against his penis)
Peach: Hey, Stop this. You're not fooling anyone!
Roy: This is my Manhood! and it's about to go up your Royal Highness thanks to this!
( Roy proceeds to pound Peachyness' holes. it should be pretty rough, with him holding her in the air and moving her on his penis instead of moving it in and out of her.)


Slut
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Peach: There you are, Oh my (Peach notices his waving penis)
Peach: I have a bone to er, pick with you! Where's my meat... I mean man!
Roy: You, huh? Oh... Mario... I wouldn't know, I'm in the middle of subdueing a kingdom here!
Peach: I know you cum, um... Oh to hell with this!
Roy: What?
(Peach walks up to him and starts fondling him.
Peach: I'm going to Squeeze the answers out of you!
Roy: Wait (on handjob), Princess (on Boobjob), Damnit! (On Blowjob) This is why I hate Women!
Peach: Come on, (Mounting) all you're siblings wanted a piece of this!
Roy: You're as Bad as my Sister, you know that?
(Roy begins to grudgingly do it with peach )


Edit: When he finally cums it should be once, a one shot wonder with a massive payout. Then he collapses, and Peach kinda pokes him and goes;
"Gee, he tired out quickly. so you really don't have Mario huh?"
Then she rescues the Toads and they tell her where to go next.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:37 am

FINALLY! After 3 days (I have completed in TWO days but bugs appeared and Quiz helped me), we have LEVELS 3-5 and 3-6 in a row!
Already on PAGE 1!
Later, I'll include more rooms and a Phanto area. Some Sparklies and maybe more enemies (blue snifits, cobrats and even a lonely xnaut searching for trouble) might be there.
Now, heading towards 3-7!

coolness32 Wrote:This sounds very good to me! how short were you thinking of having the boss scenes be? I feel like they should be at least twice as long as a normal enemy scene.

Yes, twice as long. It can be cut in half (those big scenes) because when we see two, three, four times, it becomes boring, and we cant imagine different scenes in our minds. Its easier to imagine Peach getting screwed up in a blowjob, then anal sex, then vaginal, than the whole scene, because we can see those three scenes mentioned in any order and fantasize better!

Toyloli Wrote:I've said I'm a touch typist in this thread before. That literally means I can type with my eyes closed. :lol:

Me too ;) And I liked your scenes. Quiz will look at this and say what he thinks about.

As for the toads, they are usually in grey castles, but why not? I can add some in the airships, dirty and some even naked, going away of the prison happy and making Peach slip down ;)
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Toyloli » Mon Apr 01, 2013 6:17 am

PPS; What order/worlds/world themes are the bosses in again ?
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Mon Apr 01, 2013 6:30 am

Toyloli Wrote:PPS: What order/worlds/world themes are the bosses in again ?

As said on Page1, Game Mechanics:

World 1: Mushroom Kingdom -> Boss: Larry
World 2 (desert): Dry Dry Desert -> Boss: Morton
World 3 (subcon - SMB2): Subcon Kingdom -> Boss: Wendy
World 4 (forest): Boggly Forest -> Boss: Iggy
World 5 (water): Delfino Beach -> Boss: Lemmy
World 6 (ice) : Flurry Hills -> Boss: Roy
World 7 (sky): Cuddle Clouds -> Boss: Ludwig
World 8 (bowser): Dark Land (Bowser's Kingdom). Bowser
The Moon (we can call World 9). -> Boss: Sir Grodus (he's back!)

A note above: Hmmm why not putting Roy in Subcon? Subcon is... a more kid land, fantasy, etc, and Roy has a pink color, and enemies/other bosses can argue he's gay (again, not a problem for me), even being straight, so something to brainstorm.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Toyloli » Mon Apr 01, 2013 6:51 am

Cherries.....

I heard others report this occasionally too on other levels.
For me, level 3-1, I played through using the tigress outfit replacing all clothes first time, second time on default setting. On both occasions I got a poison mushroom and passed through the door completely naked.
Then game shows this and freezes.
It did not however freeze on the one time I went through with clothing on. This run was also the run where I didn't lay any shyguys.

While we're on it. Each run I also picked up and used the Fire Princess dress, but fireballs and veggies aren't killing them for some reason.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Mon Apr 01, 2013 6:55 am

Toyloli Wrote:Cherries.....For me, level 3-1, I played through using the tigress outfit replacing all clothes first time, second time on default setting. On both occasions I got a poison mushroom and passed through the door completely naked. Then game shows this and freezes.

I'll check.
EDIT: Cannot reproduce (1.9.8, uploaded minutes ago).
- Started the level 3-1
- Fucked 1 time
- Taken the poison.
Peach finished the level.
Is the problem ocurring ONLY in this level? Did you load a saved game?

Toyloli Wrote:While we're on it. Each run I also picked up and used the Fire Princess dress, but fireballs and veggies aren't killing them for some reason.

To which enemy is that happening?? Only shygus?
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Toyloli » Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:04 am

Yes, shyguys are not being killed by anything but stomping.

As for order, My main thought is that - we've all Seen Morton already. So I have no quams with swapping him for someone else.
As I said in my last script though, after being led to believe one of the Koopalings has Mario, I would imagine Peach would start by going to people she thought would have a Reason for wanting him.
So why not Roy second.

Peach: Larry, Roy, Wendy - any one of them could be trying to sleep with him! *humph*
Peach: Okay, Maybe Iggy or Lemmy, they both like to experiment, or have tried to capture him before!

Then one of them explains politely "Princess, dear. Bowser has hm. He just wanted to buy time, have you enjoyed this wild goose chase? Cause now I intend to turkey slap you"
(Or whatever. Most probably not those words... Although I could imagine Iggy saying that maybe.)

Edit: There was no loading.
On all three tries I used the cheat to reach world three. I started level 3-1 while partially dressed. Picked up a fire-flower, and went through trying not to get done. On each occasion I tried to shoot shyguys with veggies or fireballs.
Two times, I got caught by shyguys, and the poison mushroom. On those tries it froze, and I reloaded the page.
The time I got through clean without being caught by anything, and wearing the fire princess dress I got out fine.

I have no had this happen on other levels that I am aware of - but I remember Krystal reporting this glitch once and being unable to reproduce.
Sorry I can't be more helpful.

Edit: Actually one thought, when I did get caught be enemies it was two or three times, but I'm not sure I remember seeing all the scenes. Perhaps it's something to do with the later scenes. [shrugs]
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby MPLDAM9919 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:07 am

The "Exit" button in the outfit menu is not working. It won't do a thing.

Toyloli Wrote:As for order, My main thought is that - we've all Seen Morton already. So I have no quams with swapping him for someone else.
As I said in my last script though, after being led to believe one of the Koopalings has Mario, I would imagine Peach would start by going to people she thought would have a Reason for wanting him.
So why not Roy second.

Peach: Larry, Roy, Wendy - any one of them could be trying to sleep with him! *humph*
Peach: Okay, Maybe Iggy or Lemmy, they both like to experiment, or have tried to capture him before!

Then one of them explains politely "Princess, dear. Bowser has hm. He just wanted to buy time, have you enjoyed this wild goose chase? Cause now I intend to turkey slap you"
(Or whatever. Most probably not those words... Although I could imagine Iggy saying that maybe.)

Why? Why won't one of the Koopalings want Mario for sexual pleasure? OK. Maybe Wendy would want him but that's bedsides the point! Maybe Roy's story is that the kingdom made up this rumor that's he's gay and it's untrue. It's quite possible.


Also, Ivan and Quiz, did you guys get my scripts and will you guys PM me about your thoughts of them later? Thanks!
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Toyloli » Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:19 am

MPLDAM9919 Wrote:The "Exit" button in the outfit menu is not working. It won't do a thing.

Why? Why won't one of the Koopalings want Mario for sexual pleasure? OK. Maybe Wendy would want him but that's bedsides the point! Maybe Roy's story is that the kingdom made up this rumor that's he's gay and it's untrue. It's quite possible.


Also, Ivan and Quiz, did you guys get my scripts and will you guys PM me about your thoughts of them later? Thanks!


If I had my way, each time Peach got to an airship the koopaling would be doing something strange or perverted or just plain wicked to Mario (Molesting, spanking, tickle torture, making him watch reruns of Happy Days) and when she turned up some flying things would take Mario away.

But I don't think anyone would approve that ;)
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby coolness32 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 8:12 am

Toyloli Wrote:I've said I'm a touch typist in this thread before. That literally means I can type with my eyes closed. :lol:


So have you ever fallen asleep at the computer with word open and saw that you were typing while you were sleeping?

I also liked the scenes you came up with.

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Yes, twice as long. It can be cut in half (those big scenes) because when we see two, three, four times, it becomes boring, and we cant imagine different scenes in our minds. Its easier to imagine Peach getting screwed up in a blowjob, then anal sex, then vaginal, than the whole scene, because we can see those three scenes mentioned in any order and fantasize better!


I know this would get repetitive boss after boss, ave you ever considered the only way to defeat the bosses is to make them orgasm? What popped into my head was that to do a virgin run, you have to beat the bosses by jumping on their head, but that isn't enough to knock them out, it stuns them and then Peach would have to give them a handjob (To keep her virginity while defeating them). If she doesn't do this by the time the stun wears off, then they are unstunned and she has to stun them again. This would make the virgin scenes easy to come up with because they would all be almost the same things. This only works though if the bosses instantly take Peach's virginity if she loses to them.

Toyloli Wrote:If I had my way, each time Peach got to an airship the koopaling would be doing something strange or perverted or just plain wicked to Mario (Molesting, spanking, tickle torture, making him watch reruns of Happy Days) and when she turned up some flying things would take Mario away.

But I don't think anyone would approve that ;)


This is interesting!!! After she beats the boss, she finds out that they weren't doing those things to Mario...it was just a toad wearing a Mario outfit!!! I'm not sure what the plans are for toad scenes and when and where those occur, but these toads could beg for a sexual favor. If Peach is a virgin then she gives them a handjob or any other non virginity taking sexual actions. Whore Peach straight up has sex with them...while they are still chained up! Bam! toad scene setup!
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Mon Apr 01, 2013 8:54 am

Fixed shyguys (now they can be popped out with fireballs/veggies) and Tail attack no more making her tail disappear.
I will only check further bugs up to 10h from now.[/b]

MPLDAM9919 Wrote:Also, Ivan and Quiz, did you guys get my scripts and will you guys PM me about your thoughts of them later? Thanks!

Yes, yesterday, but I was really busy doing my homework, preparing my work in C programming, and tons of other things. I dont know yet how I've got power to make 2 levels. Then your script can wait a little bit. Quiz received it too and he will be checking.

coolness32 Wrote:If a virgin run, you have to beat the bosses by jumping on their head, but that isn't enough to knock them out, it stuns them and then Peach would have to give them a handjob (To keep her virginity while defeating them). If she doesn't do this by the time the stun wears off, then they are unstunned and she has to stun them again. This would make the virgin scenes easy to come up with because they would all be almost the same things. This only works though if the bosses instantly take Peach's virginity if she loses to them.

Interesting but I would need to create a 'library' of very small scenes, so the player will be stroking his dick, then in another small scene, Peach is leading his hand towards her pussy (in order to make he likes it, then stunning then), etc, but REALLY, It's more expected for me to include that feature only when the game is complete.

Toyloli Wrote:If I had my way, each time Peach got to an airship the koopaling would be doing something strange or perverted or just plain wicked to Mario (Molesting, spanking, tickle torture, making him watch reruns of Happy Days) and when she turned up some flying things would take Mario away. But I don't think anyone would approve that ;)

Exacly! Side scenes (Mario getting spanked) as well as other 'non related' ones could be made after the game is complete, along with 'What If scenes' (I prefer to call 'MAKE her do it!'). Its like the player is forcing Peach to do a given thing. So does Mario.

coolness32 Wrote:This is interesting!!! After she beats the boss, she finds out that they weren't doing those things to Mario...it was just a toad wearing a Mario outfit!!!

Stop right here! The concept is clear. Mario IS kidnapped. But we dont know how well he is there. We might discover he is held in a very dark place, alone.
So, in the END battle (Bowser!), Mario should appear in the end once Peach beats the enemy, either being a whore already (so its just a matter to fuck until making them all into a very deep sleep), OR stomping on him in a virgin run, then she can marry Mario.

So she can get a gameover depending on the situation: e.g. she being a virgin and they taking her before the stomping.
I dont want to make Mario cry, etc. He might escape, actually, as that ending will show up tons of koopas and minions to JUST GIVE a reason of this type of gameover.
As I've said, all endings will be a 'nice one'. So Peach will be 'tenderly' fucked in the prison until being a whore, while liking it so bad. GAMEOVER.

If she's already a whore, the fight scene might be easier for her (but the ending will be a dirty one, for those who like an easier XXX), like Morton (if you stomp him, you win. If you fuck him, you win).
So Mario NEEDS to be kidnapped.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Darthan » Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:10 am

coolness32 Wrote:So have you ever fallen asleep at the computer with word open and saw that you were typing while you were sleeping?

I actually knew a guy that would text in his sleep. Never believed him when he told me until I saw him pick up his phone while he was asleep and text, I think it turned out to be his grandmother, and then just drop his phone on himself.

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Interesting but I would need to create a 'library' of very small scenes, so the player will be stroking his dick, then in another small scene, Peach is leading his hand towards her pussy (in order to make he likes it, then stunning then), etc, but REALLY, I MAY put that feature when the game is complete.

I think it should just stay that you either fuck them or beat them to get by. Adding the ability to stun them and then get a special scene in order to win as a virgin seems kinda silly and make something that will likely already be difficult, for the player, even more so.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Toyloli » Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:50 am

Darthan Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:So have you ever fallen asleep at the computer with word open and saw that you were typing while you were sleeping?

I actually knew a guy that would text in his sleep. Never believed him when he told me until I saw him pick up his phone while he was asleep and text, I think it turned out to be his grandmother, and then just drop his phone on himself.


I've never done that but there are times I've been chatting late at night on skype or such and been so tired. Then the next day I don't actually remember the conversation. It's kinda, you do it during that point when your not awake, but not totally asleep either.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Mon Apr 01, 2013 1:21 pm

Toyloli Wrote:And yeah using the controversial Royness as an example:
(on arrival trigger hitbox)

Virgin
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Peach: What have you done with Mario? I know you like him, you have him don't you!
Roy: W-What! I'm not like that! I changed my shell and all!
Peach: I find that hard to believe...
Roy: I Tell you I don't know where your plumber is!
Peach: Everyone at the Palace talks about it!
Roy: Why You...
( Edit; I kinda imagine him pulling a rocket launcher out his shell at this point. Ka-click! Bwooom. Peach Epic dodge! Then rush and strike.)
FightFork (On catch, continue)

Roy: You think This is gay?
(Roy picks the princess up and rubs her against his penis)
Peach: Hey, Stop this. You're not fooling anyone!
Roy: This is my Manhood! and it's about to go up your Royal Highness thanks to this!
( Roy proceeds to pound Peachyness' holes. it should be pretty rough, with him holding her in the air and moving her on his penis instead of moving it in and out of her.)


Slut
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Peach: There you are, Oh my (Peach notices his waving penis)
Peach: I have a bone to er, pick with you! Where's my meat... I mean man!
Roy: You, huh? Oh... Mario... I wouldn't know, I'm in the middle of subdueing a kingdom here!
Peach: I know you cum, um... Oh to hell with this!
Roy: What?
(Peach walks up to him and starts fondling him.
Peach: I'm going to Squeeze the answers out of you!
Roy: Wait (on handjob), Princess (on Boobjob), Damnit! (On Blowjob) This is why I hate Women!
Peach: Come on, (Mounting) all you're siblings wanted a piece of this!
Roy: You're as Bad as my Sister, you know that?
(Roy begins to grudgingly do it with peach )


Edit: When he finally cums it should be once, a one shot wonder with a massive payout. Then he collapses, and Peach kinda pokes him and goes;
"Gee, he tired out quickly. so you really don't have Mario huh?"
Then she rescues the Toads and they tell her where to go next.

Well, the Toad was going to be rescued after castles only, right? Not after an airship. It will just feature Peach falling down, landing in the palace and receiving the key up her royal bum, if I am not mistaken.

Also, please do not swear in your scripts. And can you tell me why Roy 'grudgingly' has sex with Peach?

MPLDAM9919 Wrote:Also, Ivan and Quiz, did you guys get my scripts and will you guys PM me about your thoughts of them later? Thanks!

Yes MPLDAM, I received your scripts. It's going to take a while to check though, so don't bet on seeing them again any time soon.

I decided that I can show you the next comic in The Adventures of the MiM PUT Team:
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

TAOTMPT 2.png
If you followed the thread long enough, you might get the underlying joke.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Toyloli » Mon Apr 01, 2013 1:52 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Well, the Toad was going to be rescued after castles only, right? Not after an airship. It will just feature Peach falling down, landing in the palace and receiving the key up her royal bum, if I am not mistaken.

Also, please do not swear in your scripts. And can you tell me why Roy 'grudgingly' has sex with Peach?

Yes MPLDAM, I received your scripts. It's going to take a while to check though, so don't bet on seeing them again any time soon.

I decided that I can show you the next comic in The Adventures of the MiM PUT Team:
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

TAOTMPT 2.png


Wait, swear? I didn't swear did it? I think the worse I did was cuss 'Damnit'. Or was that directed at MPLDAM9919
As for grudginly, left up to you. What I basically meant is that he isn't as aggressive if Peach is agressive, he just kinda goes along with whatever she does.
You can chalk it up to gayness, being offguard, disliking pushy women, embarrasment, whatever you want. I was leaving it open on purpose.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Mon Apr 01, 2013 1:59 pm

Toyloli Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Well, the Toad was going to be rescued after castles only, right? Not after an airship. It will just feature Peach falling down, landing in the palace and receiving the key up her royal bum, if I am not mistaken.

Also, please do not swear in your scripts. And can you tell me why Roy 'grudgingly' has sex with Peach?

Yes MPLDAM, I received your scripts. It's going to take a while to check though, so don't bet on seeing them again any time soon.

I decided that I can show you the next comic in The Adventures of the MiM PUT Team:
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

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Wait, swear? I didn't swear did it? I think the worse I did was cuss 'Damnit'. Or was that directed at MPLDAM9919
As for grudginly, left up to you. What I basically meant is that he isn't as aggressive if Peach is agressive, he just kinda goes along with whatever she does.
You can chalk it up to gayness, being offguard, disliking pushy women, embarrasment, whatever you want. I was leaving it open on purpose.

Yeah, I meant the word 'damnit'. I don't like using these words in the game, they'll only say words like fuck in the 'having sex-way'.
But no biggie, I can change that easily.

The way I got that was (here we go again) that it seemed he just didn't like women in general in the slut script. So I thought you made him a little less interested in women than the other koopalings.

Did you see the comic? I'd like to see some more feedback.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.8 (mar 30/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Mon Apr 01, 2013 2:04 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Well, the Toad was going to be rescued after castles only, right? Not after an airship. It will just feature Peach falling down, landing in the palace and receiving the key up her royal bum, if I am not mistaken.

I'll end up making a voting poll. Sorry but I'm really interested to see some toads in SOME airships, as we WONT be having a gray castle in EVERY world, and it makes sense as toads are also captured by the evil (and this make sense since tons of airships reached the castle in the beginning). The 'toads slipping her down' would be like they're so happy and wanting to get out of the airship ASAP, sometimes like a small crowd. And this make me remember of TTYD (sunken ship level). Airship are ships, right? So, not a 'non Mario universe' feature.

(BTW I missed rescuing toads in SMB3. It was so 'plotless' to have empty airships, with those wrench guys at most).

QuizmasterBos Wrote:I decided that I can show you the next comic in The Adventures of the MiM PUT Team:

Well done. I laugh. Asian is a bit busy for some months.
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