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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.2 (nov 15/12)

Postby 肉まんマン » Wed Nov 21, 2012 5:37 am

Sorry to be mean but the new dress looks like total crap. :/
It doesn`t make any sense to can the clearly better looking one.

And her new face is also terrible. She doesn`t even have lips anymore. Senior citizen have fuller lips than her! How does removing a bodypart make it better? Are you going to remove her eyelids or earlobes next? And her eyes make her look like a loli. Peach isn`t 12!
She used to be hot, now she`s not even cute. She`s meh.

Oh and the hair! Oh god... the hair.... What the hell happened? It`s yellow! Peach is supposed to be a blonde, not a yellow (whatever that is). And the shape is just bad looking.

With each successive update she looks worse and worse. Why are you doing this? It`s a serious question. The ``updates`` are clearly downgrades.
Could you please bring back the original model (like in blargh`s version) as the 3rd option? It would be INSANE not to considering how bad the new one looks.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.2 (nov 15/12)

Postby Morgoth88 » Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:05 am

Could have just asked him to bring an option for Blargh's version as well, didn't have to rip his work apart with nothing constructive to say. I think he is doing a fantastic job with this game and his updates.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.2 (nov 15/12)

Postby TheBlackKing » Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:42 am

I agree with the post before mine; I like the old peach better than the new one. Don't get me wrong I am a huge fan of the game and the updates that you have made but the old peach is way sexier than the new one. Can you make her available again?
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.2 (nov 15/12)

Postby MPLDAM9919 » Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:13 am

肉まんマン Wrote:Sorry to be mean but the new dress looks like total crap. :/
It doesn`t make any sense to can the clearly better looking one.

And her new face is also terrible. She doesn`t even have lips anymore. Senior citizen have fuller lips than her! How does removing a bodypart make it better? Are you going to remove her eyelids or earlobes next? And her eyes make her look like a loli. Peach isn`t 12!
She used to be hot, now she`s not even cute. She`s meh.

Oh and the hair! Oh god... the hair.... What the hell happened? It`s yellow! Peach is supposed to be a blonde, not a yellow (whatever that is). And the shape is just bad looking.

With each successive update she looks worse and worse. Why are you doing this? It`s a serious question. The ``updates`` are clearly downgrades.
Could you please bring back the original model (like in blargh`s version) as the 3rd option? It would be INSANE not to considering how bad the new one looks.

Ummm....what are you talking about? The new dress and model is great. I don't understand why you think each update is getting worse and worse. It's getting better and better.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.2 (nov 15/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:14 am

yurinicolau Wrote:Me too! This was just the first part!!! There should at least three scenes more

Thanks, I've kept as a TXT. You can be sure of that, Morton and other Bosses should act like that (Peach being able to stomp, but if she fails so, she will struggle before the 'doomed' sex) ;)

肉まんマン Wrote:Sorry to be mean but the new dress looks like total crap. :/ It doesn`t make any sense to can the clearly better looking one.

Interesting enough, you were the first to say that in almost 20 days. But its nice to see other opinions. Well, the old dress (your 'clearly better looking one') has more than 4000 curves, making the game slow. I can remake it, like the fire dress, and put it as a new dress for those who like. Sounds better? ;) But low priority.

肉まんマン Wrote:And her new face is also terrible. She doesn`t even have lips anymore. Senior citizen have fuller lips than her! How does removing a bodypart make it better? Are you going to remove her eyelids or earlobes next? And her eyes make her look like a loli. Peach isn`t 12! She used to be hot, now she`s not even cute. She`s meh.

Thanks for your help. I understand you. But it is, actually, the contrary. People seem to enjoy the new model (at least so far). Severe brainstorming and design art were made. Sorry but old Peach may never come again because it uses a lot more points/curves (yes, more CPU intensive). And her head had tons of errors. Old Peach frontside wasn't cute.

To recall the changes between Peaches:

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Her new mouth uses the 'small lipstick style'. Its how Peach lips should be drawn. She's very known with them (its genuine to her).
As for her hair, only the ponytail was really changed. I can create a way to exchange this style. I may not revert it because, actually, the new ponytail is more related to Peach style, mostly Paper Peach, being more dense and detailed.
As for the color, more than 90% of Peach images (hentais, and even some games with her) features yellow hair. BUT. Its possible to let the hair with the color below (a rarer color but some people prefer). However I need more opinions in order to use a free time to work on a way to exchange these two colors in the game.

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I'll be awaiting opinions in regard to that. But I need to keep working on new features.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby cottog » Wed Nov 21, 2012 8:10 am

Not to be a lame-o, and sorry if this has been reported previously, but using the "up" movement button no longer lets Peach leave at least the first toad house you can enter. Entered and exited the rooms in the castle with no issue, and climbed the ladder and entered/exited the top room of the tower with no issue, but that first Toad house is now a trap. Dunno if other people have experienced this, as I said.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:33 pm

cottog Wrote:Not to be a lame-o, and sorry if this has been reported previously, but using the "up" movement button no longer lets Peach leave at least the first toad house you can enter. Entered and exited the rooms in the castle with no issue, and climbed the ladder and entered/exited the top room of the tower with no issue, but that first Toad house is now a trap. Dunno if other people have experienced this, as I said.

BUG confirmed. Fixed it. Sorry about the delay, But your message only appeared here more than 3 hours later.

TheBlackKing Wrote:I agree with the post before mine; I like the old peach better than the new one. Don't get me wrong I am a huge fan of the game and the updates that you have made but the old peach is way sexier than the new one. Can you make her available again?

Well, thats people like you that can build up a request and show me more people really prefer the old model. So I need to know that clearly in order to see if its useful to make the old character return (Playshapes Peach), even if the only difference is her face, eyes, mouth and hair. And I would need to add old Fire Peach too.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby AsianP3rsuas10n » Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:59 pm

>_> you might as well have a poll for Peach too while your at it.

肉まんマン Wrote:Sorry to be mean but the new dress looks like total crap. :/
It doesn`t make any sense to can the clearly better looking one.

And her new face is also terrible. She doesn`t even have lips anymore. Senior citizen have fuller lips than her! How does removing a bodypart make it better? Are you going to remove her eyelids or earlobes next? And her eyes make her look like a loli. Peach isn`t 12!
She used to be hot, now she`s not even cute. She`s meh.

Oh and the hair! Oh god... the hair.... What the hell happened? It`s yellow! Peach is supposed to be a blonde, not a yellow (whatever that is). And the shape is just bad looking.



And Dude if you are going to criticize please do it appropriately. Using words like crap, terrible, and bringing senior citizens into this is not neccessary. Not to mention the fact that you have yet to give us a way to make it look better besides the usual "Use the old version"
Ivan is trying his best to make the game run faster while giving you the same experience so give him a break. Try not to completely destroy all the hardwork he's put in. But thanks for the feedback anyways.


@yuri
I love run and rape games! Well some...mostly Gorepetes unfinished version. That one was actually really fun...if he only finished it :(
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:05 pm

- There are requests asking me to make Larry and Iggy (koopalings) colors darker. I'll do that soon. BTW, they are not in the game (yet).
- Version 1.8.3 (to be uploaded again) with the new Nurse outfit. Pill powerup already added to a given area of Peach Castle (yet to be uploaded). 'Hall of Pipes' will also be added. Those three pipes of Level 1-1 will be removed soon.
- Some adjustments to Peach vest.
- Possible ability to disable hand gloves when Peach is a nurse. This will only work if you set 'gloves = NONE' before taking the pill powerup.

AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:@yuri
I love run and rape games! Well some...mostly Gorepetes unfinished version. That one was actually really fun...if he only finished it :(

Hey, what's up in the Empire of Britannia? ;)
Its possible to implement a run of rape in MIM, but:
1) it will be added up as a mini game / special level
2) peach will run right, stop, or run left. Enemies will come from the left area, and they will run too. Some enemies can also appear in the right area of the screen.
3) Peach can stomp on them
4) if a given enemy touches Peach, she will fall (like 'bumping by a stone') and enemies will execute a random sex scene (no matter if Peach already has fucked them or not before); Clothes shredding will work.
5) after a random time (1 to 3 minutes), she reaches the castle and the screen fades in (black), then, end of level.
(this is low priority).
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For Morton's scene

Postby yurinicolau » Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:13 pm

ivanaedler Wrote:[...] should the first morton scene be only a blowjob, then Peach is defeated? I think a full sex scene can be there, and I think she can try to resist in other scenes (like fuck 1, fuck 2)... if you look closer, Morton fucks her ass first. So , more chances for her to flee or fight.

Me too! :D This was just the first part!!! There should be at least three scenes more:
1) Vaginal sex (DONE!)
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Morton: "Yesss.. My seed is inside you... Can you feel it? You are MY BITCH NOW! It's time to surrender that TIGHT little PUSSY of yours! HA HA HA!!! " [Morton grab her legs]
Peach thinks: "Oooh... God... I can't resist him... So much hot cum inside me..." [Morton begin rubbing his cock on her clit simulating the fucking movement (his dick goes till her breasts and go back to the clit, over and over again)]

Peach: "Oooh!"

Morton: "Yesss.. You like it, don't you? I know you are eager to feel my FAT COCK deep inside you... Stretching your pussy so hard that you'll beg me to stop! "
Peach: "Oooh! Please... *moan* No... Nooo..." [Peach bites her lower lips in pleasure]

Morton: [Morton start to prod her pussy (trying to penetrate)]"Yesss... Like this... "

Peach: " *Oooh! No... *moan* Nooo..." [b][Morton's cock is almost penetration her]

[Morton's cock gets in, Peach is wide-eyed and bitting her lower lips]

Peach: "Ooohh God! It's so BIG! Oooh! GOD!!![Peach closes her eyes, it's hurting a little, she is still bitting her lips]

Morton: [Morton start penetrating her over and over again, very slowly] "Oooh... Yesss... Feel it inside you... It's stretching every inch of your tight little pussy, isn't it? "[/b]

Peach: "Ooohh God! *moan* Oooh GOD!!!"

[Morton is doing slow sex with Peach]

Morton: "[i]You are loving this, aren't you? SAY IT! SAY THAT YOU LOVE MY COCK!!!
"

Peach: "I... moan* Oooh... [Peach blushes] Love your cock!"

[Morton start fucking her a little faster (normal speed) and pounding her a the end of each shove]

Peach: "Oooh! *moan*"

Morton: "Who is your BOSS? SAY IT!"

Peach: "*moan* You... *moan* You are! *moan* You are my boss!!!"

[Morton starts to get rough, he is to strongly pounding her at the end of each shove]

Morton: "FEEL MY POWER!!!"
Peach: "Oooh!!! *lots of moans*" [Peach is cumming]

Morton: "Yesss... Cum on my COCK bitch! HA HA HA!!!"

[Morton is about to cum]

Morton: "Now... FEEL MY HOT LOAD SPANKING DEEP INSIDE YOU!" [Morton starts cumming]

Peach: "OH!!! SO MANY WARM GUSHES! *lots of moans* Ooooh!!!" [Peach is cumming again]

[Morton takes his cock out of her pussy and release her legs, a weak squirt of cum spills at her belly when his cock comes out and then a even weaker one at her tights]

2) Anal sex (DONE!)
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Peach thinks: "Oooh God! My pussy is so sore right now..."

[Peach start's to get up]

Peach: "Ok... That was... Huh... Unexpected..."

[Morton pushes her and she fall on all fours]

Morton: [he puts one hand over her back to prevent her from getting up]"HA HA HA!!! This is far from over!!!"

[Peach looks very suprised/scared]
Peach: "Hey! What are you doing???"

Morton: "Shut up bitch! I'm gonna BREAK INTO that tight ass of yours!"

[Peach looks really scared]

Peach: "Oooh NO! PLEASE DON'T!!! NOT IN THE ASS!!! " [Morton starts prodding his cock uppon her butthole]

Peach: [Peach is doing a struggling face: Her eyes are closed and she is showing her teeth]"It's too BIG! PLEASE!!! YOU ARE GONNA RIP ME APART!!! "

[Morton start forcing harder his cock uppon Peach's ass, his cock is trembling because of the pressure]

Peach thinks: "Oh GOD! *struggle* SO MUCH *struggle* PRESSURE!!!"

[The penetration happens: Mortons ENTIRE cock gets into Peach's ass in a single movement]

[Peach's mouth is open and she is wide-eyed]

Peach: "..."

[Mortons holds his cock inside Peach's ass]

Morton: "YES!!! YOUR ASS IS MINE BITCH!"

Peach: "[She closes her eyes very strongly and tear come down] PLEASE TAKE OFF! PLEASE TAKE OFF!!! IT'S TOO BIG!!! IT'S TEARING MY ASS APART!!!"

[Morton takes off his cock of her ass and starts penetrating Peach's ass very slowly over and over again]

Morton: "Yesss... Just relax... And feel my cock breaking into your ass... YOU ARE MINE!!"

[Peach bites her lower lips and start enjoying it]

Peach: "..."

[Morton starts fucking Peach's ass deeper]

[Peach intensifies her face]

Morton: "Yesss... Feel my cock up your ass!"

Peach thinks: "Oooh... *moan* My ass is burning! *moan*"

[Morton grabs Peach's back hair and intensifies the shoves]

Morton: "Yesss... Let me BURN your cute little ASS APART... "

Morton: "I'm gonna CUM! Ooooh!!!" [Morton cums]

[Peach get wide-eyed at each hot gush]

[Morton takes his cock out of her sore ass and release her hair, a weak squirt of cum spills on her back when his cock comes out and then a even weaker one on her legs and feet]

3A) Boobjob and footjob (alternative if she isn't a slut nor a whore)
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

SOON!!! :mrgreen:

3B) Peach's hiding Morton (only if she has slut or whore achievement)
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

SOON!!! :mrgreen:
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Re: For Morton's scene

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:19 pm

yurinicolau Wrote:Me too! :D This was just the first part!!! There should be at least three scenes more:

Hey you dont need to 'up' your post, I've seen it hours ago ;) I like them. You know it's planned!
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About Peach's design

Postby yurinicolau » Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:37 pm

AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:>_> you might as well have a poll for Peach too while your at it.

Hey man no worry about that! I hope Ivan don't get mad with me to release this early but... :oops:
Inside information
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I was talking with him a while a go and we agreed the game to have more them just one Peach persona! There will be two more Peach's, bonus personas, unlocked by achievements! I'm currently working on Peach Castle design, here's a taste:
Peach Castle Design.jpg
I'm still working on her hair and arms though... :/
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肉まんマン Wrote:Sorry to be mean but the new dress looks like total crap. :/
It doesn`t make any sense to can the clearly better looking one.

And her new face is also terrible. She doesn`t even have lips anymore. Senior citizen have fuller lips than her! How does removing a bodypart make it better? Are you going to remove her eyelids or earlobes next? And her eyes make her look like a loli. Peach isn`t 12!
She used to be hot, now she`s not even cute. She`s meh.

Oh and the hair! Oh god... the hair.... What the hell happened? It`s yellow! Peach is supposed to be a blonde, not a yellow (whatever that is). And the shape is just bad looking.

About this guy... Well I've done a post as soon as I saw his post, but I I decided to delete it seconds later... The thing is that Ivan is a prettly straight up guy and a very gentle person and handled the situation very professionally. But must say that I'm a bit worried about this guy, because I'm sure that if he accidentally bites his own tonge he would probably drop dead by the venom... :D

AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:And Dude if you are going to criticize please do it appropriately. Using words like crap, terrible, and bringing senior citizens into this is not neccessary. Not to mention the fact that you have yet to give us a way to make it look better besides the usual "Use the old version"
Ivan is trying his best to make the game run faster while giving you the same experience so give him a break. Try not to completely destroy all the hardwork he's put in. But thanks for the feedback anyways.

Very well pointed Asian! ;)

AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:@yuri
I love run and rape games! Well some...mostly Gorepetes unfinished version. That one was actually really fun...if he only finished it :(

True... But we have MIM!!! And we are actually help to build up the game! How cool is that??? :mrgreen:
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Re: About Peach's design

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:59 pm

yurinicolau Wrote:
AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:>_> you might as well have a poll for Peach too while your at it.

Hey man no worry about that! I hope Ivan don't get mad with me to release this early but... :oops:

Nice one!! And I like her large lips! But hmmm....just some things:
1) her left eye (the bigger one) needs to be smaller a bit, and a tad moved downwards
2) I think her stomatch and chest could be larger (not the hips! Her hips are perfect!)
3) Some work on her body in general (add more shadows and a bit of highlight, mostly on her hips area)
4) You said you're working right now on her hair. Her front bangs are a bit tilted / uneven.

And a thing to clarify:
You know I'm open to add new Peaches in the game. But! We require an almost exactly Peach dimensions, in order to receive the same clothing dimensions. A bit of 'fat' here and there, and, of course, a different head style may suffit without problems. But a smaller Peach, for example, can throw problems. It thats the case, All different Peaches still can be inside the game, no problem, but as a different animation/pictures, maybe in a bonus area.

I really would like to build more games using different Peach styles, but we will need to make all her clothing and , if we reuse any sex scene from MIM AE, each frame needs to be readapted (head moved lower, enemy penis moved higher, etc). If there are designers ready to make that, I can make (in a lower priority) another one (using AS3), like Peachy, made by Yuri, Soloid et al ;)
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Nov 21, 2012 5:44 pm

WOAH! Let's stop bad ideas from continuing, right away:
yurinicolau Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:[...] will Peach just walk up to them and kick them in the balls? (guess that wouldn't work on Wendy... [...]

I may have an idea for that! First look how this game action plays on: http://www.funny-base.com/games/lok-rush-revamp.html

So Ivan, what do you think about the the boss fights work like that? If the player don't "resist" pressing the sequence at the right time the boss fucks Peach! LITERALLY! :mrgreen: It may be directional buttons, no need to make things complicated...

What you're talking about it a quick-time event. In which a player out of nowhere has to press a button quickly otherwise something bad happens (usually dying).
Now, the problem is that nobody likes quick-time events. You'd expect times like this to be nice, you're unzipping your pants, take out your dick and start stroking it and suddenly... FAILED! I don't think this'll work well. Please rethink this, Ivan.

ivanaedler Wrote:Ok, so I've changed Toadsworth scene now (but not yet uploaded).
I just want now a new dialog with Peach, when she sucks his dick (of course I'll use the former animation) ;) Its nice to see it. But it will be placed in toadsworth room, when Peach goes there. What would be a escuse for Peach to suck his dick? Quiz? Yuri? I would like to re-use the animation (Peach will talk then go right to his dick). Maybe Toadsworth says before: 'Peach, quickly! Bend down to my knees!'

About the Toadworth scene: You could simply use the relieving stress thing again.
Peach comes into his room:
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

P: Toadworth, what's wrong?
TW: So... much... stress... Need... relief!
P: Oh my goodness! [ANIM: Puts dick in mouth]
TW: ...
P: [ANIM: Deepthroat] THOUGHTBUBBLE: I'll need to help him quick. Hopefully this is good enough.
TW: OOOH~![ANIM: TW cums]
P: Toadworth? Are you okay now.
TW: Yes. Thank you princess. I was getting worried. Thank you for helping me.

Some more text will be after this, but I decided to show this first.

Ivanaedler Wrote:After this, i DO want to make a third animation, using my 'rush hour' to do those animations. It will be Toadsworth playing with her pussy in his bed. Maybe to start the sex teaching. It does not need 'so many brainstorming' because I can change it later, or add/edit dialogues. I may need only a plot for that to happen.

Try making the animations first. I can then make some proper dialog for you.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:24 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Now, the problem is that nobody likes quick-time events. You'd expect times like this to be nice, you're unzipping your pants, take out your dick and start stroking it and suddenly... FAILED! I don't think this'll work well. Please rethink this, Ivan.

I will. I dont want to punish the player, although I want a bit more challenging boss time. ;) We can make the 'stomp or sex' though. If Peach fails to stomp him on time, and Morton/Larry/Iggy and others touches her first, she loses any virginity she had before. If the player want to try again, he will load a saved game.

QuizmasterBos Wrote:About the Toadworth scene: You could simply use the relieving stress thing again.
Peach comes into his room:

Yes yes but... I would like to re-use that animation. You know, Peach suddently bends and swallow his dick. Maybe make an animation of him pushing Peach dress down, in order to slip her down? Or to make him order her (Peach, please bend over here, now)?.

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Try making the animations first. I can then make some proper dialog for you.

Yes but its better to create a script, so I dont need to edit the animation later. Trust me, its harder to edit something that create from scratch. Thats because I have to move the frames along (sometimes 40 layers at once, each one being a body part).

Something simple but interesting like:

1) peach laids in the bed
2) Toadsworth approaches her and open her legs
3) Peach says 'W...what?'
4) Toadsworth: 'well my dear, I think now its time to teach you something...'
5) Peach looks at him with crossed eyes.
6) toadsworth: Please dont move....

And so on.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:52 pm

ivanaedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:About the Toadworth scene: You could simply use the relieving stress thing again.
Peach comes into his room:

Yes yes but... I would like to re-use that animation. You know, Peach suddently bends and swallow his dick. Maybe make an animation of him pushim Peach dress down, in order to let her down? Or to order her (Peach, please bend over here, now)?

But you can use the animation for the most part. Just add in an extra two textbubbles before Peach sucks him and the scene should play out, right?
Let me check, I'll update this later.
EDIT: Okay, you said you wanted the scene to be the same animation as it is now?! Well check out this comparison.

P:Good morning Toadsworth...
TW:Princess, please put it in your mouth [ANIM: Puts dick in mouth]
P:Heyy no don't [ANIM: Deepthroat]
TW:Our castle is under siege [ANIM: Move up and down]
P:You want me to save my kingdom [ANIM: TW cums]
TW:Well my dear... [ANIM: TW falls down to the ground?]
P:YOU WANT ME TO FUCK THEM...
TW:But you must....
(Scene's done)

P: Toadworth, what's wrong?
TW: So... much... stress... Need... relief!
P: Oh my goodness! [ANIM: Puts dick in mouth]
TW: ...[ANIM: Deepthroat]
P: [ANIM: Deepthroat] THOUGHTBUBBLE: I'll need to help him quick. Hopefully this is good enough.[ANIM: Move up and down]
TW: OOOH~![ANIM: TW cums]
P: Toadworth? Are you okay now.[ANIM: TW falls down to the ground?]
TW: Yes. Thank you princess. I was getting worried. Thank you for helping me.
(scene's done)

They're practically the same. I just changed the location of the non-animation lines a bit. Based off version 1.8.2 by the way.
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QuizmasterBos Wrote:Try making the animations first. I can then make some proper dialog for you.

Yes but its better to create a script, so I dont need to edit the animation later. Trust me, its harder to edit something that create from scratch. Thats because I have to move the frames along (sometimes 40 layers at once, each one being a body part).

Something simple but interesting like:

1) peach laids in the bed
2) Toadsworth approaches her and open her legs
3) Peach says 'W...what?'
4) Toadsworth: 'well my dear, I think now its time to teach you something...'
5) Peach looks at him with crossed eyes.
6) toadsworth: Please dont move....

And so on.

I'll see what I can come up with. Just need to get a scene in my mind and go from there, right?
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:59 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:But you can use the animation for the most part. Just add in an extra two textbubbles before Peach sucks him and the scene should play out, right?
Let me check, I'll update this later.

Ok thanks! I think me, you, Asian and Yuri can write down ideas, polish them, then create the scene. A bad habit is to make a scene right away, without a script.
A good reason Peach bends down could be what I've said above: 'Maybe make an animation of him pushing Peach dress down, in order to slip her down'

QuizmasterBos Wrote:I'll see what I can come up with. Just need to get a scene in my mind and go from there, right?

Ok! This one is another example of an interesting scene that needs some scripting in other for us to discuss it, just before making it. We can even decide if we are using peach backside or frontside. I also want to make a new view of her butt (in order for her to be like that below). So its possible to see her at this pose, or from her backside. Its like her actual butt, but with a more round surface (instead of her butt connected to her back without an outline).

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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:18 pm

ivanaedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:But you can use the animation for the most part. Just add in an extra two textbubbles before Peach sucks him and the scene should play out, right?
Let me check, I'll update this later.

Ok thanks! I think me, you, Asian and Yuri can write down ideas, polish them, then create the scene. A bad habit is to make a scene right away, without a script.
A good reason Peach bends down could be what I've said above: 'Maybe make an animation of him pushing Peach dress down, in order to slip her down'

Sure, I'll gladly cooperate. But are you saying that there needs to be an animation of Peach being pushed down in that scene (which I just created the lines for in my previous post? Or is it fine as is?

ivanaedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:I'll see what I can come up with. Just need to get a scene in my mind and go from there, right?

Ok! This one is another example of an interesting scene that needs some scripting in other for us to discuss it, just before making it. We can even decide if we are using peach backside or frontside. I also want to make a new view of her butt (in order for her to be like that below). So its possible to see her at this pose, or from her backside. Its like her actual butt, but with a more round surface (instead of her butt connected to her back without an outline).

Well first of, that's not Peach :lol: It's Rosalina from Super Mario Galaxy.

Are you planning to create sex scenes shown from different angles (like the forward facing one? That would be quite nice, this game can use a change of pace at times.

Want a good looking Peach butt? Check out what has recently been added to rule34:
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:24 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:But are you saying that there needs to be an animation of Peach being pushed down in that scene (which I just created the lines for in my previous post? Or is it fine as is?

I prefer her being pushed down :/ Even it its a bit more complex to animate (that is, I need to make the toadsworth walk forwards a bit, push her, then return to his previous position like 'jumping backwards').

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Well first of, that's not Peach :lol: It's Rosalina from Super Mario Galaxy.

I know. Its only an example!

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Are you planning to create sex scenes shown from different angles (like the forward facing one? That would be quite nice, this game can use a change of pace at times.

Yes! But I may not make a way to see the same scene in different views, because I would need to create an entire different animation for the same scene.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8.3 (nov 21/12)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:44 pm

ivanaedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:But are you saying that there needs to be an animation of Peach being pushed down in that scene (which I just created the lines for in my previous post? Or is it fine as is?

I prefer her being pushed down :/ Even it its a bit more complex to animate (that is, I need to make the toadsworth walk forwards a bit, push her, then return to his previous position like 'jumping backwards').

Hmmm... that's going to be difficult. Since TW is small, he cannot possibly push her down. Isn't it better to let Peach initiate the sex?
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