QuizmasterBos Wrote:ivanaedler Wrote:Please check it: Updated.Also, remember when you said you wanted to maybe "mix" my, yuri's and Asian's plots?
Well, you can easily put Asian's "drunk" thing into my plot.
Being drunk makes you generally more aroused and willing, right? So, why don't you change the lunch to a dinner? There relaxing, eating food, drinking top-brand wine.
Then we cut to later, when they are inside Peach's bedroom. Peach and Mario are both drunk, airships appear, Mario leaves and Peach waits and falls asleep.
Since drunk people fall asleep quicker, that works well. Also, being drunk slows your reaction speed, making Mario easily catchable. Explains it well, don't you think?
That's pretty a good idea man!
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Oh! This rememinds me something... A while ago you said that since this game is a porn parody you didn't understand why the need to explain the reason that everyone wanna fuck Peach:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:The only thing I don't understand is that some feel the need to explain why the toads want to bang Peach! Peach is really hot and since this is a porn parody, it makes sense that the Toads want some of that. I find it a bit odd that this needs explaining. If you were there, wouldn't you get horny too, even without the aphrodisiac?
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Mmm... The one word answer would be: IMMERSION. You know, Playshapes main idea was more like a porn parody, she fucks everything with no holding back! (
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nothing against that!) But Ivan's game has something different... He asked himself "
Why this have to be so straight action thing? Let's make it really tease the player, let's make it psychologicaly exciting! It's not about the act itself, it's about inocence and overcoming resistances, it's about seen her surrendering to her deepest desires! (But actually she will be surrendering to our desires!
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ivanaedler Wrote:THAT is actually my objective: Teasing. Foreplay. Expectation. No, no masturbation cloud, let's see it as a Kamek curse. Kamek may be working with Bowser now. They have evil plans already. The male aphrodisiac effect can explain why the toads are horny as well (like some of them being bottomless in the castle lounge). And explains why toadette is unnaffected (and a bit angry because of the naive actions Peach are going to do).
He is trying create something that is really plausible to happen at Kingdom Mushroom! So the less loose ends it has, the better!!!
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I mean, it's ok to think that everyone and even the Toads wanna fuck Peach, but at least for the Toad's it would be an impossible dream to come true, because they are her subordinates, she is their Princess afterall... If anyone can fuck their Princess, then it's not a really Peach's Castle, it's a Cabaret or whorehouse... All would became like Playshapes idea... So for this game main storyline work's out, we have to come up with some explanation for the Toads reckless and shameless behavior, don't you think? (some of then WILL balckmail Peach for sexual acts...
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Oh! And Ivan, sorry I didn't saw your early request about he TXT file!
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Toadsworth and Peach dialogue:Spoiler (click to show/hide):
TOADSWORTH: "
Oh! Your highness!! I was worried that this could have happened to you! Please go wash yourself before it's too late! I explain later! Go NOW!!!"
[She goes... Then when she comes back]:
TOADSWORTH: "I
'm really sorry about all that, I was worried that an incident like that could've happened to you! The Kingdom was being attacked and a strange bomb blowed off, them every male started to get... Huh... Crazy horny!"
PEACH:
[she puts one hand on her mouth and looks surprised]"
By the Holy Kingdom! That's why that Toads... Assaulted me!"
TOADSWORTH: "
Yes, your highness! And that's why I told you to wash yourself fast! [she lay down her hand and try to understand] Because I suspect that the sperm of the aflicted may have acquired the power to affect the females! So you should really avoid it or you will get crazy horny too! "PEACH:
[she looks confused] "
Wait... What do you mean?? Where is Mario???"
TOADSWORTH: "
Mario is missing, your highness! You are our only hope! You have to save the Kingdom and Mario!"
PEACH: "
Oh my Godness! But, wait... Why aren't you aroused like everyone else?"
TOADSWORTH: *Laughs* "
Oh, your highness... At my age the only thing that goes up is my reflux!"
[And they both laugh at the same time] *Laughs*
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