QuizmasterBos Wrote:Pretty good there Ivan. Is this meant to be in the game or is this work for your comic?
It will be in the game, in new portraits in some areas. Maybe in a hidden wall or in nursery room. Peach will see it and argue. If there are toads inside, they will say they dont know who put that portrait there without permission. As for the comic, at first I need to get used to animating and some more poses. I want to make Paper Peach first, with MIM AE eyes, or ARCON eyes. I can even make a better paper peach than the original (but I must not be so confident).
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Now, about the plot options. I'll probably sound like I am advertising my own plot (which I kind of am ). But there are some... odd bits about every plot point except mine.
For number 1: Mario crossdresses. Aside from being odd, how does Bowser or his minions mistake Mario for Peach?! Mario is like half Peach's size and he certainly looks different (haircolor, hairlength, mustache).
Bowser is in a hurry. You know, he failed since TTYD and other titles. He's slow, then he decided to take whoever Peach is, or at least appears to be her at a distance.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Number 1-2 has the same problem, but something else is odd as well. If Peach finds Mario's hat (somewhere outside the castle likely), how does she gets into the castle again with a good reason? She's already outside. That means you'd have to redo the opening bits to make Peach start outside, a lot of work if you ask me.
Peach will remain inside. Its Mario that goes outside (in all plot options). Anyway we can ignore the hat scene. Only Mario gets the dress powerup without purpose, due to stressful events that started to occur.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Number 2 is the food one. It is never implied in any Mario game that Mario can't stop eating (he does dream of fruit though in Super Mario Sunshine). Now if he goes out for food that's fine, except they LITERALLY JUST ATE! I think Mario and Peach went out for dinner and since they want to get "freaky" at sunset, that would mean that not much time has passed between the two scenes.
They didnt have dinner, but lunch! Then they remained in Peach castle, having a looong meeting about how they love each other, how Peach was so ashamed to admit this, and how sorry Mario was not declaring himself too.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Number 3 is by SexyBones. The cloud thing would need explaining. There isn't anything in the game right now that would explain the cloud, so that's a lot more work.
Why does jerking off uncontrollably make Mario easy to kidnap anyway? And as I said before, Bowser is right there, he would be stupid not to kidnap Peach.
Again, Peach is inside the castle. Mario sees the cloud and goes outside to protect the area. You know, he's always vigilant (ok, sometimes not, but Luigi is worse in that aspect). Mario starts to jerk off uncontrollably, really. He cannot stop. Bowser then decides to take Mario, because he knows Mushroom Kingdom will be unprotected now, and Peach may go to his castle eventually..
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Now that leaves mine. I'm not saying it's perfect and others can change it, as long as it works. If you got a better idea, just post it. It's just that I think mine connects well to the current game. It explains why Peach is covered in cum at the beginning, but also why she is still a virgin. It also explains the Airships that appear in each world. And it's a good as any incentive for Peach to go out looking for Mario. And since Bowser isn't near, he can't just go kidnap Peach, plus... she's coming right to his castle. He can just wait until she walks inside.
Of course I like your idea. Yes, Mario is locked in Bowser castle, anyway. He knows Peach saved him before (Super Princess Peach), so , as Peach is more adult now, she knows better how to succeed better.