Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

LOL What if Mario is a cross dresser and takes Peach's clothes off to wear XD and so Bowser Mistakens him for peach and snatches him away hahahaha.

[coolness32]

LOL What if Mario is a cross dresser and takes Peach's clothes off to wear XD and so Bowser Mistakens him for peach and snatches him away hahahaha.

Despite being hilarious! It doesn't really fit. It could be a last ditch effort thing though. Mario notices Bowser is coming and there's no way to get Peach to safety because she is drugged so he poses as Peach just before Bowser gets there! That would even explain why Peach is completely naked without a dress close by.

[QuizmasterBos]

Wario's never done that to my knowledge. The way your describing it comes a lot closer to the beginning scene with Knuckles in Sonic 3.

Yeah now that you say it, I do remember that part. I won't lie, the only thing I know Wario from is Smash Bros Brawl, Mario Party and Mario Kart.

I've played or seen about 75 -80% of all Nintendo games I'd wager. So I am quite knowledgable about Mario games and others. That's the reason I'm always correcting Ivan when necessary

Let's think about this a little differently.

Wario's has been on a lot of adventures. So he's gained a lot of money from that (Wario Land, Wario Ware). What if Wario has a mansion somewhere, or a bank and he's able to give or lend some money to Peach, but for a price. That means no stealing coins, that's not a good gameplay mechanic. It actually forces you to farm, while you're trying to limit this as much as possible.

Coins disappearing won't be such a good idea, I'm afraid. As long as the prices are high enough, there is no need to take away coin collecting opportunities.

But that's not incentive for Peach to seek out Wario because with magical reappearing coins she wouldn't ever have to borrow money from Wario. (where does Wario live anyways?) That's why there could be levels that he doesn't steal coins from you. When there is a game where you can choose sides (eg good/innocent and evil/whore) the good side always has to "farm" more(it seems especially in terms of funds). things aren't supposed to come more easily or else you're not earning your goodness. An innocent Peach would never sell sexual favors for coins, but the whore Peach would.

What role could Wario have? How could he be implemented?

No incentive? Read my last line again. If prices are high enough and you have the option of either:
- Spend 5 minutes (or 10) collecting coins in a stage or
- Suck a fat guy's dick to get that money in less than 1
what would be the easy route? The money collecting is all about speed, you want that money in a short period of time. Even if the coins come back (as they should), it would/could still take long to obtain that cash. It makes the penis all the more desirable.

So what if...we have a small scene...Mario and Peach on a romantic date at Le Mushroom. They have dinner and some drinks. But Mario slips a pill in Peaches drink hoping to have some kinky fun! Then lets warp back to the bedroom where Mario will remove her clothes and some foreplay will happen...and while he's licking her pussy...BAM!! Bower (or whoever) comes in and takes Mario. He screams "MAMAMIA!" but Peach wont wake up cuz shes been drugged. Toads come in hearing the scream, sees Peach naked, gets horny, and then goes to scene where will will try to either make Peach get up before she gets fucked or wait and watch as Peach awakens to dicks in all her holes.

Interesting. This needs to be thought out more.
I do want to stress right away to implement a skip button. From the looks of it the beginning is going to be quite long and some wish to just start the game already, especially if you have seen it before.

But why does Mario drug Peach? Fucking with someone who isn't awake isn't very rewarding. She can't blow Mario, she'd barely respond and any positions other than missionary would be impossible. Why isn't a koopa the waiter in the restaurant and he drugged the drink?

The reason why Mario gets kidnapped is because Bowser thinks its easier this way. Mario is always the one screwing things up, so take him out and there shouldn't be a problem. Peach will even come right to him.

Now what I was think was it could be like the ultimate ending. An ending that leads to you restarting the game. Which will give you the start on either a Virgin run or a Whore run. Either an ending or a beginning... So what do you think? Its pretty well thought out huh? If you want it could even be an interactive level. Where you can roam and go to the bathroom for makeup or eat dinner. Stuff like that.

What if I want to do a virgin run, but I "start" a Whore run? Would that mean I'm fucked right from the start (no pun intended)?

Interactivity would make the opening needlessly long, people want to see some porn already!

I'd talk about what we're implementing now but I'm too lazy to read you and Quiz's long paragraph >_<

Stop being so lazy then. This is important for you too

[Ivan-Aedler]

-TWO NEW BEDROOM areas with 'opening small door' scene: Toadsworth and Nursery room (not uploaded yet). Below, only the Nursery room are shown.

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-I've discovered a way to make the words in a meeting appear with typewriting effect (like TTYD). If they're interesting to be added, I'll add it.
- Better Peach eyes when blinking (no more beige shadows). It became better. Not uploaded yet.
- (NOT MIM RELATED) I've started to work on vectorized images (remake of old JPG images), to prepare myself to make 'Cute Peach' (paper peach) poses , in order to create animations and situations with her.

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So uh, why does Bowser capture Mario? Is it an accident? Peach is drugged, and Mario is very distracted so it would be easy for him to capture the princess like usual. Does he want to repay Mario back?

Mario , as I've said, will search for food in Peach Castle. He will not find it, so:

1) he will search for mushrooms or a 'pizzeria' outside the castle. Bowser comes in and captures Mario (with two koopatroopas restraining him). Princess is safe inside her castle.
2) he notices Bowser in the corridors frightening toads, then he quickly change his clothes with Peach ones, and then he stays beside Bowser. However, bowser is faster and orders his subordinates (kooopatroopas) to take him, thinking he's Peach.

I like the resturant idea. ... Maybe after Mario takes Peach's virginity...

Hey stop! Peach starts the game virgin. Why? Because, aside of an already decided statement since early stages of MIM AE, and aside of Peach being pure in Mario games, we all want Mario to take her virginity in the end (or before that). It's up to the player.

Bowser comes in and kidnaps Mario and then the Toad comes in and he can either wake or fuck Peach

This is interesting.

Like make the interactive plot line an ending?Since we usually just start out with Peach waking up naked, some may want to know what happened before that. We could make it the ending to the Normal route. (which is pretty much foreplay and then they are taken back to the beginning. The interesting part is that now there would be a reason to play the game 3 times!

Brainstorming required! If Peach already loses her virginity, then she finds Mario in the last word and the game ends (where we will see Mario crying a bit sad, while jerking off outside the house), <- I still prefer Mario doesnt know Peach is not a virgin anymore -> after all of this, the game restarts in the restaurant, like another day? Then all the levels again? But , in this case, Peach could restart in a whore mode, even if she didnt completed the '80' total laids in the game.

Where is the restaurant? On the train?

I can make a moving background, like those rocks. Yes, Zess T. I can ask Biles to make it if he could.

LOL What if Mario is a cross dresser and takes Peach's clothes off to wear XD and so Bowser Mistakens him for peach and snatches him away hahahaha.

Now thats funny. Maybe make Mario wake up in Peach bedroom and make him dress Peach outfit because he will be taking her virginity anyway and he wants to 'feel' like her. Or, like coolness32 said, Mario notices Bowser coming and wear Peach outfit to protect her. And, since Peach will be naked, I can remove her outfit in the castle. She will only be able to take another outfit in the castle when se beats world1. She can find outfits during the levels, though.

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I do want to stress right away to implement a skip button. From the looks of it the beginning is going to be quite long and some wish to just start the game already, especially if you have seen it before.

All Right!

The reason why Mario gets kidnapped is because Bowser thinks its easier this way. Mario is always the one screwing things up, so take him out and there shouldn't be a problem. Peach will even come right to him.

Another good idea. But I liked the 'Mario crossdressed' idea because we can fantasize he did it to feel the enticing Peach's smell on it (and to protect her). And she will be naked in the castle.

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

Hahaha you actually like the cross dressing idea??? I was completely joking haha

Okay so are you sure you want me to make the walls and furniture for the train?
Think about it Ivan!



@Quiz
Thats why I wanted to make it an ending! Because it will only have mario doing some foreplay and then getting captured which automatically restarts them again. Hardly rewarding but still gives them something to do after the normal route.
Not only will, like I said, this give people a reason to play it three times but its the perfect opportunity to add a tiny reward to the normal route so it doesnt feel like they wasted their time.

Dont you think an extra interactive area telling what happened before she woke up would be better than a scene where Mario cries and jerks off?

Actually we can imply that being drugged is just like sleeping. Even when asleep your body still responds to things like pleasure in this case. The vagina still releases juices and the body still moves as pleasure flows in. Kinda like how men get morning wood. Unconsciously Peach could react too. Sorta like shes having a wet dream.

As for your question about the whore/virgin run thing. Thats why I said it should be an ending!!! That way you play through it the first time getting used to everything, finding the right tricks, and then if you end up getting the normal ending you would think "Oh ok I better go for a virgin ending so no fucking. Lets wake this bitch up" or "Oh yea lets watch this whore get fucked!!! Come on toads!" hahaha
Of course all decisions will be made based on how well Ivan shows the clues. Maybe like "WAKE HER UP BEFORE SHE GETS FUCKED!" or have two choices "Wake up(Virgin Run) or Keep sleeping(Whore Run)"

And i cant help eing lazy! My bed feels so good. I just want to marry it.

[HappyGoomba]

I agree with Quiz and Ivan, the toads shouldn't fuck Peach while she's asleep. What they could do, is use her to jerk off. They could rub themselves on her feet, hands and breasts, then cum all over her.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Hahaha you actually like the cross dressing idea??? I was completely joking haha

Yes, but I may require more opinions. And this one may not require a voting pool, but some discussion. I dont care if its better Mario going out to find food while she's sleeping, then Koopa catches him being normal dressed.

Okay so are you sure you want me to make the walls and furniture for the train? Think about it Ivan!

For sure I want to make that restaurant area. People that played TTYD tried to sit in those chairs, eat, and had some interactions (I tried too). Now we can use that area better. You can start with furnitures, then the walls/ground textures. Remember to give some perspective, like the crates you did. As for the floor, DONT make them 3d-like. They can be made like being seen directly (e.g. those diamonds being straight , one of top of another, like in Osama Castle - blue diamonds). So I tilt them to be like in the image above.

Thats why I wanted to make it an ending! Because it will only have mario doing some foreplay and then getting captured which automatically restarts them again. Hardly rewarding but still gives them something to do after the normal route. Not only will, like I said, this give people a reason to play it three times but its the perfect opportunity to add a tiny reward to the normal route so it doesnt feel like they wasted their time.

The problem is consistency. Let's say Peach finished the game while being whore, and Mario didnt know about it! (instead of him crying and jerking off). We dont want Mario to feel sad. Even that way, if we replay the game choosing a virgin Peach, it destroys consistency because Peach is not virgin anymore! Maybe make a cut scene showing MERLEE casting a magic that lets Peach virgin again (NOW this is understandable to happen). Then the game restarts from world 1. (I dont want to use Merlon for that because he's a guy, and hsi graphic are so...squared).

Actually we can imply that being drugged is just like sleeping. Even when asleep your body still responds to things like pleasure in this case. The vagina still releases juices and the body still moves as pleasure flows in. Kinda like how men get morning wood. Unconsciously Peach could react too. Sorta like shes having a wet dream.

You're true. Let's say Peach simply drunk too much instead of being drugged. She is drunk!

Of course all decisions will be made based on how well Ivan shows the clues. Maybe like "WAKE HER UP BEFORE SHE GETS FUCKED!" or have two choices "Wake up(Virgin Run) or Keep sleeping(Whore Run)"

Not a problem to implement that option.

As for the current plot and KAMEK. I want to make him stay. He will change Peach portraits and he will make other acts in later stages. When Bowser came to Peach castle, Kamek came with him anyway.

I agree with Quiz and Ivan, the toads shouldn't fuck Peach while she's asleep. What they could do, is use her to jerk off. They could rub themselves on her feet, hands and breasts, then cum all over her.

If the options are implemented '(virgin/whore') right in the beginning, if the user presses 1 but delays, toads will jerk off. If the user presses 2, they will fuck her.

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

We could make then cum on her face and thats what wakes her up with the cum on her face if you want.

[MPLDAM9919]

Hahaha you actually like the cross dressing idea??? I was completely joking haha

Yes, but I may require more opinions. And this one may not require a voting pool, but some discussion. I dont care if its better Mario going out to find food while she's sleeping, then Koopa catches him being normal dressed.

Agreed. It's better for Mario to go out to the kitchen and get food and get captured by a Koopa that for him to crossdress. I find crossdressing DISTURBING.

[HappyGoomba]

A couple of bugs I've seen. This was after completing level 1, saving and later loading the save and playing level 2:

1. Taking the Peach dress near the first abyss in level 2 doesn't add lingerie or gloves. She was wearing the striker outfit since before the save.

2. After the save and load, the game seems to forget that she's already gone through the first 10 sex scenes. The count is still right, but as I played through level 2, she did the 10 initial goomba scenes in order.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Updated my first vector Peach drawing outside the game, made using Alcon8 as reference.
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I may Update Peach eyes with this second version above. #FAIL!! The new eye only works in 'a more hentai style'.
Okay. I've exausted alternative eyes. Current eye is ok. After fixing some bugs in MIM, I may try to make a better face and mouth.
Interesting enough, the current Peach eyes may be better in the new vector Peach face.

A couple of bugs I've seen. This was after completing level 1, saving and later loading the save and playing level 2. Taking the Peach dress near the first abyss in level 2 doesn't add lingerie or gloves. She was wearing the striker outfit since before the save.

Ok gotta check.

2. After the save and load, the game seems to forget that she's already gone through the first 10 sex scenes. The count is still right, but as I played through level 2, she did the 10 initial goomba scenes in order.

Ok going to check that too. Thanks for the report

[Sexybones]

What if Bowsers isnt the one who kidnapped mario.Just an idee for a story.In the musroom kingdom everyting is going as normal.Mario and Peach are doing happy things and Bower is secretly preparing his XX invation attempt to kidnapp Peach.One day mario stays at peach castle to late and Peach decide that he should stay over to sleep.Since the bed of Peach is the only one big enough they decide to share it.Nothing happens tho (still the innocent mario game)During that night however a mysterious invisible cloud appears making everyone sexually aroussed.Mario cums in his sleep and the kami wizard who was supposed to kidnapp peach simply turned her pictures in naughty one's.Only Peach and the toadettes are sligtly able to resist the effect.On top of that Mario disappeared(along with peach sleepwear).Seeing the large number of Bowsers troops he is quickly seen responsible and peach go's out to confront him and get Mario back.Who is responsible for the cloud and is Bowser the culprit a parner or a victim.The conclusion might suprise you in Mario is missing ......!!!!

[Ivan-Aedler]

What if Bowsers isnt the one who kidnapped mario.Just an idee for a story.In the musroom kingdom everyting is going as normal.Mario and Peach are doing happy things and Bower is secretly preparing his XX invation attempt to kidnapp Peach.One day mario stays at peach castle to late and Peach decide that he should stay over to sleep.Since the bed of Peach is the only one big enough they decide to share it.Nothing happens tho (still the innocent mario game)During that night however a mysterious invisible cloud appears making everyone sexually aroussed.Mario cums in his sleep and the kami wizard who was supposed to kidnapp peach simply turned her pictures in naughty one's.Only Peach and the toadettes are sligtly able to resist the effect.On top of that Mario disappeared(along with peach sleepwear).Seeing the large number of Bowsers troops he is quickly seen responsible and peach go's out to confront him and get Mario back.Who is responsible for the cloud and is Bowser the culprit a parner or a victim.The conclusion might suprise you in Mario is missing ......!!!!

So lets write this down, fix some things, and include the 'restaurant' scene.

PLOT #1: Mario crossdressing to protect Peach, as he heard some sounds outside. Bowser takes Mario instead of Peach.
PLOT #2: Mario searching for food. He goes outside, hungry. Koopas are wandering in the grass and takes him.
PLOT #3: Arousal effect when Mario see strange clouds in the window and goes outside.
1) Everything going as normal in mushroom kingdom. Flowers blossoming, sky shining.
2) (camera) they show Peach and Mario having a lunch in the train restaurant. The train arrives in mushroom kingdom (I'm not going to make this animation, come on, people. A train too? Maybe! But every new graphic is a work of a day (or two)).
3) A sunset. Mario and Peach is having a meeting in her bedroom (both are flerting one another). Peach decides Mario can sleep with her (she's being aroused)
4) A great cloud appears in. Mario wakes up and see it in the window. He says 'Damn, its Bowser again. Must protect this castle'. He goes out, but the effect of the cloud arouses Mario, which starts jerking uncontrolably (as some toads).
5) Koopas descend from the cloud and grab Mario. Koopa restrains Mario and goes away in his 'clown dirigible'. Bowser laughs aloud: 'BWAHAHAHA How Didn't I think this before? Now with that scum plumber, nobody will be safe in mushroom kingdom!'

[QuizmasterBos]

PLOT #1: Mario crossdressing to protect Peach, as he heard some sounds outside. Bowser takes Mario instead of Peach.
PLOT #2: Mario searching for food. He goes outside, hungry. Koopas is wandering in the grass and takes him.
PLOT #3: Arousal effect when Mario see strange clouds in the window and goes outside.
1) Everything going as normal in mushroom kingdom. Flowers blossoming, sky shining.
2) (camera) they show Peach and Mario having a lunch in the train restaurant. The train arrives in mushroom kingdom (I'm not going to make this animation, come on, people. A train too? Maybe! But every new graphic if a work of a day (or two)).
3) A sunset. Mario and Peach is having a meeting in her bedroom (both are flerting one another). Peach decides Mario can sleep with her (she's being aroused)
4) A great cloud appears in. Mario wakes up and see it in the window. He says 'Damn, its Bowser again. Must protect this castle'. He goes out, but the effect of the cloud arouses Mario, which starts jerking uncontrolably (as some toads).
5) Koopas descend from the cloud and grab Mario. Koopa restrains Mario and goes away in his 'clown dirigible'. Bowser laughs aloud: 'BWAHAHAHA How Didn't I think this before? Now with that scum plumber, nobody will be safe in mushroom kingdom!'

There's one problem I have with Plot #3: If Bowser is there at the castle, why doesn't he just steal Peach as well? I mean, he's right there!

What if Mario notices airships flying away from the castle just before he's going to mount Peach.
Mario goes after them without saying anything(Mario never talks in the games, especially not in that one game you really like ).
Peach will say something like "Mario! [next textbox]Well, he probably comes back soon."
But he doesn't and Peach falls asleep.

Cut forward to the early morning. Some Toads find Peach lying in bed naked and decide to have some fun. They ready their penises and rub on her body (good idea HappyGoomba) until they come.
Peach is just about to wake up and the toads run away in fear of being caught. She then expresses Mario? and gets out of bed. Now you can play.

This explains the cum on Peach's body and it perfectly connects to the current first parts of the game. What do you think?

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

Maybe just maybe...Mario touches the dress powerup and Peach gets her Mario hat. And Bowser mistakens them hahaha

[Ivan-Aedler]

Things heating up?

What if Mario notices airships flying away from the castle just before he's going to mount Peach. Mario goes after them without saying anything(Mario never talks in the games, especially not in that one game you really like ). Peach will say something like "Mario! [next textbox]Well, he probably comes back soon." But he doesn't and Peach falls asleep.

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MAY NOT CHANGE:
1) Everything going as normal in mushroom kingdom. Flowers blossoming, sky shining.
2) (camera) they show Peach and Mario having a lunch in the train restaurant. The train arrives in mushroom kingdom (I'm not going to make this animation, come on, people. A train too? Maybe! But every new graphic is a work of a day (or two)).
3) A sunset. Mario and Peach is having a meeting in her bedroom (both are flerting one another). Peach decides Mario can sleep with her (she's being aroused)

PLOT #1: 4) Mario crossdressing to protect Peach, as he heard some sounds outside. Bowser takes Mario instead of Peach.
PLOT #1-2: 4)Same as above, but Mario hears something and becomes anxious. By mistake, Mario stomps in Peach dress powerup. His hat falls and Peach gets it. Its like a crossdressing but due to powerups. Bowser mistakes them.
PLOT #2: 4) Mario searching for food. He goes outside, hungry. Koopas are wandering in the grass and takes him.
PLOT #3: Arousal effect when Mario see strange clouds in the window and goes outside (more below).
4) A great cloud appears in. Mario wakes up and see it in the window. He says 'Damn, its Bowser again. Must protect this castle'. He goes out, but the effect of the cloud arouses Mario, which starts jerking uncontrolably (as some toads).
5) Koopas descend from the cloud and grab Mario. Bowser restrains Mario and goes away in his 'clown dirigible'. Bowser laughs aloud: 'BWAHAHAHA How Didn't I think this before? Now without that scum plumber, nobody will be safe in Mushroom Kingdom!'
PLOT #4: Same as 3, but instead of clouds, there are airships. Mario really doesnt talk much, he wants to defeat Bowser and other enemies, as always. Peach awaits for him (3, 4, 5, 6 hours). Before dawn, she falls asleep. Then some griddy/happy jumping toads comes in (a group of three) and say to one another 'Hey, our princess' bedroom is open! Man I have a dream of cumming in our princess, what do you say, Yvan? 'Hell yes!! Wolly, time has came! How about you, Wally?' 'Hmmmm?' They cum on Peach, goes away before Peach awakes, Peach asks for Mario and the game begins.
http://www.gamegrep.com/showimage.php?p ... wsid=21844

[QuizmasterBos]

Things heating up?

What if Mario notices airships flying away from the castle just before he's going to mount Peach. Mario goes after them without saying anything(Mario never talks in the games, especially not in that one game you really like ). Peach will say something like "Mario! [next textbox]Well, he probably comes back soon." But he doesn't and Peach falls asleep.

MAY NOT CHANGE:
1) Everything going as normal in mushroom kingdom. Flowers blossoming, sky shining.
2) (camera) they show Peach and Mario having a lunch in the train restaurant. The train arrives in mushroom kingdom (I'm not going to make this animation, come on, people. A train too? Maybe! But every new graphic is a work of a day (or two)).
3) A sunset. Mario and Peach is having a meeting in her bedroom (both are flerting one another). Peach decides Mario can sleep with her (she's being aroused)

PLOT #1: 4) Mario crossdressing to protect Peach, as he heard some sounds outside. Bowser takes Mario instead of Peach.
PLOT #1-2: 4)Same as above, but Mario hears something and becomes anxious. By mistake, Mario stomps in Peach dress powerup. His hat falls and Peach gets it. Its like a crossdressing but due to powerups. Bowser mistakes them.
PLOT #2: 4) Mario searching for food. He goes outside, hungry. Koopas are wandering in the grass and takes him.
PLOT #3: Arousal effect when Mario see strange clouds in the window and goes outside (more below).
4) A great cloud appears in. Mario wakes up and see it in the window. He says 'Damn, its Bowser again. Must protect this castle'. He goes out, but the effect of the cloud arouses Mario, which starts jerking uncontrolably (as some toads).
5) Koopas descend from the cloud and grab Mario. Koopa restrains Mario and goes away in his 'clown dirigible'. Bowser laughs aloud: 'BWAHAHAHA How Didn't I think this before? Now with that scum plumber, nobody will be safe in mushroom kingdom!'
PLOT #4: Same as 3, but instead of clouds, there are airships. Mario really doesnt talk much, he wants to defeat Bowser and other enemies, as always. Peach awaits for him (3, 4, 5, 6 hours). Before dawn, she falls asleep. Then some griddy/happy jumping toads comes in (a group of three) and say to one another 'Hey, our princess' bedroom is open! Man I have a dream of cumming in our princess, what do you say, Yvan? 'Hell yes!! Wolly, time has came! How about you, Wally?' 'Hmmmm?' They cum on Peach, goes away before Peach awakes, Peach asks for Mario and the game begins.
http://www.gamegrep.com/showimage.php?p ... wsid=21844

Wait, one of the toads in NSMBWii is called Yvan?! How appropiate.

I think the "may not change" bit is good.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Image below that might be inside the game: my first vector art (so far), made from scratch, inspired by Arcon8. I'll animate it soon.

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Interesting enough, this was the expect Peach size in the game. But this will be made to another game, otherwise, MIM will be different from other MIM original, MIM DO (Blargh) and others. I dont want that.

[Surskit]

I absolutely love it. Rare enough for me to log on anymore, rarer still for me to not see something completely irritating about a jawline or eyeshape.

[QuizmasterBos]

RELATED TO MIM, as these pictures might be inside the game: my first vector art (so far), made from scratch, inspired by Arcon8. I'll animate it soon.

Interesting enough, this was the expect Peach size in the game. But this will be made to another game, otherwise, MIM will be different from other MIM original, MIM DO (Blargh) and others. I dont want that.

Pretty good there Ivan. Is this meant to be in the game or is this work for your comic?


Now, about the plotoptions. I'll probably sound like I am advertising my own plot (which I kind of am ). But there are some... odd bits about every plot point except mine.

For number 1: Mario crossdresses. Aside from being odd, how does Bowser or his minions mistake Mario for Peach?! Mario is like half Peach's size and he certainly looks different (haircolor, hairlength, mustache).

Number 1-2 has the same problem, but something else is odd as well. If Peach finds Mario's hat (somewhere outside the castle likely), how does she gets into the castle again with a good reason? She's already outside. That means you'd have to redo the opening bits to make Peach start outside, a lot of work if you ask me.

Number 2 is the food one. It is never implied in any Mario game that Mario can't stop eating (he does dream of fruit though in Super Mario Sunshine). Now if he goes out for food that's fine, except they LITERALLY JUST ATE! I think Mario and Peach went out for dinner and since they want to get "freaky" at sunset, that would mean that not much time has passed between the two scenes.

Number 3 is by SexyBones. The cloud thing would need explaining. There isn't anything in the game right now that would explain the cloud, so that's a lot more work.
Why does jerking off uncontrollably make Mario easy to kidnap anyway? And as I said before, Bowser is right there, he would be stupid not to kidnap Peach.

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Now that leaves mine. I'm not saying it's perfect and others can change it, as long as it works. If you got a better idea, just post it.
It's just that I think mine connects well to the current game. It explains why Peach is covered in cum at the beginning, but also why she is still a virgin.
It also explains the Airships that appear in each world. And it's a good as any incentive for Peach to go out looking for Mario.
And since Bowser isn't near, he can't just go kidnap Peach, plus... she's coming right to his castle. He can just wait until she walks inside.

Now I need to stress this one thing. None of your ideas are stupid. It's just that there are some things that aren't explained (very well). If I did make you feel bad, I apologize. Forgive me