DirtyC101's Furry Fury: Legend of the Twin Orbs

[TwistedTail]

And yes, I'm still hacking away at it. Something will be posted before the end of the year. I just hope that's enough time to wrap up the 2nd act.

DirtyC101

And there was much rejoicing!

[Fence]

Dirtyc101 put this on his blog. Its pretty good.

[SquallLion]

I agree. cool intro

[BlueLight]

Sorry for being a buzz kill but um... It's horrible as is.

The models don't seem design for posing so she looks horrible in the scene.
The atmosphere isn't really giving me a vibe that the stick man would work.
Story is unbelievable to me.

and eh.

[Reapergod36]

Sorry for being a buzz kill but um... It's horrible as is.

The models don't seem design for posing so she looks horrible in the scene.
The atmosphere isn't really giving me a vibe that the stick man would work.
Story is unbelievable to me.

and eh.

Eh, Bluelight pisses me off, but he's right. (Damnit I rhymed)

[whatdontlookaatme]

that was a complete waste of my time

[ByHisBillowingBeard]

WTF?

I really enjoyed it :'D Found it interested and rather entertaining with the stickman and terribly done.. falling thing. I think it's meant to be humourously done, or at least I hope so.

+1 from me anyway.

[ByHisBillowingBeard]

@Dirtyc101 as I can't comment on your blog::

Need some variety in the eyes department between sprites, I think, sorry, it's late. Only thing I could come up with but I think it's important.
They look too stare-ey.

[Reaver]

bluelight did u ever stop to think that maybe its not done and that he was just showing us how thats the base for the beginning. He probably just wanted to show that he is still working on it and give us a little background so when the full thing comes out we wont be confused.

[haloman]

He probably just wanted to show that he is still working on it and give us a little background so when the full thing comes out we wont be confused.

*cough* Ren refuses *cough*
(Sorry, had to be done. Its the truth though. I prsonaly dont give two shits how "Unfinished" It is. We all just want A LITTLE proof. I have to side with Trunks on this one)

[BlueLight]

bluelight did u ever stop to think that maybe its not done and that he was just showing us how thats the base for the beginning.

ikechi the answer is yes i did and the to show that i said "It's horrible as is."
Saying that it was horrible as is lets me get away with remarks about the animation because i'm stating basically that his base as a finished product looks like crap.

He probably just wanted to show that he is still working on it and give us a little background so when the full thing comes out we wont be confused.

Well good for him. I hope he fixes some of this stuff because it looks like crap right now.

Now there is nothing else's i can really say to your post and get away using the word crap.

[WonderGamer]

Sorry for being a buzz kill but um... It's horrible as is.

The models don't seem design for posing so she looks horrible in the scene.
The atmosphere isn't really giving me a vibe that the stick man would work.
Story is unbelievable to me.

and eh.

Well it's just a template for starters. Templates are meant to be altered & (as others have said already) it's obvious that the flash is not finished yet. Constructive criticism can push things for the better, but it's seems to be like your attitude is set to a certain disposition that isn't going to like what he does no matter how much he changes it. Perhaps it's not the work that is bothering you, but rather the person that is making it.

[BlueLight]

I personally was stating everything wrong with it.
I am not sorry sorry about what i said or going to change anything.
My post was based on the fact if this was sent to the market that second which it wasn't.

I stated everything that should get fix and i right now don't have the time to go though my post and rejustified what i said.
As for the template thing... Ya i know... I never said the end animation wasn't going to be good.

[ByHisBillowingBeard]

#wisely sticks to sipping his cup of tea#

[bed_intruder]

Decided to check his blog since I haven't in awhile; just thought I'd drop off something he made in case nobody else had checked it either. His intro looks fine; seems like the stick figures are just placeholders until he puts the actual characters in their place. It's common practice and pretty easy to swap them out. He just wanted to show everyone what the intro would look like to keep people interested in the game so they didn't think it just died or something.

[BlueLight]

BOOYA i just raise a level in necrothreadicscopy.

Yes i saw the updates a week or so my self.

[Geolibermand]

Hi DirtyC101,

Great game! I really enjoy the work you do!

Regarding the sex attacks I have two suggestions...


1) Letting the hero be seduced. Seduced in the sense that it is obvious that she becomes more and more horny through the four stages. For example ending with stage 4 where she rides the monster hard while kissing him. (That is giving in completely - but willingly.)

Clearly, the hero could also be seduced by a female...


2) Make one scene where you "reverse the logic" - as where the hero would go for sex (the hero in control though) while the monster (for example male elf) in his dominant position goes for licking the hero. It could go like this [in all four the elf is sitting, hero is standing close to elf]:

Hero dom: Hero rides the elf cock gentle [it must however show that SHE is in control].
Hero minor ad: Hero gives lap dance to elf (teasing him)
Elf minor ad: Elf has the hero completely close and fingers her while she stands.
Elf dom: Elf holds hero tight and licks her.


I hope you can use my suggestions! Your game is fantastic - with or without the use of my ideas.


/Geo

[BlueLight]

You might want to move this comment to his blog. He doesn't seem to visit here often and the game isn't even post by him./

[Avenger]

It's funny, when Sarah crawls, she could get raped from behind! :

[webought]

the only thing I see wrong with this game is you cant have sexual intercourse in it long enough before you die.
makes its alot harder to.... to.... YOU get what I mean dam it lol


but yeah the sexual content is good and all, but you have to die to see it which is something im not too fond of lol. but omg I just noticed he made a comment on the Flash RPG Project by Hnarly today so hes not gone for good!