Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[coolness32]

Then fix that first. Beating level 5 doesn't open level 7 on the map, but it opens level 6. So you still need to beat all the stages. Put shops in every world, not just world 1. Backtracking from world 5 can be quite a chore if you need new stuff. It also works better if you have shops update their wares at times that it's easy to notice (completed castles serving as a refuge with shops and such, like I posted in the collab post.)

So is this also going to affect level 4? Right now, when you pass level 4 it opens level 5 but not level 6. It looks like the worldmap is supposed to be more like Mario 3 and in mario 3, when you beat a level that branches it unlocks both of the levels and not just the next one numerically.

[MPLDAM9919]

Is Lord Crump going to get some action in this game? He'll give Peach a key that works on all the lockers if she lets him fuck her.

Crump: Bwa! Huh! Huh! Well if it isn't Princess Peach! I been montoiring you and I see you left your cute pink dress in one of our lockers. I'll give you a key to use 24/7 if you let me pound that tight pussy of yours. Peach anwser 1: Please No!!! I'll pay you for the key! Crump: Intresting... How's 45 coins sound? Peach anwser 1: It's a deal! Crump: Well ok! Here's the key! It works on all lockers. Next time, I want your tight pussy alright? Peach anwser 2: But I don't have that much! Crump: Well, that stinks. The only way now is for your to suck my cock! Peach: OH NO!! *scene starts* Peach anwser 3: WAIT!!! I change my mind! My body is yours! Crump: I'm glad you see it my way! Now, get on your knees! Peach anwser 2 (to first have): Show me your cock, big boy!<3 Crump: That's more like it! Perpare you anus, lassie!

More to come for the scene later!

[Biles]

Here toady toady.... :3

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

Is Lord Crump going to get some action in this game? He'll give Peach a key that works on all the lockers if she lets him fuck her.

Crump: Bwa! Huh! Huh! Well if it isn't Princess Peach! I been montoiring you and I see you left your cute pink dress in one of our lockers. I'll give you a key to use 24/7 if you let me pound that tight pussy of yours. Peach anwser 1: Please No!!! I'll pay you for the key! Crump: Intresting... How's 45 coins sound? Peach anwser 1: It's a deal! Crump: Well ok! Here's the key! It works on all lockers. Next time, I want your tight pussy alright? Peach anwser 2: But I don't have that much! Crump: Well, that stinks. The only way now is for your to suck my cock! Peach: OH NO!! *scene starts* Peach anwser 3: WAIT!!! I change my mind! My body is yours! Crump: I'm glad you see it my way! Now, get on your knees! Peach anwser 2 (to first have): Show me your cock, big boy!<3 Crump: That's more like it! Perpare you anus, lassie!

More to come for the scene later!

Please oh please revise your dialogue. Honestly I hate being the asshole but you keep doing it hahah. Peach is a Princess so lessen your !!!!!!!! This is an ENF game, yes it changes with the amount of enemies you fuck but we want to focus on the main dialogue of how Peach's actually encounter would be if she were not a whore. So you gotta ease up into the sex. What I read was

C: "Hey give me money"
P: "I dont have any"
C: "Ok I stick my penis in your pussy"
P: "DEAL!"

Like thats what I read. There was literally not a single ounce of embarrassment in any of her answers. I'm sorry but I have to be the asshole. Honestly if everyone else likes it fine. But thats my opinion haha. Just revise it. If you really want the dialogue of a porno then you should show it to Blargh because his version isnt ENF. You have some good talent in your writing but all you need to do is focus on topic and stick with the tone of the game.


Boy I am tired. Woke up again -_-"
Wait Ivan, did u include pokey in your new gallery? I dont remember if you did or not and I'm a bit lazy to go check after typing all of this out...

[Ivan-Aedler]

So is this also going to affect level 4? Right now, when you pass level 4 it opens level 5 but not level 6. It looks like the worldmap is supposed to be more like Mario 3 and in mario 3, when you beat a level that branches it unlocks both of the levels and not just the next one numerically.

When I add a new level in world1 (or two), I will make that branch. One of the levels will be full of flowers like petalsburg fields.

Here toady toady.... :3

Oh no!!Bye bye, Play Z?
(Points to you again!)
Did you use the 'semi balled' things? You can use in shadow areas and in places like Toad's pupil. Its only 2 curves!

I think I can do the breathing animation now (like goombella), if you havent done yet. Then I put in a way the toads will be living creatures, looking up, then down, then breathing, then waving... I can control those actions too. Some will wave, some not.

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C: "Hey give me money"
P: "I dont have any"
C: "Ok I stick my penis in your pussy"
P: "DEAL!"
Like thats what I read. There was literally not a single ounce of embarrassment in any of her answers. I'm sorry but I have to be the asshole. Honestly if everyone else likes it fine. But thats my opinion haha. Just revise it. If you really want the dialogue of a porno then you should show it to Blargh because his version isnt ENF. You have some good talent in your writing but all you need to do is focus on topic and stick with the tone of the game.

Agreed. Peach starts embarassed, and, although she is sluttier and stuttier along the game, Peach will be still complaining, or with fear of experimenting new scenes. It's like she is doing wrong things hidden (like stealing something) then she became shy and full of culprits. But she fails again of being innocent So, she will always try to avoid scenes. For sure I will use any dialog or script , but with adaptations.

Wait Ivan, did u include pokey in your new gallery? I dont remember if you did or not and I'm a bit lazy to go check after typing all of this out...

Oh I forgot!! Ok added it! PS: enemies in plural: it will have more than one kind of them

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[Biles]

Oh no!!Bye bye, Play Z?
(Points to you again!)
Did you use the 'semi balled' things? You can use in shadow areas and in places like Toad's pupil. Its only 2 curves!

LOL at seeing the old Toad waving farewell. Anyways, "semi balled" things? I'm assuming you mean using 2 anchor points to create pseudo-spheres, right? I didn't add the shadow underneath Toad's eyes because I always thought it made him look like a stoner dude XD.

I think I can do the breathing animation now (like goombella), if you havent done yet. Then I put in a way the toads will be living creatures, looking up, then down, then breathing, then waving... I can control those actions too. Some will wave, some not.

Well actually, seeing that I made the new Toad, I now have many parts to start making Toadette.

Oh I forgot!! Ok added it! PS: enemies in plural: it will have more than one kind of them

Why not add Snifit in that blank panel. Surely, that phallic nose of his will definitely cum in handy ;3

[Ivan-Aedler]

"semi balled" things? I'm assuming you mean using 2 anchor points to create pseudo-spheres, right? I didn't add the shadow underneath Toad's eyes because I always thought it made him look like a stoner dude XD.

Yes, I call them 'semi balled' because they're, actually, semi circles, but, when we stretch them, it closes on itself. No I dont mean adding shadow underneath eyes, but replacing his pupils to these high optimized semi balled things. In some places, it does not decrease quality, but create a more 'real nature' feeling (nothing is 100% a circle anyway). And we can save more CPU cycles (of course, if its a , say, 20 to 100 curve difference (not only a pupil -> from 8 to 2 curves).

Look at this plate. Even with a rectangle and 4 'circles', it has only 12 curves instead of the normal 36 (or 28 when we optimize ellipses to use 6 instead of 8 curves). Actually, in terms of reusage, it has only a rectangle and one of those 'semi balled' objects (6 curves!). However, flash engine moves them all like separatted objects (12 curves).

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Flash could have a geometric circle in a way its got calculated using just a center point and its radius. So, two curves/variables for a perfect circle.

Well actually, seeing that I made the new Toad, I now have many parts to start making Toadette.

I plan making Toadette slap Peachy's butt because she doesnt want Peach to do those...nasty things. She will say 'its a shame!' Toadette can be the chancellor wife (or daughter) in this game, a disciplined one. She doesnt like the chancellor's plans.
Toadette can have some interesting scenes. If you dont mind, I can develop the Toad breathing animation, so you can increase priority of making toadette. Just re-use the same toad parts (so I can substitute old toadette easily).

Why not add Snifit in that blank panel. Surely, that phallic nose of his will definitely cum in handy ;3

Snifit is a kind of Shyguy, so I'll add him there. If I create different places for every kind of enemy on Mario's universe, it will have more than 60 plates

[Biles]

Yes, I call them 'semi balled' because they're, actually, semi circles, but, when we stretch them, it closes on itself.

Just checkin'

No I dont mean adding shadow underneath eyes, but replacing his pupils to these high optimized semi balled things. In some places, it does not decrease quality, but create a more 'real nature' feeling (nothing is 100% a circle anyway). And we can save more CPU cycles (of course, if its a , say, 20 to 100 curve difference (not only a pupil -> from 8 to 2 curves).

Well, I'm definitely aware of 2-point spheres, infact I think was the I first to bring it up when I was trying demonstrate someone here about optimization some many posts ago. Actually, if I drew Toad's eyes in the way that is done canon, I do the following: Draw a small straight path line, thicken the stroke and round the ends. No need to make a shape out of 2 points. How do you think I created the eyes in the power-up items Anyways, I thought It'd be cool if I made Toad more "cheeky" by adding cheek curves underneath his eyes.

Toadette can be the chancellor wife (or daughter) in this game, a disciplined one. She doesnt like the chancellor's plans.

Well, if she's related to him, I imagine seeing her more as a granddaughter than what what you sugggested.

...Toadette can have some interesting scenes. If you dont mind, I can develop the Toad breathing animation, so you can increase priority of making toadette. Just re-use the same toad parts (so I can substitute old toadette easily).

Can't wait to see Toadette in more active roles.

Snifit is a kind of Shyguy, so I'll add him there. If I create different places for every kind of enemy on Mario's universe, it will have more than 60 plates

Heh, I always thought Snifits were so fundamentally different from Shyguys (seeing that they hop about) that the only thing they had in common was that mask. But Snifits will still have some uses for their Gonzo noses, right?

Interesting note, look at the old Toad design and see where his arm and foot is placed XD

[Ivan-Aedler]

Actually, if I drew Toad's eyes in the way that is done canon, I do the following: Draw a small straight path line, thicken the stroke and round the ends. No need to make a shape out of 2 points.

But those lines already have two points. An advantage of using semi-balled shapes (or 2-curve shape), is that you can combine them easily and even rotate them in a way it will appear a circle (e.g. in the flower, only 1/2 of the curve is shown. Then I've put the most smooth side).

How do you think I created the eyes in the power-up items Anyways, I thought It'd be cool if I made Toad more "cheeky" by adding cheek curves underneath his eyes.

Hmm do you mind of making it and posting it here? It may let him cutier.

Well, if she's related to him, I imagine seeing her more as a granddaughter than what what you sugggested.

Ok so be it!

Can't wait to see Toadette in more active roles.

Me too! I'll see if I can increase this priority. Thats because I want to make dialogs for Bub-ulbs first.

Heh, I always thought Snifits were so fundamentally different from Shyguys (seeing that they hop about) that the only thing they had in common was that mask. But Snifits will still have some uses for their Gonzo noses, right?

You bet! For about snifits themselves, on level 6 you can find one or two of them.

Interesting note, look at the old Toad design and see where his arm and foot is placed XD

LOL. I havent noticed that.

[QuizmasterBos]

Quizmaster, I need some info about the dialog inside the lab room.

My text (I still like it because it's from the game, and it reproduces well):

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

TEC-XXX: Now I will have you concoct a potion that will make you tranparent.
Peach: You mean...a potion that... makes me invisible?
TEC-XXX: Yes. You will enter Sir Grodus's room by becoming completely invisible
Peach: Wow...OK! How do I make it?
TEC-XXX: You must first set all of the potions on the desk in the Concoctinator computers.
TEC-XXX: It's those 4 machines in the left. But even I do not know which potion to set where.
TEC-XXX: The screens will inform you if you procceded correctly. Then press the higher red button of the right mainframe.
TEC-XXX: Please use them as references and insert the right potions in the machines.

DURING DRINK:
"TEC-XXX: By my calculations, it should be finished but...Did it come out correctly, do you think?
Peach:1) Yes! 2) Hmm I prefer to try again
(IF YES) TEC-XXX: Very good. Then please drink it. All of it, if you please.
Peach: What? Drink THIS? Is it safe? It smells...funny!
TEC-XXX: Please, you must drink it!
(SCRIPT: Became transparent)
TEC-XXX: You have done it! You have successfully made yourself transparent. Congratulations.
TEC-XXX: But... I must ask you to take off your dress and put in that lockers, in order nobody will notice.
TEC-XXX: Even the potion cannot make your dress invisible.
Peach: What?!? Do I need to be...stark naked? That's indecent! No way!
Peach: ...Oh, fine. I guess... If it's the only way...

AFTER BEING NAKED:
TEC-XXX: When you go to Sir Grodus's room, first locate the disk with recorded data.
TEC-XXX: Then insert that disk in his personal computer and connect to the network.
TEC-XXX: When you are finished with that, please come back to this room.
TEC-XXX: I will teach you how to make yourself normal again.
Peach: Gee, this is kind of a complicated plan, huh?
TEC-XXX: I suppose. Now, please go to Sir Grodus's room, in the end of the corridor.

WHEN PEACH GOES BACK TO THE LAB:
TEC-XXX: Welcome back, Princess Peach.
Peach: Welcome back? Did you notice I'm visible again? Why did you do this to me?
TEC-XXX: That's not my fault, Princess Peach!
Peach: Well...then I'll take my clothes back!
(PEACH WENT TO THE LOCKER)
Peach: The locker isn't opening! Please help me!
TEC-XXX: Sorry but that locker isn't connected to the network! I can't do anything, sorry!
Peach: Ohhhh what can I do?
TEC-XXX: I'm aware of your role to save your kingdom, and I've been watching you, so I think you'll be fine. You will get used to it. Now, please go back to your room while I analyse the data.

I received this text (I think it lacks more meeting);
P: "What?! Oh... right. I remember. My clothes don't turn invisible, right?"
T: "Correct. Please take them off quickly, in case guards will enter the room.
P: "But ... (looking left and right) there are no place to change."
T: "You will put your clothes in that locker in the right. Now please hurry."

If you have the entire list, I'll appreciate it. I've changed the last two lines, though.

Although the lines from the game seem to translate well, don't forget is that this takes place after TTYD. Peach should remember that she can't be invisible without taking her clothes off and she knows it's a safe way to enter Grodus' room. TEC doesn't need to tell her that.
Therefore we can shorten the amount of lines in the lab room considerably.

I thought I had gotten lines for every part of the game. Are you still missing some? Do you want me to send you the entire thing I posted earlier in a PM?

I've corrected these lines though:

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Before
P: "What?! Oh... right. I remember. My clothes don't turn invisible, right?"
T: "Correct. Please take them off quickly, in case guards will enter the room.
P: "But ... (looking left and right) there are no place to change."
T: "You will put your clothes in that locker in the right. Now please hurry."

After
P: "What?! Oh... right. I remember. My clothes don't turn invisible, right?"
T: "Correct. Please take them off quickly, guards might enter the room.
P: "But ... (looking left and right) there's no place to change."
T: "Just take off your clothes and put them in the locker to your right. Now hurry!"

AFTER BEING NAKED:
TEC-XXX: When you go to Sir Grodus's room, first locate the disk with recorded data.
TEC-XXX: Then insert that disk in his personal computer and connect to the network.
TEC-XXX: When you are finished with that, please come back to this room.
TEC-XXX: I will teach you how to make yourself normal again.
Peach: Gee, this is kind of a complicated plan, huh?
TEC-XXX: I suppose. Now, please go to Sir Grodus' room, at the end of the corridor.

Before
WHEN PEACH GOES BACK TO THE LAB:
TEC-XXX: Welcome back, Princess Peach.
Peach: Welcome back? Did you notice I'm visible again? Why did you do this to me?
TEC-XXX: That's not my fault, Princess Peach!
Peach: Well...then I'll take my clothes back!
(PEACH WENT TO THE LOCKER)
Peach: The locker isn't opening! Please help me!
TEC-XXX: Sorry but that locker isn't connected to the network! I can't do anything, sorry!
Peach: Ohhhh what can I do?
TEC-XXX: I'm aware of your role to save your kingdom, and I've been watching you, so I think you'll be fine. You will get used to it. Now, please go back to your room while I analyse the data.

After (Asian's idea for making TEC say indecent things once in a while and blaming it on some bugs intrigue me. I added it into this part.)
WHEN PEACH GOES BACK TO THE LAB:
TEC-XXX: Welcome back, Princess Peach.
Peach: Welcome back?! Did you notice I'm visible again? Why did you do this to me?
TEC-XXX: That's not my fault, Princess Peach!
Peach: Well...then I'll take my clothes back!
(PEACH WENT TO THE LOCKER)
Peach: The locker isn't opening! Please help me!
TEC-XXX: Sorry but that locker isn't connected to the network! I can't do anything, sorry!
Peach: What can I do?
TEC-XXX: Just walk around naked. I like seeing your tits.
Peach: EXCUSE ME?!
TEC-XXX: I'm sorry Peach, I had an error. Did I say anything wrong?
Peach: No no, it's fine... I guess.
TEC-XXX: Alright, I'll watch over you, so I think you'll be fine. You will get used to it. Now, please go back to your room while I analyse the data.

When Peach gets back to her room she should say she's going to take a rest in order to let the player know this is what you need to do to further the game's plot.
Peach: I'm getting sleepy. I better get some rest.

(Screen fade, Peach is still sleeping on the bed)
TEC: Princess Peach. Princess Peach! Please wake up!
(Peach awakes)
Peach: *Yawn* Oh! Did you analyze the data TEC?
TEC: Yes. Please come to my room again, there's something interesting I found.

I'll come up with more later.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Although the lines from the game seem to translate well, don't forget is that this takes place after TTYD. Peach should remember that she can't be invisible without taking her clothes off and she knows it's a safe way to enter Grodus' room. TEC doesn't need to tell her that.
Therefore we can shorten the amount of lines in the lab room considerably.

You're right, but I'll not shorten so much, I will see what can be done.
I will exchange the lab meeting (Peach already knows she needs to be invisible and to remove her clothes), however she will argue: 'hasn't it a better way to do that yet?
You can send me (PM), so I can analyse and see if I missed some, thanks!

[MPLDAM9919]

After TEC-XXX analyzes the data, do you there should be some tenalove action when Peach enters?

[Ivan-Aedler]

I'm uploading the version 1.7. Many interesting improvements there.

After TEC-XXX analyzes the data, do you there should be some tenalove action when Peach enters?

Please explain.

[MPLDAM9919]

After TEC-XXX analyzes the data, do you there should be some tenalove action when Peach enters?

Please explain.

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By Monkeycheese

This will explain it better.

[Ivan-Aedler]

By Monkeycheese

You win! Added in TODO list.
All screens on TEC-XXX computer will show a pulsating heart when doing those scenes.
X-naut (after analysing disk): is Peach is aroused, the computer will have sex with her ('tenalove').

[QuizmasterBos]

By Monkeycheese

You win! Added in TODO list.
X-naut (after analysing disk): is Peach is aroused, the computer will have sex with her ('tenalove').

This is where problems arise. Just imagine this:
Player is going through the game and accidentally runs into an enemy (say, a goomba). Peach gives said enemy a handjob.
Following your new rules Peach will stay a virgin because her cherry hasn't popped yet.
Player knows this and continues the game saving without making back-ups.

Peach stays aroused and gets to the room with TEC in it after he's analyzed the disk. TEC will fuck her screwing players out of a virginity run.
Players should have the option to get into a scene or be notified in some way beforehand. Scenes shouldn't just happen outside of the player's control.

I say is when Peach comes into the room, tentacles will appear. An option should come up allowing Peach to notice this and stop TEC or not notice this and getting tentacleraped. Please take this into consideration.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Players should have the option to get into a scene or be notified in some way beforehand. Scenes shouldn't just happen outside of the player's control.
I say is when Peach comes into the room, tentacles will appear. An option should come up allowing Peach to notice this and stop TEC or not notice this and getting tentacleraped. Please take this into consideration.

Yes I will include this option, dont worry.

I'm now adding the new toads to the version 1.7 (then I will upload it again). I added 'breathing' flowers (they're animated like a breeze is present) and a new messagebox style for Osama and Friends (like toads) meetings.

[MPLDAM9919]

The new update has some problems. For starters, TEC-XXX wouldn't open the door for me. Also there this weird "flashing lingerie" glitch when the player grabs the dress or Fire Flower.

[Ivan-Aedler]

The new update has some problems. For starters, TEC-XXX wouldn't open the door for me.

You have to go to the bathroom and explore there.

Also there this weird "flashing lingerie" glitch when the player grabs the dress or Fire Flower.

Please clean your flash cache.

[Biles]

But those lines already have two points. An advantage of using semi-balled shapes (or 2-curve shape), is that you can combine them easily and even rotate them in a way it will appear a circle (e.g. in the flower, only 1/2 of the curve is shown. Then I've put the most smooth side).

I know, except that with just a single line, you don't have a closed shape, let alone a fill of anykind. And yes, you can even rotate them too which I've done before.

Hmm do you mind of making it and posting it here? It may let him cutier.

Huh? But I thought I did. See those horizontal curved frowning lines underneath his eyes?