Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[Ivan-Aedler]

1) What, male Toads can't be nurses?

Yes they can. I can put a mask on them as well.

2) No males, Krista is a lesbian through and through, although toys are her specialty. Still doesn't help me in knowing what and how the scene plays out because we were just pitching ideas and none of it really stick. I need info if you want good dialogue.

I have an idea: Kris T could be there because she has a GREAT female friend who is a toad and is a nurse (or a male toad, nevermind). She wants to learn more about curing people from illnesses, then something can happen to her.
1 - in a good lesbian scene between the toads with Peach's presence. Peach could say 'ooooooh', and be embarassed, but end up masturbating herself
2- OR Peach can be the 'guinea pig' of an experiment (Kris t: 'Please, princess, I am ill, I need some help. could you help me?') Then the scene will only happen if Peach is dressed as a nurse. Kris T can do something that makes Peach use her pussy (she will be bottomless anyway).

1) That last part is confusing me (I get it, but the way it's said...)

They will be in that room 'in definitive' (its the chosen area for them).

2) Shouldn't there be a green dress to help identify which sister is which?

Sorry, I've taken this pic inside Flash. Their dresses changes with code, in order to avoid me from making another entire green dress.....So I use 'dress types' which only work inside the game. Updated above, to be more clear.

3) Their arms must be getting tired from having them up like that...

Its a picture......

4) According to the dictionary, "masseurs" are men who give massages professionally... The word you're looking for is "masseuses."

Ok fixing it Thanks!

[VintageBass]

2) No males, Krista is a lesbian through and through, although toys are her specialty. Still doesn't help me in knowing what and how the scene plays out because we were just pitching ideas and none of it really stick. I need info if you want good dialogue.

I have an idea: Kris T could be there because she has a GREAT female friend who is a toad and is a nurse (or a male toad, nevermind). She wants to learn more about curing people from illnesses, then something can happen to her.

For science, of course! At least she is taking after me, even if it is a different field of science.

2- OR Peach can be the 'guinea pig' of an experiment (Kris t: 'Please, princess, I am ill, I need some help. could you help me?') Then the scene will only happen if Peach is dresses as a nurse. Kris T can do something that makes Peach use her pussy (she will be bottomless anyway).

Krista normally doesn't wear clothes, so her going bottomless is kinda expected of her. And at least this can at least bring the Nurse outfit in. Then again looking through some sprites, there is a Dr. Toad character, but I think my girl could do well... :3

1) That last part is confusing me (I get it, but the way it's said...)

They will be in that room 'in definitive' (its the chosen area for them).

... I don't think it means what you think it means. Still I get it, it's their job, you'll find them there. I'm just VERY picky on my words...

2) Shouldn't there be a green dress to help identify which sister is which?

Sorry, I've taken this pic inside Flash. Their dresses changes with code, in order to avoid me from making another entire green dress.....So I use 'dress types' which only work inside the game. Updated above, to be more clear.

OK, thanks for that.

3) Their arms must be getting tired from having them up like that...

Its a picture......

I kid on this. But considering that their normal stance in the game is with their arms on their hips... *shrugs* And this is just a weird idea and not really something to be added, but I was thinking the room could use a potted plant. I don't know why, I'm just being weird.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Krista normally doesn't wear clothes, so her going bottomless is kinda expected of her. And at least this can at least bring the Nurse outfit in. Then again looking through some sprites, there is a Dr. Toad character, but I think my girl could do well... :3

I am taking about Peach. Peach, when wearing the nurse outfit, is bottomless. As about Krista normally not wearing clothes, remember Toyloli made clothes for her. Its already in the game, she is wearing a kind of dystopic clothes. If you want, I can make her remove her clothes in front of Peach in order for Peach to 'check for her illness'. It could be a lie, of course ('a high fever').
I can make Dr. Toad as well, who will be a normal toad, but with a white shirt and a mask. It can be female toads too.

... I don't think it means what you think it means. Still I get it, it's their job, you'll find them there. I'm just VERY picky on my words...

Nevermind then

I kid on this. But considering that their normal stance in the game is with their arms on their hips... *shrugs* And this is just a weird idea and not really something to be added, but I was thinking the room could use a potted plant. I don't know why, I'm just being weird.

Okay, some plants, right. Maybe a small piranha plant on it? Then just a 'quick' scene? (if Peach approaches and tries to talk to the little piranha, she can just a bit of the tentacles while playing with her breasts and thats it).

[VintageBass]

Krista normally doesn't wear clothes, so her going bottomless is kinda expected of her. And at least this can at least bring the Nurse outfit in. Then again looking through some sprites, there is a Dr. Toad character, but I think my girl could do well... :3

I am taking about Peach. Peach, when wearing the nurse outfit, is bottomless. As about Krista normally not wearing clothes, remember Toyloli made clothes for her. Its already in the game, she is wearing a kind of dystopic clothes. If you want, I can make her remove her clothes in front of Peach in order for Peach to 'check for her illness'. It could be a lie, of course ('a high fever').

So it's getting hot in the infirmary, so she needs to take off her clothes? Yeah that sounds right. Not to mention that while I do have clothes, that still sounds like something she will do to get outta them.

I can make Dr. Toad as well, who will be a normal toad, but with a white shirt and a mask. It can be female toads too.

From the Spriters Resource:

Okay, some plants, right. Maybe a small piranha plant on it? Then just a 'quick' scene? (if Peach approaches and tries to talk to the little piranha, she can just a bit of the tentacles while playing with her breasts and thats it).

Well that's kinda what I wanted to do in my room but with a small Piranha Plant, but again I said that it couldn't be added, I just thought of adding some extra color to the room.

[Ivan-Aedler]

From the Spriters Resource:

How about this?

toad doctor nurse.jpg (26.95 KiB) Viewed 2099 times

Well that's kinda what I wanted to do in my room but with a small Piranha Plant, but again I said that it couldn't be added, I just thought of adding some extra color to the room.

Anyway I'll keep it in my TODO. It would be interesting for the player to 'lounge', or to 'spare' in certain rooms in the game, because the more scenes and actions, the better As I've said before, when we give players many options to explore, they can make hundreds to thousands of combinations, making their pleasure rich.

[VintageBass]

How about this?

The only thing that needs work is the mask, just to make it more fitting to his face, but otherwise I like it. Heck I'll call him Dr. McSteam T. just for the lulz. And that's my own name, he could be Dr. Toad in the game.

Anyway I'll keep it in my TODO. It would be interesting for the player to 'lounge', or to 'spare' in certain rooms in the game, because the more scenes and actions, the better As I've said before, when we give players many options to explore, they can make hundreds to thousands of combinations, making their pleasure rich.

And I'm all for just having the option not to have everything be fuckable, just to give some room to breathe between the sex. Eh, whatever works. A little green is always good.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Game updated! Level 6-2.

The only thing that needs work is the mask

Updated above!

And I'm all for just having the option not to have everything be fuckable, just to give some room to breathe between the sex. Eh, whatever works. A little green is always good.

Well, dont worry about that because 'making all fuckable' doesnt mean the player MUST fuck them all He/she can skip all of them if they want, and much more easier to skip those which needs 'pressing UP' to activate (like the broom). Those objects can be skipped (like NUMBER 3 - Go away).

Very awesome game, though there is a bug with the wrench guys. When you get to their pussy attack as soon as it finishes it glitches out where you cant do anything and have to lose a life just to Pussy attack? You say the scene where he fingers her while she is spended, then he fucks her?

I cant reproduce it so far. Did you get the problem in the airship?

is there any way i can get a hold of some of the games assets, i mostly want to see how its all individually put together to see if i can help contribute in anyway. I'm a graphic artist (Intuos 5 ftw) and would be glad to help out when i have free time

Great, it would be great! FTW! I'll PM you soon with many assets.

[CloudRipper]

Very awesome game, though there is a bug with the wrench guys. When you get to their pussy attack as soon as it finishes it glitches out where you cant do anything and have to lose a life just to Pussy attack? You say the scene where he fingers her while she is spended, then he fucks her?

I cant reproduce it so far. Did you get the problem in the airship?

Yeah its on the airships. Ill try it again later on tonight and see if it happens again

[screwy]

is there any way i can get a hold of some of the games assets, i mostly want to see how its all individually put together to see if i can help contribute in anyway. I'm a graphic artist (Intuos 5 ftw) and would be glad to help out when i have free time

Great, it would be great! FTW! I'll PM you soon with many assets.

That would be great, look forward to it

[Thatguy45]

So is the plan still to include the other Mario girls (Golf, Tennis, Wario girls, Pauline, etc) in the Bonus Delfino level (or anywhere for that matter)? Or the Toad scene where he spreads "sunscreen" on Peach's back? I've been hoping for the other girls at least for a while. I understand that character designs and models need to be created first, but I just don't want the idea to be forgotten.

[VintageBass]

The only thing that needs work is the mask

Updated above!

Well it still needs to be smoothed out for the lineart, but I still like the mask, it's a very good touch.

And I'm all for just having the option not to have everything be fuckable, just to give some room to breathe between the sex. Eh, whatever works. A little green is always good.

Well, dont worry about that because 'making all fuckable' doesnt mean the player MUST fuck them all He/she can skip all of them if they want, and much more easier to skip those which needs 'pressing UP' to activate (like the broom). Those objects can be skipped (like NUMBER 3 - Go away).

I'm not asking about that (although that's good that option is there), I'm just saying about stuff that she can't fuck at all. Like making some creatures, like my Bumpty, or items that she wouldn't touch.

So is the plan still to include the other Mario girls (Golf, Tennis, Wario girls, Pauline, etc) in the Bonus Delfino level (or anywhere for that matter)?

Or, in the very, very off-chance, Pauline becoming playable? It's just a random idea and it'll probably be interesting to see her playable.

[Ivan-Aedler]

That would be great, look forward to it

I will need some time to gather many resoruces. Also, I think you can edit your post above and remove all the quotes, except the last one, so I wont be confused, like:

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Great, it would be great! FTW! I'll PM you soon with many assets.

That would be great, look forward to it!

So is the plan still to........

Hello back!!!! I miss you What's the news, how about the health, the future plans? You disappeared, then I needed to make scenes without sketches.... Do you know we're almost at 190 normal scenes + 22 Peach only scenes? Ok you can continue

So is the plan still to include the other Mario girls (Golf, Tennis, Wario girls, Pauline, etc) in the Bonus Delfino level (or anywhere for that matter)?

Priority: Krystal, Pauline (as playable characters), then in the game, Krystal scene (maybe in the forest, where Peach can watch) and a Pauline scene (maybe the scene dialogue I've received from MPLDAM, with or without the Donkey Kong part, as I dont plan making DK. If I do, it will be very low low low priority).

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PAULINE
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Donkey Kong comes running toward Princess Peach.
DK: Ook Oook!
Peach: Eeek! Someone please save meeee!!!
Pauline: DK, down!
DK calms down
Pauline: Oh, so it's you. The one who stole my spotlight all those years ago. (she holds a grudge, you see)
Peach: Umm... who are you again?
Pauline: I'm Pauline! How can you forget the one who you stole all the glory from?! The fans, the games, the beautiful guys with large erect members waiting to serve you. All that could've been mine!
Peach: I'm sorry, but Mario never talks about you. And I don't want that... last thing you said. More importantly, why are you with Donkey Kong?
Pauline: Oh this?! DK is my playmate. He loves playing with me and now he'll play... with you!
(Try to confuse DK and run away) (Subject)
......

-No plans to add Wario girls.
-No plan to add Golf and Tennis girls (I also havent played the game, I dont know their appearance. If I add them, maybe only as a cameo.

Or the Toad scene where he spreads "sunscreen" on Peach's back?

I'll make a button above the 'tapestry sheet' Peach will use to lay down, then a dialogue will appear ('call a toad for a massage', 'call a toad to spread sunscren', etc), then I can reuse some scenes, with certain different dialogues and poses.

I've been hoping for the other girls at least for a while. I understand that character designs and models need to be created first, but I just don't want the idea to be forgotten.

I prefer to make more levels and more scenes just because those are the most cumbersome and complex to make, so when those are finished, its easy to add dialogues and 1 or 2 characters. And I still need help of a good friend who can depict the scenes, like you always did Thats because it helps the scene creation like 20% or more. See you great man!

Yeah its on the airships. Ill try it again later on tonight and see if it happens again

Ok. Please pay atention on the scene, if its the one the Wrench guy pushes Peach inside the hole, or the one he starts findering her while she is suspended above.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Well it still needs to be smoothed out for the lineart, but I still like the mask, it's a very good touch.

I've based the art from this:

http://www.vectorstock.com/composite/21 ... vector.jpg

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Do you prefer like this below? Although I wont be changing the current mask for a while.

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I'm not asking about that (although that's good that option is there), I'm just saying about stuff that she can't fuck at all. Like making some creatures, like my Bumpty, or items that she wouldn't touch.

No problem. You say what you want from the Bumpty. And we already have some enemies Peach wont touch: Lava bubbles and Sparklies.

Or, in the very, very off-chance, Pauline becoming playable? It's just a random idea and it'll probably be interesting to see her playable.

Answered above.

[VintageBass]

So is the plan still to include the other Mario girls (Golf, Tennis, Wario girls, Pauline, etc) in the Bonus Delfino level (or anywhere for that matter)?

Priority: Krystal, Pauline (as playable characters), then in the game, Krystal scene (maybe in the forest, where Peach can watch) and a Pauline scene (maybe the scene dialogue I've received from MPLDAM, with or without the Donkey Kong part, as I dont plan making DK. If I do, it will be very low low low priority).

OK, so I was right about Pauline... and now to fix that dialogue:

Pauline: Oh, so it's you. The one who stole my spotlight all those years ago. (she holds a grudge, you see)

I could do a little re-writing on the spotlight part, probably something like "You're the one Mario has been seeing all of these years, huh?"

Pauline: I'm Pauline! How can you forget the one who you stole all the glory from?! The fans, the games, the beautiful guys with large erect members waiting to serve you. All that could've been mine!

Again, I don't feel kinda right with a certain level of fourth-wall breaking. I understand where that is going, but I would probably write it as:

Pauline: I'm Pauline, Mario's old girlfriend. He and I used to be an item before he left me for some bimbo, and it looks like you're that bimbo. Damn, if I were still with him, I'll probably be just as famous as you, but nope!

-No plans to add Wario girls.

Wasn't there plans to add Mona at some point, probably to hang out with Wario? I know the other girls are kinda iffy due to them being young, so Mona was more suitable to work with.

-No plan to add Golf and Tennis girls (I also havent played the game, I dont know their appearance. If I add them, maybe only as a cameo.

I haven't played them either yet I can go on the Wiki to get their images. Really you should do that more often. It helps greatly!

Or the Toad scene where he spreads "sunscreen" on Peach's back?

I'll make a button above the 'tapestry sheet' Peach will use to lay down,

It's a towel, Ivan.

Well it still needs to be smoothed out for the lineart, but I still like the mask, it's a very good touch.

Do you prefer like this? Although I wont be changing the current mask for a while.

I have no problems with the mask, I'm just asking for the lines to be a bit smoother and not quite bumpy, like it's done with one line for the different layers on the mask.

[Ivan-Aedler]

OK, so I was right about Pauline... and now to fix that dialogue:
I could do a little re-writing on the spotlight part, probably something like "You're the one Mario has been seeing all of these years, huh?"
Pauline: "I'm Pauline, Mario's old girlfriend. He and I used to be an item before he left me for some bimbo, and it looks like you're that bimbo. Damn, if I were still with him, I'll probably be just as famous as you, but nope!"

Hmmmm its great but I think it needs a bit more sauce. MPLDAM? Are you there? FurrinGok? Scientific American?

Wasn't there plans to add Mona at some point, probably to hang out with Wario? I know the other girls are kinda iffy due to them being young, so Mona was more suitable to work with.

Mona.......Pauline.......Pauline.........Mona......
Voting Poll started!

I haven't played them either yet I can go on the Wiki to get their images. Really you should do that more often. It helps greatly!

AGAIN, my internet is not that great. Sometimes I stay MINUTES just looking at a white screen till something comes out from google. I prefer to keep making the game. You guys can help (or not), as its as easy as cake (I think). :/

It's a towel, Ivan.

I am using a tapestry object. If Digfree, Biles , Slayer_J, Messi or another great man can make a better looking towel, I can use it faster

I have no problems with the mask, I'm just asking for the lines to be a bit smoother and not quite bumpy, like it's done with one line for the different layers on the mask.

Hmmmmmm....curvier lines.......ok I'll do it later. Thanks

[VintageBass]

OK, so I was right about Pauline... and now to fix that dialogue:
I could do a little re-writing on the spotlight part, probably something like "You're the one Mario has been seeing all of these years, huh?"
Pauline: "I'm Pauline, Mario's old girlfriend. He and I used to be an item before he left me for some bimbo, and it looks like you're that bimbo. Damn, if I were still with him, I'll probably be just as famous as you, but nope!"

Hmmmm its great but I think it needs a bit more sauce. MPLDAM? Are you there? FurrinGok? Scientific American?

Well it could work, I'm just working off of what MPL wrote to work well with the game.

Wasn't there plans to add Mona at some point, probably to hang out with Wario? I know the other girls are kinda iffy due to them being young, so Mona was more suitable to work with.

Mona.......Pauline.......Pauline.........Mona......
Voting Poll started!

No, Mona wasn't a suggested character to play as. I wrote "probably to hang out with Wario," meaning that she'll be in the game, but as an NPC, not playable. Although the poll between Pauline and Krystal is fine even if it's going to be one-sided: aka Krystal.

I haven't played them either yet I can go on the Wiki to get their images. Really you should do that more often. It helps greatly!

AGAIN, my internet is not that great. Sometimes I stay MINUTES just looking at a white screen till something comes out from google. I prefer to keep making the game. You guys can help (or not), as its as easy as cake (I think). :/

Once you do, then have the Mario Wiki bookmark because it will be great. And you just keep on trying until you run out of cake. :3

[FurrinGok]

OK, so I was right about Pauline... and now to fix that dialogue:
I could do a little re-writing on the spotlight part, probably something like "You're the one Mario has been seeing all of these years, huh?"
Pauline: "I'm Pauline, Mario's old girlfriend. He and I used to be an item before he left me for some bimbo, and it looks like you're that bimbo. Damn, if I were still with him, I'll probably be just as famous as you, but nope!"

Hmmmm its great but I think it needs a bit more sauce. MPLDAM? Are you there? FurrinGok? Scientific American?

"Oh, you're Princess Peach, are you? I'm Pauline, Mario's previous girlfriend. He and I used to be an item, before he left me for some bimbo! And it looks like you're that bimbo. Damn, if I were still with him, I'd probably be just as famous as you, but nope!"
Actually, as this is dialogue, it's a bit iffier than spelling mistakes, because people can speak in improper grammar. Aside from "I'll" needing to be changed to "I'd," you don't actually need to change it.

[VintageBass]

"Oh, you're Princess Peach, are you? I'm Pauline, Mario's previous girlfriend. He and I used to be an item, before he left me for some bimbo! And it looks like you're that bimbo. Damn, if I were still with him, I'd probably be just as famous as you, but nope!"
Actually, as this is dialogue, it's a bit iffier than spelling mistakes, because people can speak in improper grammar. Aside from "I'll" needing to be changed to "I'd," you don't actually need to change it.

Yeah the grammar in dialogue varies from character to character, so yeah it's really iffy for sure. Otherwise, thanks for the fix-up. I try my best at this, at least there is just a small tweak to one word and a replace word to emphasize things.

[CloudRipper]

Ive tried to get back to the airships to test that glitch I mentioned but my room mates have not been giving me enough time alone on a computer in order to get just to the airship in world 1 so I can try it.

As soon as Im able to get back to that area in the game again Ill see if its still doing it. And its the last animation that the wrench guys do

[screwy]

That would be great, look forward to it

I will need some time to gather many resoruces. Also, I think you can edit your post above and remove all the quotes, except the last one, so I wont be confused, like:

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Great, it would be great! FTW! I'll PM you soon with many assets.

That would be great, look forward to it!

i cant respond to PMs because of my lack of time actually responding on the forum

thanks for the assets, but i was hoping to get a sprite or npc
i mean i really appreciate the assets youve given me to this point, but mostly i wanted to see if i could help with the sprites themself which is why i wanted to see how it all attached.
at one point you had the scene creator on but i cant seem to find it anymore(probably one of those "right in front of me things"