Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[Weejiez]

Derriere Eyelet? Derriere Mouth? Back Vacuity? What!? I think looking toward a creative writer instead of a thesaurus is the way to go None of these are sexual or cute in any way, at least to me. Also letting Bass give all the dialogue a makeover wouldn't be such a bad idea...apart from having to put the new dialogue back in the game A sex scene needs good dialogue to properly convey emotions and pleasure, and when it's not written as well as it could the scene suffers. Just look at American porn, awful dialogue...That's why most are straight to the point. But it CAN be done well, don't let anyone tell you different. A good writer can make a world of difference.

Seriously though, if you want some anal synonyms I'll give a few that might make more sense and still sound cute: Back Door (fairly common, sounds okay), Peach (women's asses are commonly reffered to as such. Plus that word play? Can't pass that up), Brown Eye (another common one, doesn't sound too bad), Corn Hole (Again common. More the act than the asshole itself but meh), Poop Chute, there's also the term 'tossing the salad'.

These I feel are much better, and actually used terms for an asshole. Just my two cents.

One more thing, love the sockop scene! Looking forward to more from these guys

[Ivan-Aedler]

I'm not really feeling any of the new names for asshole aside from the plumbing ones. I mean, her boyfriend is a plumber I'm sure he's sued one of those terms before. The only thing I can say is that Peach should avoid using the word cunt, unless she's a nymph.

Ok, I'll keep this in mind.

Not an awful lot of women, outside porn that is, choose to use that word to describe their good n' plenties She could always use 'cunny' instead of 'cunt' in back cunt and butt cunt if it does come down to it or if your set on using them.

Ok changing it!

Honestly though, there aren't many cute names for an asshole because, well, it's an asshole. Aside from anal sex it does pretty unpleasant things

Not for Peach. Peach doesnt poo, and its already in the inner concepts.

I think the only cute terms for asshole are: 'back door' ("He's knocking at my back door! Oh no!") and peach ("Oh my gosh, it's eating my royal peach! It's tongue feels so good!")

Hmmmmmmm Peach? Does it work?

Actually "peach" could also work for her pussy as well. It's going to be pretty tricky finding a fruit to use, maybe a pomegranate.

"Oh no, my back pomegranate!!" D:

A good alternative for cute names in general would be to have her use normal terms for her asshole when she's decent, and when she becomes a nymph she could use much dirtier terms which would then make the normal terms seem cute in comparison. I don't know how much work that would take, I'm just spitballing here.

Possible! But it might be done later, or much later, when the game is more complete THank you!

It's "rosebud," not "sled." It's just how I think sometime.

Oh but rosebud is like a flower. A thing to be explored
Sled is those machines which carry out ice. I dont understand the comparison.

Peach is British? I could see some characters using that, but that depends, because I have no idea about who possesses an accent.

She might be using the term due to other facts. Saying 'Peach' doesnt mean she is a fruit.

... Uh, yeah... How about we just give up using new words and just stick with what you have. Or, again, get a writer to do this! You don't have to worry about any of this nonsense.

So let's go?

For the good of all of us, except the ones who are dead?

Hehehe, ok ok. Removing it.

Gash- Yeah, not that one. Definitely not that one...

Oh sorry, I dont know what this means anyway removing it.

-chink - And that's another no for completely different reasons...

-orifice - Rather blunt. :/ -lacuna - Wrong part of the hips. -dimple - I heard butt dimples are a thing.. - cut: Same thing with gash. - shaft - Huh, neat to bring Shaft in this game. -eyelet Yeah, I don't want to associate eyes with my butt, thank you very much.

Removing them.

-mouth

Wrong end! xD

Why not 'Oh he will kiss my butth mouth!!' ??

-rent

I know she's going to be storing her coins up there, but how much is she charging for that?

So a nono?

-vacuity

Man, I didn't think Peach is that kind of a blonde to begin with...

Vacuity comes from vacuum, right? I dont see any problem.

-notch

Why do you want to bring Notch on this? He's already dealing with problems with angry players already.

But this is a good name, right?

.. Oh no, my "Derriere Eyelet'... my 'Derriere Mouth'....my 'Back Vacuity' is being used..

NO. Just... no.

The first wont be anymore in. But 'my derriere mouth' is not bad, man.

Or, again, leave it to a writer to come up with better dialogue instead of leaving it in your hands. You got a ton on your plate already, trying to think on this sort of thing is just going to delay things further...

Ok, then!

Oh go on, tell me more. Now then, I need a good start before I begin overhauling everything. And having FurrinGok be my Grammar Nazi would be greatly appreciated since grammar isn't my strongest suit.

Well, lets start slowly at least. Goomba dialogues for example.

As I believe it was CaptainFalcon already said, the only place that I have ever used anything remotely close to the terms was in badly translated Doujinshi. Whether the translators where just bad or they did direct translations on purpose to try to be funny I do not know. These are not cute or funny, they are just stupid if you ask me.

Not at all surprised that Ivan didn't get that one. I am pretty sure most people outside the US wouldn't get it. Hell, most younger people in the US wouldn't get it anymore either.

[VintageBass]

It's "rosebud," not "sled." It's just how I think sometime.

Not at all surprised that Ivan didn't get that one. I am pretty sure most people outside the US wouldn't get it. Hell, most younger people in the US wouldn't get it anymore either.

True. I even said that he's not going to get it even I spell it out. Thankfully there are those who can make the same references in new manners.

For the good of all of us, except the ones who are dead?

You just made my day.

I aim to please.

Honestly though, there aren't many cute names for an asshole because, well, it's an asshole. Aside from anal sex it does pretty unpleasant things

Not for Peach. Peach doesnt poo, and its already in the inner concepts.

Well she does poop... coins that is. Remember?

Actually "peach" could also work for her pussy as well. It's going to be pretty tricky finding a fruit to use, maybe a pomegranate.

"Oh no, my back pomegranate!!" D:

... OK, scratch fruit all together. Too much of a mouthful.

It's "rosebud," not "sled." It's just how I think sometime.

Oh but rosebud is like a flower. A thing to be explored
Sled is those machines which carry out ice. I dont understand the comparison.

Darthan explains it best:

Not at all surprised that Ivan didn't get that one. I am pretty sure most people outside the US wouldn't get it. Hell, most younger people in the US wouldn't get it anymore either.

That is all, a silly little pop culture line.

Peach is British? I could see some characters using that, but that depends, because I have no idea about who possesses an accent.

She might be using the term due to other facts. Saying 'Peach' doesnt mean she is a fruit.

Well it does add some flair if the girl uses an accent, but Peach doesn't have one.

For the good of all of us, except the ones who are dead?

Hehehe, ok ok. Removing it.

God I like making references!

-chink - And that's another no for completely different reasons...

Trying to avoid any racial comments on that.

-orifice - Rather blunt. :/ -lacuna - Wrong part of the hips. -dimple - I heard butt dimples are a thing.. - cut: Same thing with gash. - shaft - Huh, neat to bring Shaft in this game. -eyelet Yeah, I don't want to associate eyes with my butt, thank you very much.

Removing them.

Aw, but Shaft would be an awesome addition! Not to be used for Peach's anus, but still an awesome thing, although how to work him in is a thing...

-mouth

Wrong end! xD

Why not 'Oh he will kiss my butth mouth!!' ??

Because it doesn't sound right, and... just think about it more in depth for a moment.

-rent

I know she's going to be storing her coins up there, but how much is she charging for that?

So a nono?

I'm being silly on that. But I'm reminding if the whole Peach storing coins in her butt is still a thing/

-vacuity

Man, I didn't think Peach is that kind of a blonde to begin with...

Vacuity comes from vacuum, right? I dont see any problem.

Google?

lack of thought or intelligence; empty-headedness

... Yeah.

-notch

Why do you want to bring Notch on this? He's already dealing with problems with angry players already.

But this is a good name, right?

Not for the butt.

.. Oh no, my "Derriere Eyelet'... my 'Derriere Mouth'....my 'Back Vacuity' is being used..

NO. Just... no.

The first wont be anymore in. But 'my derriere mouth' is not bad, man.

That doesn't sound like proper English, more like what Darthan and CaptainFalcon have been saying with it being like a badly translated doujin.

Oh go on, tell me more. Now then, I need a good start before I begin overhauling everything. And having FurrinGok be my Grammar Nazi would be greatly appreciated since grammar isn't my strongest suit.

Well, lets start slowly at least. Goomba dialogues for example.

Yeah, no. How about you let me know everything before I work backwards.

As I believe it was CaptainFalcon already said, the only place that I have ever used anything remotely close to the terms was in badly translated Doujinshi. Whether the translators where just bad or they did direct translations on purpose to try to be funny I do not know. These are not cute or funny, they are just stupid if you ask me.

Sadly, it's kinda how your stuff is sounding right now. Even the poll sounds like a bad translation. Again you need someone to do all your writing for this game.

... Uh, yeah... How about we just give up using new words and just stick with what you have. Or, again, get a writer to do this! You don't have to worry about any of this nonsense.

So let's go?

Yes, let's GO!

[Ivan-Aedler]

I have a question:
Can I make Poochy 'talk' in the dialogues? (he saying something?) or Peach will understand him while he is just 'arf arf'?

[FurrinGok]

Give someone the chance to write it, like FurrinGok or me. Heck giving it to me will probably result in a full re-write on everything.

Okay, come in! FurrinGok is also a great person, I've talked to him. Okay you can re.......WAIT...no need to go that far.

I must have skipped over a few things, but I am the "leader" of the Grammar Nazi squad for GnW, so as far as checking into what's written properly and what isn't, I suppose it's something I could do.

Actually, I'm kind of used to running things by a parser system where you can insert something like [anus] and get any word from the randomized set, but the rest of it is something that could certainly take some looking at. I'll have to get a list of what all dialogue there is, though, I'm not exactly fond of using the cheat function and I'm too lazy to finish the game in a run. And if the list of words was what you're at, then find somebody else. I'm good at correcting sentences and paragraphs not individual word lists.

Give someone the chance to write it, like FurrinGok or me. Heck giving it to me will probably result in a full re-write on everything.

Okay, come in! FurrinGok is also a great person, I've talked to him. Okay you can re.......WAIT...no need to go that far.

Oh go on, tell me more. Now then, I need a good start before I begin overhauling everything. And having FurrinGok be my Grammar Nazi would be greatly appreciated since grammar isn't my strongest suit.

As far as backing a person up who's doing the primary work themselves, I'm more than willing to help out with that... Although, keep in mind, GnW is my primary project, if pixel calls me to a task over there I'll be on hiatus over here.

I have a question:
Can I make Poochy 'talk' in the dialogues? (he saying something?) or Peach will understand him while he is just 'arf arf'?

I say have a translation afterwards, like Yoshi does in Super Mario RPG Legend of The Seven Stars--He still is just sasying "Yoshi!" but the text box says "Yoshi! (Welcome, Mario!)" or something like that.

[VintageBass]

I have a question:
Can I make Poochy 'talk' in the dialogues? (he saying something?) or Peach will understand him while he is just 'arf arf'?

Have him go 'arf arf'

... but the rest of it is something that could certainly take some looking at. I'll have to get a list of what all dialogue there is, though, I'm not exactly fond of using the cheat function and I'm too lazy to finish the game in a run. And if the list of words was what you're at, then find somebody else. I'm good at correcting sentences and paragraphs not individual word lists.

I've been asking about this for some time, and there's plenty of times where I've been told to look at the spreadsheet that's set up. But the problem is that is I don't particularly like that format and it's something I'm not used to. That and it also confuses me, and there's the same matter of going to go into the game and collect ALL of the lines to put down on it. I'm with you on that, I'm just lazy to go through everything to get all the lines. That and there's multiple stuff for the scenes, especially once Peach completes the cycle of scenes and goes full on nymph.

It's just a matter of one of us to go in and write down EVERYTHING or Ivan going in and copying everything.

Oh go on, tell me more. Now then, I need a good start before I begin overhauling everything. And having FurrinGok be my Grammar Nazi would be greatly appreciated since grammar isn't my strongest suit.

As far as backing a person up who's doing the primary work themselves, I'm more than willing to help out with that... Although, keep in mind, GnW is my primary project, if pixel calls me to a task over there I'll be on hiatus over here.

Fair enough, I won't hold you back on that. I also got my own projects to worry about and I need to do, but it's good to have someone else working on a common goal.

I say have a translation afterwards, like Yoshi does in Super Mario RPG Legend of The Seven Stars--He still is just sasying "Yoshi!" but the text box says "Yoshi! (Welcome, Mario!)" or something like that.

Reminds me of that book from Super Mario Adventures where that bit of Yoshi translation was brought up. Funny bit.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Well she does poop... coins that is. Remember?

Yes, and many more objects and she can cum too. White tasty things (considered she is a pure and delicious blonde). "I am cumming from my Derriere pocket!"

... OK, scratch fruit all together. Too much of a mouthful.

"Ohh my back pome!"

That is all, a silly little pop culture line.

Ok got it

Aw, but Shaft would be an awesome addition! Not to be used for Peach's anus, but still an awesome thing, although how to work him in is a thing...

Hmmmmmm......like 'my shaft area where my pussy lives?'

Because it doesn't sound right, and... just think about it more in depth for a moment.

Again I see no problem.

I'm being silly on that. But I'm reminding if the whole Peach storing coins in her butt is still a thing

Well, provided 'rent' can be used as a innocent Peach (not a nymph)...

Google?

lack of thought or intelligence; empty-headedness

... Yeah.

Vacuity

Notch - Not for the butt.

Notch

Notch: its a....

Stop please.

That doesn't sound like proper English, more like what Darthan and CaptainFalcon have been saying with it being like a badly translated doujin.

Ok, so how about only 'derriere'? 'Oh he's up to my derriere!'

Yeah, no. How about you let me know everything before I work backwards.

You can use the gallery. In order to give you a list of, say, 1000 words, the text is inside the game code, hard to unite them, then I have to filter all \u code).

So let's go?

Yes, let's GO!

Ok!

[Ivan-Aedler]

Actually, I'm kind of used to running things by a parser system where you can insert something like [anus] and get any word from the randomized set, but the rest of it is something that could certainly take some looking at.

Not hard to do Plenty possible.

I'll have to get a list of what all dialogue there is, though, I'm not exactly fond of using the cheat function and I'm too lazy to finish the game in a run.

You can use the cheat then check the gallery. There is also random dialogues (those ones I can send to you as a txt). I think we can work by parts, like enemy by enemy.

As far as backing a person up who's doing the primary work themselves, I'm more than willing to help out with that... Although, keep in mind, GnW is my primary project, if pixel calls me to a task over there I'll be on hiatus over here.

No problem, really

I say have a translation afterwards, like Yoshi does in Super Mario RPG Legend of The Seven Stars--He still is just sasying "Yoshi!" but the text box says "Yoshi! (Welcome, Mario!)" or something like that.

Ok I'll be using the parenthesis then. But we can also use Peach sayings like that:
"Oh, you said you want to touch my butt? Why what?"

Have him go 'arf arf'

Then Peach saying 'Oh you said this and that?' It works.

[Darthan]

I have a question:
Can I make Poochy 'talk' in the dialogues? (he saying something?) or Peach will understand him while he is just 'arf arf'?

I agree with something similar to what FurrinGok said. Have him just say arf arf in a speech bubble and then have what he is actually trying to say in a thought bubble. This way Peach just hears him barking but we as the players are aware of what poochi is actually trying to say. You can them make Peach react as if she knows what he wants but she may not always be correct.

Hmmmmmm......like 'my shaft area where my pussy lives?'

He is making another pop culture reference there.

For the good of all of us, except the ones who are dead?

Hehehe, ok ok. Removing it.

Also a pop culture reference. Also one of the best ending songs to any game EVER.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I agree with something similar to what FurrinGok said. Have him just say arf arf in a speech bubble and then have what he is actually trying to say in a thought bubble. This way Peach just hears him barking but we as the players are aware of what poochi is actually trying to say. You can them make Peach react as if she knows what he wants but she may not always be correct.

Done!

He is making another pop culture reference there.

But is shaft 'good' for asshole? Yes or no? THIS is what's important for me.
I will ask people please to avoid pop cultures while talking to me thank you.

Also a pop culture reference. Also one of the best ending songs to any game EVER.

But is aperture 'good' for asshole? Yes or no?

[Ivan-Aedler]

Another question: Do Poochy has a sound (in any Mario game)? So I can have it / recreate it?
If not, I'll use a free arf sound.

Well it does add some flair if the girl uses an accent, but Peach doesn't have one.

I still see it as something Peach have learned or just the way she prefer saying 'Arsehole'.

[VintageBass]

Another question: Do Poochy has a sound (in any Mario game)? So I can have it / recreate it?
If not, I'll use a free arf sound.

Yes he does have a bark, and he does bark constantly while walking (according to the Mario wiki). So it's probably better just keep it to when interacting with Peach.

Well she does poop... coins that is. Remember?

Yes, and many more objects and she can cum too. White tasty things (considered she is a pure and delicious blonde). "I am cumming from my Derriere pocket!"

1) Because hentai biology. 2) That just reminds me of something (although for the wrong hole): "It's not a purse!" (note this is for dangerous objects, included a loaded revolver. Monday nights make question humans...) 3) Please don't add any other words behind "derriere."

... OK, scratch fruit all together. Too much of a mouthful.

"Ohh my back pome!"

All right I'll give you that, that sounds good.

She might be using the term due to other facts. Saying 'Peach' doesnt mean she is a fruit.

Whoops another problem with quotes, you answered what I did before.

Fixed.

Aw, but Shaft would be an awesome addition! Not to be used for Peach's anus, but still an awesome thing, although how to work him in is a thing...

Hmmmmmm......like 'my shaft area where my pussy lives?'

1) Shaft's more used on the penis than referring to the anus. 2) I'm once again referencing something that most people aren't getting at all. Note I said "him." This means I'm saying that Shaft is a person. 3) That quote sounds more in line with her vagina than anus.

Because it doesn't sound right, and... just think about it more in depth for a moment.

Again I see no problem.

Fine, just leave this to me.

I'm being silly on that. But I'm reminding if the whole Peach storing coins in her butt is still a thing

Well, provided 'rent' can be used as a innocent Peach (not a nymph)...

Rent's more commonly used for people paying for a place to stay. I'm not aware of its usage to hole so my mind is not going to click properly with it.

Notch: its a....

Stop please.

... You're not even quoting the right thing there!

That doesn't sound like proper English, more like what Darthan and CaptainFalcon have been saying with it being like a badly translated doujin.

Ok, so how about only 'derriere'? 'Oh he's up to my derriere!'

Much better.

Yeah, no. How about you let me know everything before I work backwards.

You can use the gallery. In order to give you a list of, say, 1000 words, the text is inside the game code, hard to unite them, then I have to filter all \u code).

I've mentioned this already, I'm a lazy bum.

But is shaft 'good' for asshole? Yes or no? THIS is what's important for me.

Again, as I said, shaft is usually more for the penis than an anus, so NO.

But is aperture 'good' for asshole? Yes or no?

According to Wikipedia: "In optics, an aperture is a hole or an opening through which light travels." So, NO.

I will ask people please to avoid pop cultures while talking to me thank you.

Can't help it. I just wanna have fun with all of this!

[Darthan]

But is shaft 'good' for asshole? Yes or no? THIS is what's important for me.
I will ask people please to avoid pop cultures while talking to me thank you.

It was referencing the two films titled Shaft and the main character John Shaft.
I don't know about anyone else, but no, I don't think so.

Also a pop culture reference. Also one of the best ending songs to any game EVER.

But is aperture 'good' for asshole? Yes or no?

If you never play Portal you at least need to watch the end credits of the game, search Still Alive on youtube. It is hilarious.
Gonna have to say that aperture is not a good synonym for asshole.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Yes he does have a bark, and he does bark constantly while walking (according to the Mario wiki). So it's probably better just keep it to when interacting with Peach.

Ok then, I'll use a Cocker Spaniel bark.

1) Because hentai biology. 2) That just reminds me of something (although for the wrong hole): "It's not a purse!" (note this is for dangerous objects, included a loaded revolver. Monday nights make question humans...) 3) Please don't add any other words behind "derriere."

Okay!

All right I'll give you that, that sounds good.

Huh? Really? Ok!

1) Shaft's more used on the penis than referring to the anus. 2) I'm once again referencing something that most people aren't getting at all. Note I said "him." This means I'm saying that Shaft is a person. 3) That quote sounds more in line with her vagina than anus......Again, as I said, shaft is usually more for the penis than an anus, so NO.

Ok, to be used with her vagina in the future.

Fine, just leave this to me.

Ok!

Rent's more commonly used for people paying for a place to stay. I'm not aware of its usage to hole so my mind is not going to click properly with it.

Ok, striked it out in the last page.

... You're not even quoting the right thing there!

Hey you havent said that anyway, but google

I've mentioned this already, I'm a lazy bum.

If you want text, just tell me where to start. I've given you some, remember? If your mind says: 'I want to work with.....koopas!' tell me and I'll make a txt.

According to Wikipedia: "In optics, an aperture is a hole or an opening through which light travels." So, NO.

If you never play Portal you at least need to watch the end credits of the game, search Still Alive on youtube. It is hilarious. Gonna have to say that aperture is not a good synonym for asshole.

Can't help it. I just wanna have fun with all of this!

So say that:
(Ivan, not for you - pop culture, people!) -> "Oh Zoombies everywhere! Says Goshman."

[FurrinGok]

Yeah, no. How about you let me know everything before I work backwards.

You can use the gallery. In order to give you a list of, say, 1000 words, the text is inside the game code, hard to unite them, then I have to filter all \u code).

I've mentioned this already, I'm a lazy bum.

Yeah, please don't ask us to sit through that list. If you don't have an organized list pre-existing anywhere, then you should go through the process of making it yourself. I don't see how you could possibly have all this going already without one.

Also: Please stop adding more stuff to your massive list of quotes after posting, do what I do and open up the quotes on a separate page and start working from there, and then cut-paste new quotes into it. I wind up missing out on so many things you're saying because I don't reread posts and I won't.

1) Shaft's more used on the penis than referring to the anus. 2) I'm once again referencing something that most people aren't getting at all. Note I said "him." This means I'm saying that Shaft is a person. 3) That quote sounds more in line with her vagina than anus......Again, as I said, shaft is usually more for the penis than an anus, so NO.

Ok, to be used with her vagina in the future.

Please don't. Shaft means penis. NEVER use "Shaft" to refer to any sexual organ other than the penis. Shaft implies a rod shape, which the penis has. The vagina does not, as it is an inner-organ rather than outer.
Edit: I just looked into my dictionary and it's actually written right here, description #6 for Shaft:

[vulgar] Obscene term for penis

I've mentioned this already, I'm a lazy bum.

If you want text, just tell me where to start. I've given you some, remember? If your mind says: 'I want to work with.....koopas!' tell me and I'll make a txt.

Yeah okay that works, but could you at least work on getting the rest of them separated while we're working on one, then? Unless they're all already separated, in which case why not just zip them up and dropfile them?

[VintageBass]

Yes he does have a bark, and he does bark constantly while walking (according to the Mario wiki). So it's probably better just keep it to when interacting with Peach.

Ok then, I'll use a Cocker Spaniel bark.

If anything, if someone has ripped it from the game, someone could have the actual audio from the games.

1) Shaft's more used on the penis than referring to the anus. 3) That quote sounds more in line with her vagina than anus... ... Again, as I said, shaft is usually more for the penis than an anus, so NO.

Ok, to be used with her vagina in the future.

No, the way you phrased "my shaft area where my pussy lives?" makes it sound like it's more about her pussy than her butt, but again, as I pointed out, shaft is more about the penis, not pussy.

... You're not even quoting the right thing there!

Hey you havent said that anyway, but google

You still got that quote wrong.

I've mentioned this already, I'm a lazy bum.

If you want text, just tell me where to start. I've given you some, remember? If your mind says: 'I want to work with.....koopas!' tell me and I'll make a txt.

I frankly don't care about the scenes at the moment. All I care about is the main story since that's the backbone for everything. Scenes are nothing unless they are tied to the main plot. So with that, I would like to start with that and see where to go from there.

According to Wikipedia: "In optics, an aperture is a hole or an opening through which light travels." So, NO.

If you never play Portal you at least need to watch the end credits of the game, search Still Alive on youtube. It is hilarious. Gonna have to say that aperture is not a good synonym for asshole.

Sorry, but we know how to use words. We're not going to go out of our ways to find something for a character to say to make her sound "cute."

[Ivan-Aedler]

Yeah, please don't ask us to sit through that list. If you don't have an organized list pre-existing anywhere, then you should go through the process of making it yourself. I don't see how you could possibly have all this going already without one.

I can create lists, but I just ask for a more organized / aimed work, like 'I need goombas, koopas and shyguys text'. then I'll go there.
For sure I could have created arrays like goomba_text[1][1] //1 being the scene, 1 being the subscene where the text appears, but now its late in a way I would have to do this for 208 scenes * 6 (an average of text lines)

Also: Please stop adding more stuff to your massive list of quotes after posting, do what I do and open up the quotes on a separate page and start working from there, and then cut-paste new quotes into it. I wind up missing out on so many things you're saying because I don't reread posts and I won't.

I actually put the current meeting in parenthesis, and I try to retain two quotes at max. Many times I 'end' the conversation quote not answering to them. Its like 'ok you win' or 'ok understood'.

Please don't. Shaft means penis. NEVER use "Shaft" to refer to any sexual organ other than the penis.

Ok got it!

Yeah okay that works, but could you at least work on getting the rest of them separated while we're working on one, then? Unless they're all already separated, in which case why not just zip them up and dropfile them?

I can create like goomba.txt, koopa.txt, ok alright. I'll be uploading those over time. But please ask Vintage if he has already the goombas and maybe even shyguys because I remember upping to him.

If anything, if someone has ripped it from the game, someone could have the actual audio from the games.

I'll appreciate if someone can find his sound.

You still got that quote wrong.

I am just kidding!

I frankly don't care about the scenes at the moment. All I care about is the main story since that's the backbone for everything. Scenes are nothing unless they are tied to the main plot. So with that, I would like to start with that and see where to go from there.

With that = with the scene dialogues, or with the main story? If the main story, then I'll give you the txt of the current cutscenes / prologue.

[VintageBass]

If anything, if someone has ripped it from the game, someone could have the actual audio from the games.

I'll appreciate if someone can find his sound.

... OK, checked Yoshi's Island and no luck there.

I frankly don't care about the scenes at the moment. All I care about is the main story since that's the backbone for everything. Scenes are nothing unless they are tied to the main plot. So with that, I would like to start with that and see where to go from there.

With that = with the scene dialogues, or with the main story? If the main story, then I'll give you the txt of the current cutscenes / prologue.

Yes, I am referring to the main story, so gimme!

[Ivan-Aedler]

... OK, checked Yoshi's Island and no luck there.

Its sad he only appears in Yoshi Island, Tetris Attack, Yoshi's Story, Mario Party Advance and in Mario Kart: Double Dash (this one only as a cameo).
He's cute in a way he can appear in some levels and Peach can 'play' with him more times. I'll make him appear a bit of random, like he is really travelling through words. He might appear in some normal levels (even inside Boggly Tree, but in a rarer event) then in Peach's Castle, in Peach's Castle sewers and in Toads's Forest area. I decided to make a 'combo scene' with him (like in stand-microphone): you press a given number and Peach changes position. This system is more resilient and the player can create many combinations.

Yes, I am referring to the main story, so gimme!

Ok, I've PM'ed you about the situation.

[VintageBass]

... OK, checked Yoshi's Island and no luck there.

Its sad he only appears in Yoshi Island, Tetris Attack, Yoshi's Story, Mario Party Advance and in Mario Kart: Double Dash (this one only as a cameo).

There is also Yoshi's New Island that came out recently and he got his own part in it as well, pretty much doing the same thing like in the original game. Really I went for Tetris Attack for the game with the sound byte because that's the game I know that has a good bark in it. If he's in the others (I'll exclude Double Dash since it is a cameo), then it's likely that there is a sound for him.

I think looking toward a creative writer instead of a thesaurus is the way to go

I know, I'm working on that. And it's kinda too bad you're still new, your responses take a bit of time to get approved. These posts are pretty much saying what I already, but this helps out a lot with the number of people going against Ivan's new words. Nothing too bad, all to help out in the long run.

None of these are sexual or cute in any way, at least to me.

Same here.

Also letting Bass give all the dialogue a makeover wouldn't be such a bad idea...apart from having to put the new dialogue back in the game

Yes, I can at least come up with better lines than... wait, I can't put the new stuff in? Well, actually I can't considering I know nothing about coding, so yeah it's better for me to stick to re-writing and coming up with new lines for the old and new scenes. But I rather focus on the main storyline instead of scenes since that's the backbone and getting that will lead to better scenes, especially those in the story, and in general a better quality.

Just look at American porn, awful dialogue...That's why most are straight to the point. But it CAN be done well, don't let anyone tell you different. A good writer can make a world of difference.

Yeah, sometimes you'll get the occasional laugh and maybe a good line, but those are so rare that it's better to leave the actors quiet. That, and as mentioned, doujin and hentai fall prey to this as well, sounding completely butchered and flat out terrible. It really makes a difference when you get the right person to do the job and creating something that adds to the experience.

Back Door (fairly common, sounds okay), Peach (women's asses are commonly reffered to as such. Plus that word play? Can't pass that up), Corn Hole (Again common. More the act than the asshole itself but meh)

Yeah those are good, even if "peach" is more towards the butt itself instead of the anus.

Brown Eye (another common one, doesn't sound too bad), Poop Chute

Ivan mentioned that he doesn't want to use "poop," not that I can blame him on that. The above three words can work well.