Just finished game. Very good for the first project!
My thoughts:
1. Main hero looks brutal, aggressive... anything in this way, but not "sexy", sorry. I mean, i can beat some asses in her role, but i can't "fap" to her. However, i'm not sure that this is big problem for you...
2. About drawing style. It's not bad, buuuuuut... a little bit too simple In some aspects. If you wanna improve your style try work with faces and small details. Oh, if it not bothering you too much, try to improve your knowledge in biology, structure of humans \ animals bodies... or just look for some pictures in the internet.This does not mean that you will "must" draw only the "real" things in future. I think it will just give you an understanding of how to implement your ideas better and makes them more "lively".
3. Work with animations more in future projects.
4. Try new ideas and opportunities! Good luck!

Thanks for the game!

PS. Don't know about saves. I just started new game.