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Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:09 am

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I've been thinking about my new project here in LoK. I love Princess Peach design (in any Mario games), Paper Peach included. There isn't a game (even E rated) where you control Paper Peach all the time. So I started to brainstorm...why not a parody with Paper Peach from Paper Mario? (I'll call her Cute Peach).

This topic may be updated at a slower pace (or even halt for a while) because priority is now MIM AE, that's why 'version 0.0'. Also, I'm still adjusting the plot.

This game, if approved (details in ITEM 5), will be made using AS3. This implies more concurrent actions, enemies, effects, without a CPU slowdown, and features like a selectable speed rate in a given scene (slower, faster), MIDI support (soon) and inner functions that helps the programmer to advance faster.

Current Cute Peach design (by me) Except the first one.

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Current Cute Peach design (naked)

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1) PLOT:

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It will be like Mario is Missing, but, this time, Mario was captured by the evil Sir Grodus when he was walking in Rogport, and Peach herself has to save him. She will have to recollect all the 7 stars (again) to build a powerful detonator which will create a hole in Sir Grodus base (she will only be able to enter that way), and to avoid Sir Grodus from dominating Mushroom Kingdom (instead of 'all the world'). The 7 stars, if used by wrong hands, make the owner control all creature minds, augmenting their horniness to do nasty things (It's a XXX game, after all). With uncontrollable urges, inhabitants will stop working and protecting the land, leaving no resistence for Sir Grodus to became Lord of Mushroom Kingdom.

I want to use several elements from Paper Mario 2, as a parody. So the game may feature almost (if not all) levels from Paper Mario 2, with some extra levels from Paper Mario 1 and other Mario titles.

This plot may improve.

2) FEATURES & TODO LIST:

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[ ] Adapt all clothing pieces code to AS3
[ ] Add Level 1 - PEACH CASTLE from 'MIM PUT' game (former MIM AE), using 'quadrangular ground' technique.
[ ] Code her engine in AS3, version 0.1 (walk left, right, up and down).

3) GAME MECHANICS

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I would like to innovate. Although it will still be a platform style game (Like Mario 3), it will have a 'isometric walk' (Peach will be able to go left, right, 'up' and 'down' in a isometric field), like Paper Mario 2. PM2 has a true 3d environment (so I'll be emulating some of 3D as 2D and 2.5D). Peach will be able to user her hammer (and her parasol, Perry). She will be able to jump, take powerups (like Raccoon suits) and scenes like masturbation and lactation (as she will be an adult, more in item 4). Also, Peach will be a solid body, that is, she won't be a paper (neither Mario and enemies).

4) WHY MAKE THE GAME:

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The main objective of Cute Peach I envision is to bring ourselves into Paper Mario world, unleashing our imagination, remembering when we played those games in our consoles. She's cute and innocent, albeit she will be fully aware of her actions as an adult female. But we know not everyone will understand this with an open heart, so explicit restrictions and features are needed (that's why I'll make a warning screen before the game, and opinions).

5) But...Isn't Paper Peach a kid?

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Not at all. Although we have examples of games that feature loli/chibi, many of them are allowed freely, with some restrictions. Cute Peach, for example, is mature in her world (18 years old in our rules) but she's still young (characteristic of the race). She can even have 12 years old in the game plot (IF restrictions and explanations are applied, in the game timeline), but provided she's fully developed and people in this world reached puberty younger (So everyone is an adult with a younger face), following an animal timeline (e.g. A dog is old with 14 years old), or in a planet whose year runs at a slower pace, provided all this is fully explained in game DOCS and the warning screen. Why all this? That's to make more sense to that young face.

But, as I've said, I want her to be 18, even in game timeline (her world makes a lap around the sun every 365 normal days). She will have responsabilities in her world, she will contact people like an adult, while being young like a doll and even with Toad characteristics (she IS a toadstol), like a bit curvy belly, with full developed organs (she will be like a midget, but with a tender body) and her boobs can lactate too.

More insight about the matter below.
As for examples of games featuring suggestive loli GRAPHICS (but not being a 'REAL loli' existence, that is, they feature girls as dolls, as alien/fantastic creatures, or midgets, with developed genital areas, and an explicit explanation and a warning before the game starts):
1) Yakyuken
2) Wakfu (Wakfuck)
3) RSLO teen
4) Caprice Doll (platformer)
5) Pokemon (from Humbird)

Other features that are decisive arguments to the character age being 18 or more in our world rules (in case she is truly a human living in a planet whose year has a 12 month duration):
1) knowledge: they know much more than real lolis: 'e.g. they know how to govern a kingdom and have complex conversations involving plots, money, strategy to battle enemies, how to ride a horse, and , of course, how to meet men and disguise from them'
2) They have developed bodies, and their breasts lactate. They already had puberty, and no signs of it appears in legal loli games, like suggestive phrases: 'oh my breasts are still developing'. She can still be virgin, though, as some mature women in real life still are.
3) People in the game are like her in appearance (young). Its a feature of the realm.
4) They use the same clothing pieces as adult ones (pantyhoses, long socks, bras, corsets - adult size).
5) fantasy components: she can fly, she can be transformed to other beings (powerups), she doesnt 'die' (the DEATH we know in real life), but only 'loses 1 life' (she respawns after it), she doesnt suffer or cry (maybe if she misses someone, just to add some emotion to the game). A really good example of already adult characters, but with younger appearance, is the series 'Fantasy Star'.
6) 'Her decision' orientation: she is not forced to do anything. She just wants it. She knows about it. She decided to do it, without any interference, blackmail or abuse (she is not a kid anymore anyway).
7) (if necessary) images depicting her as a child and a teen (in game timing rules), with an even younger appearance, but clothed and respectful, as in picture frames, in order to put her in the expected chronological order of her already developed body.
8) There are REAL people in the world who have 18 years old but appears being a lot younger, by choice (they even undergo procedures like plastics to be like that). Who could forget the 'barbie' phenomenum? http://www.dailymail.co.uk/femail/article-2136332/Venus-Palermo-The-truth-15-year-old-human-Barbie-South-London.html (she has 15 but she want to be like this when she has 18. She 'wants to be a doll forever', in her words).

So its time for opinions. If there are no problems, I would like to progress with this (which is also a dream for those who played Paper Mario series and want a parody based on those).
Maybe is it better for Cute Peach not have a nose? (to resemble pertaining to a toad family)? Maybe give her the default simplistic black eyes? Change her head altogether for a version like this?
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby coolness32 » Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:56 am

The way you make her looks good, she is a little taller and thus makes her look less child-like.

Is Peach going to possibly run around naked like in the MiM games? If not, I think it would be good to make it so that you can't see her feet when she is just walking. Just to keep the paper world look.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:02 am

I thought this was going to be like a comic, not a game?
Either way, please keep your focus on one game at a time, like I told you before. Some drawing might be good for the mind, but coding and thinking about a game is something you are likely NOT going to be able to handle.

That said, cute Peach is cute. The only thing that is odd about her is that she appears to be leaning back with her head. I think you need to align the head with the body more.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:25 am

QuizmasterBos Wrote:I thought this was going to be like a comic, not a game?

In the beginning, it will be a comic (swf 'sheets') but it will be a training area for better poses and animations to be put in the main game.

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Either way, please keep your focus on one game at a time, like I told you before. Some drawing might be good for the mind, but coding and thinking about a game is something you are likely NOT going to be able to handle.

That's why this priority is low.

QuizmasterBos Wrote:That said, cute Peach is cute. The only thing that is odd about her is that she appears to be leaning back with her head. I think you need to align the head with the body more.

Hmmm I'll see it, thanks.

coolness32 Wrote:The way you make her looks good, she is a little taller and thus makes her look less child-like

That's the objective. I want to show my total transparency and duty of what I want to do, while respecting country rules and making a dream game we can imagine, as our thoughts can reach endless worlds.

coolness32 Wrote:Is Peach going to possibly run around naked like in the MiM games?

Yes.

coolness32 Wrote: If not, I think it would be good to make it so that you can't see her feet when she is just walking. Just to keep the paper world look.

I can adjust her skirt. However, as she is a woman, ('after-puberty' state), she has developed boobs, pussy, thigh and legs. They may not look right at the moment. See it.

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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby coolness32 » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:30 am

QuizmasterBos Wrote:I thought this was going to be like a comic, not a game?
Either way, please keep your focus on one game at a time, like I told you before. Some drawing might be good for the mind, but coding and thinking about a game is something you are likely NOT going to be able to handle.

That said, cute Peach is cute. The only thing that is odd about her is that she appears to be leaning back with her head. I think you need to align the head with the body more.


Yes Ivan, please don't push yourself too much. It's good to have side projects so that you don't get burnt out by focusing on one sole thing all the time.

She has a belly-button piercing? She still looks cute though!
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:37 am

coolness32 Wrote:She has a belly-button piercing? She still looks cute though!

I've removed it above, in order to compare.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby coolness32 » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:47 am

ivanaedler Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:She has a belly-button piercing? She still looks cute though!

I've removed it above, in order to compare.


She looks completely fine with and without it. Maybe it could just be an accessory option?
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:55 am

coolness32 Wrote:She looks completely fine with and without it. Maybe it could just be an accessory option?

You say, an option (ON/OFF)? Ok! Like her pubes (hair/not hair).
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby coolness32 » Wed Nov 21, 2012 2:04 am

ivanaedler Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:She looks completely fine with and without it. Maybe it could just be an accessory option?

You say, an option (ON/OFF)? Ok! Like her pubes (hair/not hair).


Yup just like that and for any other accessories you ever want to implement. Just like the stocking and glove options in AE.
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Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 2:19 am

coolness32 Wrote:up just like that and for any other accessories you ever want to implement. Just like the stocking and glove options in AE.

This will be for the future, as I've had to adapt her body parts accordingly. A nice outfit I wanted to see on her is the Shadow Queen. I need to make her facing frontside, backside and facing side. This will be a bit harder because there isnt any example of a Paper Peach drawn like this.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby coolness32 » Wed Nov 21, 2012 2:29 am

ivanaedler Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:up just like that and for any other accessories you ever want to implement. Just like the stocking and glove options in AE.

This will be for the future, as I've had to adapt her body parts accordingly. A nice outfit I wanted to see on her is the Shadow Queen. I need to make her facing frontside, backside and facing side. This will be a bit harder because there isnt any example of a Paper Peach drawn like this.


Is the Shadow Queen from Paper Mario 2(I've only played the one on the Wii)? I've just looked up pictures of her...it will be awesome to have her in this game.
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Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 2:40 am

coolness32 Wrote:Is the Shadow Queen from Paper Mario 2(I've only played the one on the Wii)? I've just looked up pictures of her...it will be awesome to have her in this game.

Yes it is.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby MPLDAM9919 » Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:17 am

Great ideas, Ivan! Maybe make it an RPG type game. Just like Paper Mario. But wait till Mario is Missing is done. That game's looking real good!
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Nov 21, 2012 5:21 pm

Wow, after seeing Peach's body without her clothes it's clear that she still needs some adjusting.
Her proportions look weird. Her head is really big, her legs seem to bit just a tad short, her midriff seems to be sticking out too much and her legs aren't connected correctly to her body (they look like they've been glued on to her side, instead of appearing from her lower abdomen.

Still, a pretty good job. Well done so far.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 5:34 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Wow, after seeing Peach's body without her clothes it's clear that she still needs some adjusting. Her proportions look weird. Her head is really big, her legs seem to bit just a tad short, her midriff seems to be sticking out too much and her legs aren't connected correctly to her body (they look like they've been glued on to her side, instead of appearing from her lower abdomen. Still, a pretty good job. Well done so far.

Oh, no, so...more work :roll:

But you understand that original Paper Peach design is too slim in her chest and too large in her dress, so its really difficult to adapt to it in order to give a nice chibi/midget style. I may increase her skirt length more.
How about now?

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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:48 pm

ivanaedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Wow, after seeing Peach's body without her clothes it's clear that she still needs some adjusting. Her proportions look weird. Her head is really big, her legs seem to bit just a tad short, her midriff seems to be sticking out too much and her legs aren't connected correctly to her body (they look like they've been glued on to her side, instead of appearing from her lower abdomen. Still, a pretty good job. Well done so far.

Oh, no, so...more work :roll:

But you understand that original Paper Peach design is too slim in her chest and too large in her dress, so its really difficult to adapt to it in order to give a nice chibi/midget style. I may increase her skirt length more.
How about now?]

Well, let's just ask my penis...
Yup, made him hard. Might not be perfect, but quite an improvement over the previous version. I think her hands can still use some more work, but that's pretty much it.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:53 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Might not be perfect, but quite an improvement over the previous version. I think her hands can still use some more work, but that's pretty much it.

I prefer to improve her hands later. When I have more time, I'll make her facing frontside, then backside. Last, side facing. If they're all compatible, I'll start making animations (walking, jumping, crouching).

Cute Peach poses being made:

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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Thu Nov 22, 2012 5:42 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Might not be perfect, but quite an improvement over the previous version. I think her hands can still use some more work, but that's pretty much it.

I prefer to improve her hands later. When I have more time, I'll make her facing frontside, then backside. Last, side facing. If they're all compatible, I'll start making animations (walking, jumping, crouching).

Cute Peach poses being made:

The open mouth looks weird, like if she is trying to eat me or something. (It's probably because it's too triangular)
The second mouth also looks different, I think her lipstick isn't apparent enough from a further zoom.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Thu Nov 22, 2012 5:46 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:The open mouth looks weird, like if she is trying to eat me or something. (It's probably because it's too triangular). The second mouth also looks different, I think her lipstick isn't apparent enough from a further zoom.

Hmm I'll make a test with a more curvy lips, and I'll increase the second lip with a more red color.
EDIT: updated above.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Thu Nov 22, 2012 6:10 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:The open mouth looks weird, like if she is trying to eat me or something. (It's probably because it's too triangular). The second mouth also looks different, I think her lipstick isn't apparent enough from a further zoom.

Hmm I'll make a test with a more curvy lips, and I'll increase the second lip with a more red color.
EDIT: updated above.

Better, definitely better. The color is more apparent now. The curvy lips look better as well, but I think you still got a ways to go.
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