Reaver Wrote:Can I get confirmation that my CS is good or not?
Alaena Wrote:Reaver Wrote:Can I get confirmation that my CS is good or not?
I glanced over it and I noticed you didn't have a description, so I assumed it wasn't done.
Alaena Wrote:A note for everyone, the bio's are all adequate, but it would help me a lot for the first post to have more on your individual backgrounds. A lot of you only have personalities and I would really like your background (did they go to college? What is their job? what is their motivation or dream?). In the beginning, you'll each sort of have your own intro-encounter in which I'll be addressing these things, and the more detailed the background, the more RP depth I'll have to work with.
EDIT: Cryo, I'm fine with the power to imbue ammo, and having armor as a second one, but creating explosives is a bit of a third power. Vintage, you're good too.
Alaena Wrote:Knight and Reaver, you're both good.
Knight, your powers are acceptable, just thought I'd make something known, and I'll add this to the first OOC post too. The more broad a power's scope, the less strength it will have in the beginning. So, for example, the ability to manipulate metal is fine. But it won't be strong enough to rip buildings apart by tearing out steel I-Beams and what not, at least not to start. The more specific you can be with a power's purpose and abilities, the more strength it can have.
A note for everyone, the bio's are all adequate, but it would help me a lot for the first post to have more on your individual backgrounds. A lot of you only have personalities and I would really like your background (did they go to college? What is their job? what is their motivation or dream?). In the beginning, you'll each sort of have your own intro-encounter in which I'll be addressing these things, and the more detailed the background, the more RP depth I'll have to work with.
EDIT: Cryo, I'm fine with the power to imbue ammo, and having armor as a second one, but creating explosives is a bit of a third power. Vintage, you're good too.
Users browsing this forum: No registered users