Will of the Ninja

[Voff]

Well these slots went fast

Depending on when it starts, or the required length of the posts, I think it would be fun to join if a slot opens up, but I probably will be a bit busy the next 2-3 weeks.

[Taria]

maybe my character can be in this one too :3

[Reapergod36]

My Copy of My Old Char Sheet
Name: Kahu
Sex: Herm.
Jinchuuriki: Yes, Pramaterʹ
Appearance:

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A long centipede-like body, with the upper torso of a woman. Instead of the horrifying carapace of a centipede, it is more a-kin to a long human back, with human legs sprouting out the sides. The upper torso having six arms that have a gap that then lead to the multiple sets of legs; With the appearance of a beautiful woman with long black hair descending to down her back. She was known to keep refuge near the village of the ­­hidden mist. The feet on her centipede-like body have size 10 feet and a slightly muscled but slender appearance to the legs; As well as Size D tits on the torso, with small to normal nipples. Her eyes are soul piercing and enchanting light blue. Although it is both sexes, rather than being just a female though it prefers to not reveal its dick.

Talent:
Taijutsu: 6(Hand to hand combat)
Genjutsu: 2(Illusions and dispelling them)
Ninjutsu: 4(The main technique's of Ninja)
Doujutsu: 8(Eye technique's) Rinnegan
Kenjutsu: 0(Sword technique's)
Appearance:

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Except with black hair, slender femboy body, but still a bit of muscle in arms and legs, often wearing long robes like Haku.

Bio:

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Child of a Kage in the village hidden by mist. He had only heard legends of Pramater’; a massive centipede woman who crushed men’s bodies with sadistic satisfaction. Until the day she finally attacked his father’s palace. He still remembers the horrifying night that his father had sworn to defeat the creature to the public, drawing its attention toward him. The creature would not be so openly insulted, and approached the Kage as he lay with his wife and six year old child. Kahu father fought well and knew many jutsu, but despite that he was defeated. Meanwhile Kahu mother managed to defeat Pramater’ by sealing her inside Kahu. Unfortunately the only jutsu that his mother knew of to bind such a creature, involved sacrificing her own life to do so. Kahu was forced to bear the constant knowledge that his parent’s murderer was inside him, and constantly communicating with him. Throughout the years, as Pramater’ ‘s influence grew Kahu developed a foot fetish as a curse placed upon him. Causing him to be aroused by such a thing, made him socially awkward and recluse, over time he grew to a stalemate with Pramater’ for control of his body. He still is in control of his body, but Pramater tortures him constantly with hallucinations and her opinion of events in his life. This led to multiple suicide attempts by Kahu. But as of late Pramater’ has grown more patient and more devious, as she tempts him with the curse she granted him, as well as basic lusts, as well as promising him power and use of her chakra. Being far nicer to him, but still causing hallucinations and sensations to his body. Such as her holding him, or even licking his neck eerily. Kahu has refused to use her power in any way. But despite this, she still aids him. As from when he was a child she spread her influence enough to overpower him as certain times to put forth her own will. On one rare occasion making him painfully form two legs on either side of the middle of his chest and stomach region. Squeezing an attacker to death, causing the attacker’s spine to snap, this also led to two of Kahu’s lower ribs breaking. At which he was bed ridden for quite some time after medical ninjas removed the broken ribs. So far this has had no long term hindrance on him. He refuses to use any extra chakra Pramater’ offers. Despite Kahu being a herm, his father always insisted that he was his son, unable to accept the abnormalities that Kahu was born with, having both genitalia but maintaining a feminine look. Kahu grew insecure and always thought of himself as a male, perishing the thought of accepting the actuality of his sex to be shameful and a disgrace. He often tries to hide it whenever possible, even though most mistake him for a girl, he often doesn’t know that they do so and therefore don’t correct them. As his mind is so focused on that he is a male, and holding off Pramater’ ‘s advances.

Clan: N/A
Jutsu List: Six Paths Technique – which grants the user multiple abilities, known as Paths. The Animal Path can summon several different creatures. The Naraka Path can summon the King of Hell, which could be used for interrogation and restoration. The Preta Path can absorb any chakra-based ninjutsu. The Asura Path can clad the user in mechanized armor and grant them various weapons. The Human Path can read minds, at the cost of ripping out the victim's soul. The Deva Path allows the manipulation of gravity-based forces to either repel or pull in an enemy.
(Unique Jutsu) Amorphous Affinity – Voluntary or not, Kahu can on rare occasions have limbs (Be it multiple arms or legs) Form from his body to be used. However this may just be a sign that Pramater’ is going to take over his body for a time. As well as Kahu for now cannot control these limbs, instead it is left up to Pramater’ to be generous and help Kahu. Not that he would accept her help willingly.

(Unique Jutsu) Visions of Pramater’ – Pramater’ also controls this one on how much she helps. It is a genjustu that causes the victim to see Kahu’s hallucinations. Allowing for Prameter’ to decide what happens to them.

Chakra Strands – A jutsu that Kahu learned to restrain Pramater’, specifically when she made lips burst out of his body. Strands of chakra come from his fingers, usually used to wrap around himself to restrain Pramater’ from using her limbs to impose her own will. That is, when he still has control over his own limbs.

Ninja Tools: Shuriken, Grappling Hook, Jar of Leeches. (Again nothing crazy, no Genin has a Samehada laying around)

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Constant seduction and temptation from Pramater’, wanting him to use her power more and wanting him to submit to let her take over his body for moments at a time. Suffers from Pramater’ ‘s genjustsu, constantly making him hallucinate that she near him in some way. Whispering into his ear and wrapping her arms around him. Often causing bizarre outbursts from Kuha, causing him to be anti social, as he tries to combat the tauntings of Pramater’ (Anything you want me to help you work into the story)

So... I guess you can make an rp similar to someone's with no problems, that's good. I might be available to co-gm, but if I am the co-gm of a squad what does that entail? Are we going to go ahead and have them be the jonin of the squad to direct the team? If so I wonder if you can be the jonin of a squad but have your genin character in another squad. I never like to gm my own characters XP. It usually ruins the surprise of what's going to happen next.


My exact copy of my char sheet from the old RP after revisions by GM

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Name: Kahu
Sex: Herm.
Age: 19
Height: 6.2ft (for reference, a little bit taller than Zabuza)
Sexual Content Level: High| Rape: Yes
Jinchuuriki: Yes, Pramaterʹ
Appearance: A long centipede-like body, with the upper torso of a woman. Instead of the horrifying carapace of a centipede, it is more a-kin to a long human back, with human legs sprouting out the sides. The upper torso having six arms that have a gap that then lead to the multiple sets of legs; With the appearance of a beautiful woman with long black hair descending to down her back. She was known to keep refuge near the village of the not hidden mist. The feet on her centipede-like body have size 10 feet and a slightly muscled but slender appearance to the legs; As well as Size D tits on the torso, with small to normal nipples. Her eyes are soul piercing and enchanting light blue. Although it is both sexes, rather than being just a female though it prefers to not reveal its dick.
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Bio: Child of a Kage in the village hidden by mist. He had only heard legends of Pramater’; a massive centipede woman who crushed men’s bodies with sadistic satisfaction. Until the day she finally attacked his father’s palace. He still remembers the horrifying night that his father had sworn to defeat the creature to the public, drawing its attention toward him. The creature would not be so openly insulted, and approached the Kage as he lay with his wife and six year old child. Kahu father fought well and knew many jutsu, but despite that he was defeated. Meanwhile Kahu mother managed to defeat Pramater’ by sealing her inside Kahu. Unfortunately the only jutsu that his mother knew of to bind such a creature, involved sacrificing her own life to do so. Kahu was forced to bear the constant knowledge that his parent’s murderer was inside him, and constantly communicating with him. Throughout the years, as Pramater’ ‘s influence grew Kahu developed a foot fetish as a curse placed upon him. Causing him to be aroused by such a thing, made him socially awkward and recluse, over time he grew to a stalemate with Pramater’ for control of his body. He still is in control of his body, but Pramater tortures him constantly with hallucinations and her opinion of events in his life. This led to multiple suicide attempts by Kahu. But as of late Pramater’ has grown more patient and more devious, as she tempts him with the curse she granted him, as well as basic lusts, as well as promising him power and use of her chakra. Being far nicer to him, but still causing hallucinations and sensations to his body. Such as her holding him, or even licking his neck eerily. Kahu has refused to use her power in any way. But despite this, she still aids him. As from when he was a child she spread her influence enough to overpower him as certain times to put forth her own will. On one rare occasion making him painfully form two legs on either side of the middle of his chest and stomach region. Squeezing an attacker to death, causing the attacker’s spine to snap, this also led to two of Kahu’s lower ribs breaking. At which he was bed ridden for quite some time after medical ninjas removed the broken ribs. So far this has had no long term hindrance on him. He refuses to use any extra chakra Pramater’ offers. Despite Kahu being a herm, his father always insisted that he was his son, unable to accept the abnormalities that Kahu was born with, having both genitalia but maintaining a feminine look. Kahu grew insecure and always thought of himself as a male, perishing the thought of accepting the actuality of his sex to be shameful and a disgrace. He often tries to hide it whenever possible, even though most mistake him for a girl, he often doesn’t know that they do so and therefore don’t correct them. As his mind is so focused on that he is a male, and holding off Pramater’ ‘s advances.
Clan: N/A
Jutsu List: Six Paths Technique – which grants the user multiple abilities, known as Paths. The Animal Path can summon several different creatures. The Naraka Path can summon the King of Hell, which could be used for interrogation and restoration. The Preta Path can absorb any chakra-based ninjutsu. The Asura Path can clad the user in mechanized armor and grant them various weapons. The Human Path can read minds, at the cost of ripping out the victim's soul. The Deva Path allows the manipulation of gravity-based forces to either repel or pull in an enemy.
For now he can only use the Animal and Preta paths Can summon a black hummingbird for scouting from the animal path. From the Preta path he is able to absorb very small amounts of chakra slowly from his finger tips.

Water Clone Jutsu - Instead of your standard clone jutsu, Kahu has focused on a basic wonder clone jutsu.

(Unique Jutsu) Visions of Pramater’ – Pramater’ also controls this one on how much she helps. It is a genjustu that causes the victim to see Kahu’s hallucinations.

Chakra Strands – A jutsu that Kahu learned to restrain Pramater’, specifically when she made lips burst out of his body. Strands of chakra come from his fingers, usually used to wrap around himself to restrain Pramater’ from using her limbs to impose her own will. That is, when he still has control over his own limbs.

Ninja Tools: Shuriken, Grappling Hook, Jar of Leeches. (Again nothing crazy, no Genin has a Samehada laying around)

Extra anything: Constant seduction and temptation from Pramater’, wanting him to use her power more and wanting him to submit to let her take over his body for moments at a time. Suffers from Pramater’ ‘s genjustsu, constantly making him hallucinate that she near him in some way. Whispering into his ear and wrapping her arms around him. Often causing bizarre outbursts from Kuha, causing him to be anti social, as he tries to combat the tauntings of Pramater’ (Anything you want me to help you work into the story)

[Thaedael]

With the last three that brings us up to 11/8, so we could make one more team if we get one more player.

Which once again begs to be asked;
mechanics/no mechanics
eroticism/no eroticism
what point in plot
Cannon/non-cannon etc.

[Goryokaku]

i would say mechanics Thaedael at least for dealing with fights...
Erotiicism should depend on the team leader seeing as they are handling the rp's for there team.
Point in plot should probably be to save the world but i would start with something simple like the new shinobi's being trained and expected to pass an exam much like in the naruto series.

as for canon or non-canon, if Canon base it after all the events of Naruto, if non-canon then it doesn't matter.

[Voff]

Hmmm... I'm just going to throw my to cents worth out there, but I'm not yet a part of the RP so take it as you will

I think Gory takes up a lot of good points.

Mechanics will make for more interesting fights and a bit more randomness to them which makes stuff more interesting in my opinion.

The only thing I disagree with is that the plot should be to save the world. I really liked the Naruto manga up to when they were done with Genin trials. After that everything kept escalating with the bigger and "bad-er" villain wanting to destroy the world... Those plots tend to give villains that, I at least, find less engaging...

I think politics within the Village would be an interesting setting. You could f.ex. have some groups scheming behind the scenes (with the GM's to only know who in the beginning) with the team leaders associated with or bound to these groups somehow driving their agenda. Or you could have a sham peace with another village trying to take down the village of the RP'ers from within with traitors and misdirection.

But I am clueless to how difficult this might be to implement for an RP. It could be really chaotic and difficult to GM. A more straight up idea might be a Great Ninja War and the RP-ers village being a small one trying not be be decimated or swallowed up by
the bigger ones.

[Reapergod36]

I agree with most of what both of these guys mention, except for voff's last thing about ninja wars. Also eroticism I would always allow, but lets not have it be a fap party. Only do it if it makes sense in the plot.

[Taria]

what I liked most about the original is that the GM seemed to have a very clear idea about the direction for the RP before. Also, she seemed to have a good understanding about the story elements that make the Naruto series intriguing. The best thing about being a ninja imo is the story elements, a bunch of overly complex combat mechanics will make it feel like an arcade fighter game.

[Thaedael]

Update time, I would appreciate if everyone in the RP would just take the time to give a quick look and give feed back.
I listened to everything that was said, and I tried to keep everything that was said in mind while designing the wall of text that is about to appear.

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Point in plot should probably be to save the world but i would start with something simple like the new shinobi's being trained and expected to pass an exam much like in the naruto series.
As for canon or non-canon, if Canon base it after all the events of Naruto, if non-canon then it doesn't matter.

The only thing I disagree with is that the plot should be to save the world. I really liked the Naruto manga up to when they were done with Genin trials. After that everything kept escalating with the bigger and "bad-er" villain wanting to destroy the world... Those plots tend to give villains that, I at least, find less engaging...

I think politics within the Village would be an interesting setting. You could f.ex. have some groups scheming behind the scenes (with the GM's to only know who in the beginning) with the team leaders associated with or bound to these groups somehow driving their agenda. Or you could have a sham peace with another village trying to take down the village of the RP'ers from within with traitors and misdirection.

But I am clueless to how difficult this might be to implement for an RP. It could be really chaotic and difficult to GM. A more straight up idea might be a Great Ninja War and the RP-ers village being a small one trying not be be decimated or swallowed up by
the bigger ones.

I think for the plot so far, it is going to be to the tastes of you two who have spoken up. In order for the most flexability in terms of character creation and a chance to fight and have side plots, I feel like the Jounin exam would be the best setting. It allows each team (So far we have 3 teams of four, which could each be from a different nation in the setting.) They come to do the tests which will give each player the opportunity to fight and form bonds.

This is also when all the village heads come together to discuss things, which could lead to political intrigue as the teams spy on each-other and do missions under the command of their nation and team leaders. The team leaders (IE gm/co-gm) could then talk about what happens next. So far keeping it simple because I don't want to go into so much detail and then throw it away because not everyone likes it.

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Mechanics.
I tried to keep it simple while keeping the flavor of the universe. Two sets of stats, physical and techniques.

To hit an Opponent;

You get one dice roll per point in given attribute (1 = 1D6, 2 = 2D6 etc.)
Your opponent gets one dice roll per point in given attribute (1 = 1D6, 2 = 2D6 etc.)
Take the highest dice roll per player and compare, if the attacker has a higher score the attack hits.
[If you roll 2, 4, 5. Your result is five. If you roll more than one six, you add it. 1, 2, 6, the result is six. 1, 6, ,6 your result is 7).
This is done to represent your skill in a given skill.

To Hit - To Defend
Taijutsu - Speed
Genjutsu - Mentality
Nijutsu - Strength
Tools - Speed
Kekkei Genkei - Strength

(So your chosen skill against their relevant defense)

To Damage an Opponent

After you hit an opponent, you get 1D3 per skill point for associated technique.
Taijutsu - Strength
Genjutsu - Mentality
Ninjutsu - Chakra
Tools - Tool stat + weapon
Kekkei Genkai - TBD**

**One per team, decided in conjunction with your team leader.

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Character Sheets;

Character Sheet;

Name; Your name here
Gender; Your gender here
Age; Your age here
Description; Your description here
Bio; Your bio here

Village; *Wait until we decide which teams come from which village
Speciality; Your primary technique here

Physical:
6 points to distribute
Speed; 1 (How fast you are)
Strength; 1 (How strong you are)
Chakra; 1 (How much chakra you have)
Mentality; 1 (How smart and focused you are)

Health; * TBD

Techniques


6 Points to distribute
Taijutsu; (How good at hand to hand you are)
Genjutsu; (How good at Illusions you are)
Ninjutsu; (How good you are at ninja techniques)
Tools; (How good you are at using ninja tools)
Kekkei Genkai; (Any blood line limits you have)

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That is where I am at now. I need to decide how much health each player gets, what weapons the tool users get and to balance it, how to balance blood line limits. I also need to decide whether jutsu have "mana"

[Taria]

So wait, we hit opponents with all ninja techniques of combat at the same time with every attack?

[Thaedael]

You choose one of your own skills to use. Perhaps you are a tool expert but it would make more sense to hit with something else based on your opponents stats.

[Reapergod36]

Hm.... I don't know, do we describe what we're trying to do to them?

[Nobudi]

What about delayed effect stuff like traps?

[Zeus Kabob]

Name: Miyuta Fusenki
Gender: Male
Age: 18 (maybe less if it's non-erotic)
Description: Miyuta is 5'4" and lean. He has short black hair and brown eyes. He weighs 110 pounds and is very agile.
Bio: Miyuta has always been weak in Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, relying instead on Genjutsu and non-lethal ninja tools. This earned him a lot of ridicule in school, as his main strategies involved remaining hidden and escaping from bad situations. On the other hand, he earned reputation with some of the Jounins of his village when he and his group used clone jutsu and a smokescreen to split up an enemy group, then proceeding to eliminate each member individually. Since school, he's gotten better at Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, but he still does best at using Genjutsu and various disruptive ninja tools. His specialty is a fast-acting adhesive that he uses to incapacitate enemies and leave them open to be attacked by his teammates.

Village: TBD
Clan: TBD
Specialty: Adhesive bomb: Miyuta throws a large bomb which explodes on impact, spreading an adhesive dust that sticks to skin. The main effect of the adhesive is only realized when it is exposed to a large amount of water, causing the adhesive to form long strands of sticky fiber which restrain targets and stick them to walls and floors.

Physical characteristics:
Speed: 4
Strength: 1
Chakra: 2
Mentality: 3

Skills: (assuming each skill defaults to 1)
Taijutsu; 1
Genjutsu; 3
Ninjutsu; 1
Tools; 3
Kekkei Genkai; 1
2 more points to spend

Quick question; we've got Kekkai Genkai as a potential strength. Do we choose our character's clan (Uchiha, Hyuga, et cetera), or is it kind of a grab bag which clan we're in? I've got some ideas for Kekkai Genkai for my character, but I don't want to sink points into it until I know I can use one.

[MiscChaos]

Name: Atsuko Hyuuga
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Description:

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Without all the music pieces in her hair though

Bio:

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Atsuko is of the branch family of the Hyuuga clan, meaning she has a seal embedded on her forehead that makes it impossible to defy the main branch and when she dies, her Byakugan will be sealed away forever. Her parents are resentful of this fate and often take that out of her, so she grew up in a very abusive home. Instead of giving into the same bitterness that consume her parents, she instead puts on a smile and is a very positive person… or so appears to be. She’s acted that way for so long to keep people from finding out about things she doesn't know for sure if that’s her actual personality or not. She supposes it doesn't matter so she doesn't dwell on it.

If her parents would pay attention, they'd find she’s a lazy genius, able to pick up techniques with a little knowledge on how they work. She’s mostly used this to reduce the severity of her parent’s blows though. More and more she feels something starting to slip and more and more getting back at her parents seems like a good idea. So she decides to join up with a team to put that urge off for as long as possible and keep away from them at the same time.

Village: TBD
Speciality:

Physical:

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Speed; 2
Strength; 2
Chakra; 3
Mentality: 3

Health; * TBD

Techniques:

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Taijutsu; 3
Genjutsu; 2
Ninjutsu; 2
Tools; 1
Kekkei Genkai; 3

[Thaedael]

Delayed effects would be harder to balance out. Which is where the universe gets hard because of things like eye techniques. How would you balance it out?

[berserkerhorn]

Name; Your name here
Gender; Your gender here
Age; Your age here
Description; Your description here
Bio; Your bio here

Village; *Wait until we decide which teams come from which village
Speciality; Your primary technique here

(I'll edit this later)

[Goryokaku]

Name: Kal
Gender: Female
Age: 16 (18 only if we are going to be forced to deal with sex)
Description:

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Bio:

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To Be Written Later

Village: TBD
Clan: TBD

Physical:

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Speed: 3
Strength: 1
Chakra: 3
Mentality: 3
Health: TBD

Tchniques

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Taijutsu: 3
Genjutsu: 2
Ninjutsu: 3
Tools: 1
Kekkei Genkai: 2

[BlueLight]

I suggest you guys look at this link for chakra http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Nature_Transformation

Also a really nicely put together picture on how the elements work. The character on the circles is the kanji character for that element. Writing that character is as good as writing the word itself.


The character on the left is the character for the element, and on the right is how you would spell it in romaji.

Fire (火, Hi)
Wind (風, Kaze)
Lightning (雷, Kaminari)
Earth (土, Tsuchi)
Water (水, Mizu)

Note that 'i' sounds makes the sound if you were to say the name of 'e'; 'r' make a sound that's really more of 'l' sound but is inbetween. For instants if a japanese person was to order a bowl of rice in english, they'd say "lice" because they have to strong 'r' sound; and kanji can have different reading depending what's used before or after them. for instants tues day is spelled water, day, sun but water in this instance is "sui"

[Thaedael]

Sorry to do this last minute, have to pull the plug. Was diagnosed with bad back problems.