Magical Girl RP 2: Electric Boogalo

[that man]

Has everyone posted?

[VintageBass]

Has everyone posted?

Not Fawkes yet

[Fawkes]

Sorry, thought I'd already posted. Guess the computer ate it.

[that man]

Has everyone posted?

Not Fawkes yet

I just looked back, and realized that there isn't a post for Gingoguy yet. Should we just go on, or should I wait first.

[VintageBass]

Has everyone posted?

Not Fawkes yet

I just looked back, and realized that there isn't a post for Gingoguy yet. Should we just go on, or should I wait first.

I think we should go on, because I didn't get anything from you about putting his bit into the story, so I guess you'll do that in your post?

[that man]

Not Fawkes yet

I just looked back, and realized that there isn't a post for Gingoguy yet. Should we just go on, or should I wait first.

I think we should go on, because I didn't get anything from you about putting his bit into the story, so I guess you'll do that in your post?

I can try, but I also have work soon, so I don't know if I can post it before then.

[that man]

Sorry it's so late, but there's a NEW POST!
And yes, Florina Night can post too.

[VintageBass]

All right...

...

. . .

What do we do now?

[that man]

All right...

...

. . .

What do we do now?

What?
...
shit, that was the test post...
hold on, let me find the final version.

[VintageBass]

All right...

What do we do now?

What?
...
shit, that was the test post...
hold on, let me find the final version.

OK, because we can't do anything with that. Just saying.

[that man]

All right...

What do we do now?

What?
...
shit, that was the test post...
hold on, let me find the final version.

OK, because we can't do anything with that. Just saying.

AND the finished post is gone...great.
Well, this will take some time, so please, bare with me.

[that man]

Ok, I made some edits to the post, so please make sure to look at them.

[spriter1]

My post is edited

[Gingoguy]

Ok, I made some edits to the post, so please make sure to look at them.

Great, thanks!

[that man]

...did I accidentally kill the rp?

[VintageBass]

... That and also we went over the 30 page limit, but yeah, your post made it kinda painful for us to do anything.

[that man]

Oh, I didn't notice that. Do you want me to make the new page, and a new post with it?

[DomJoe]

Here's the problem that I'm seeing: right now, there is very little reason for our characters to care about the situation, because of the following points:
A) The character mainly driving the action has already been established as useless and only worth as much as a distraction. Not a good way to start off a speech segment, especially when it lasts more than 2 posts.
B) Our characters cannot give any sort of response that can distinguish themselves from someone else's reaction. Monokuma's little cut in there doesn't give us much else to do either. There's alot of talking going on, but not much to actually react to. In the words of Monty Python, "Get on with it!". There is alot of build up, but no punchline to this whole scene.
C) The whole speech could have technically been written in one post, as well as getting to the real action, if it wasn't going to be important in the first place. I'm all up for setting the mood, but a boring mood will get the players bored. It also feels like you're stalling for time, for some reason
D) While we're on the subject, using a licensed character in an RP that was supposed to be original is pretty much a huge let down for players in general, especially considering Monokuma's impact in the series he is from. You can certainly have a character inspired by the bear to be the villian for this RP, but if it's going to be a straight up rip, we might as well be playing a different RP.

I'm not sure if I'm capturing the opinions of everyone in this RP, but that's how I see this RP going. Everyone else, feel free to clarify and respond.

[spriter1]

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This. So much this.

[venomouswings]

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