Would Anyone be interested in this art

[js3725677]

Just trying my hand at this. It's obviously a very early and limited gif, but I want to get a sense if what I've put together is at all compelling.

Love to get people thoughts/direction.

[AcetheSuperVillain]

It's not bad start, I guess. There are a lot of things I would try to work on.

The body proportions are a little weird. Torso is too long I think.

Some of the lines are very wobbly looking, especially in the thighs. This makes the body look kinda mangled or something.

The way the head and boobs are moving is kinda weird. It looks like you're sort of approximating the principle of Overlapping Action, but the execution is a little off. I would maybe try to add some delay between each phase of movement. (I'm assuming this is getting ass-fucked or doggy styled)

Let me try it myself and see...

[AcetheSuperVillain]

Yes, okay, so try making the secondary motions lag behind the primary motion.

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Primary motion is getting stuffed in the butt. This then causes the spine to move, this then causes the boobs and head to flop around.

[evildumdum]

What method do you use for animation?

[AcetheSuperVillain]

What method do you use for animation?

(which of us are you asking...?)

(cuz if it's me, I can give you an answer...)