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Hello,

I just contributed to a Chyoo novel, and will try to make more contributions (not to mention better feedback). It is about incest, although you yourself could continue the story and make it about something else than incest. Anyway tell me how I did: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/177735

I apologize for the short post, writing on mobile is hell. :'(

thats actually fairly good. i enjoyed it hope to see more