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Story Time!

Postby [Brand_Name] » Wed Oct 24, 2012 2:58 am

Wussup betches.

I am unable to (currently) animate but I've always wanted to give back to our little community here, and I finally found a way to do so. I recently began to write a story about the lovely Ms. Aran, and I don't want to give too much away, but... It's pretty dark. and by pretty dark I mean quite brutal, especially for LoK.

Sooooo... if you find my words offensive then... stop reading. I wouldn't like to be sued. I'm barely into college... not cool. Anyway, like I said, the first chapter isn't all THAT bad, but I have plans to make it much worse. I feel like i'm forgetting something...

Oh, right- I'm only average/above average at art but I'll be drawing pictures to accompany each chapter, one or two for each. this will be a little looser, I may not get around to all of them and will most likely not even color them, but if you all would be so kind to do so for me :D, I'd appreciate the help.

I have four chapters planned currently but once I finish and if I'm still enjoying it and if people actually read this ish then I would love to take your ideas and allow them to inspire me to write more naughtiness. ooh.

So uhh... please comment and say stuff even if you think you're not helping. It makes me feel loved :]

I suppose, then, without further ado...

Chapter 1 of... "The Legend of Samus?" It'll do for now.

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Samus opened the door to her room. Flying on a spaceship had its ups and downs, but she hated the distorted sleep schedule more than anything. It had been a long journey and she had just completed her final maintenance check of the ship prior to her last sleep in stasis. After this mission, she planned to take a break from bounty hunting, hopefully for good. She was going to kill Ridley for good and the final band of space pirates.

After awaking from stasis, she felt a sense of determination as she climbed into the shower to wake herself up prior to departing for her mission. When she got out and looked at her naked body in the mirror, she noticed to her great pleasure, for what must have been the hundredth time, her development since her 18th birthday. She may have been a late bloomer, but it was well worth the wait. Her breasts had gone from B’s to at least D’s. Additionally, her butt had increased drastically. Once she returned to Earth, she would have a proper party to lose her virginity. The thought scared her, however; her friends teased her about how she wasn't scared of hunting Metroids but was petrified of losing her virginity. But now was not the time for that. She had to focus if she were to have any hope of defeating Ridley and the space pirates.

She put on her skin-tight zero suit, something that always managed to arouse her a little bit. Then she equipped her armor, wiping away the arousal that permeated her body just a few seconds ago. She was determined. This was the end.

As she stepped off her ship onto the rocky, cold, and barely hospitable planet, she felt eyes watching her. She took a quick look around but was unable to locate her viewer. “No matter,” she thought. And she pressed on towards her objective.

She was about a quarter mile away from the suspected hive of space pirate activity, yet she saw or heard nothing. She continued walking and found herself in a long corridor made naturally by erosion. The walls, made of porous, pale-blue rock, rose a good five feet above her head, and were about eight feet apart. She believed that this would be the ideal way to sneak up on the space pirate hideout undetected. Then all of a sudden, she heard a noise overhead. “Some sort of aircraft, maybe?” she thought. It seemed high above her, but closing in. She stopped her trek to listen more closely. Thinking it best to give her legs a quick break before the big fight, she sat down on a rock ledge and took her helmet off, exposing her beautiful, radiant hair and face to the cool yet thin air. This was her gravest mistake.

She couldn't even react. A hardened space pirate claw came crashing down on the back of her head from the top of the wall, knocking her into the realm of unconsciousness almost immediately.

She woke up with sore wrists, shoulders, and most of all a throbbing head. She raised her head to see a group of six space pirates gathered around some sort of hologram. As far as she could tell, she was still outside; she could not see the space pirate compound she was supposed to infiltrate. She had been in worse situations and came out alive, however. The issue, though, was that she could not see her armor. All she had on was her zero suit, leaving her hands, feet, and head to the mercy of the chilly air. Then one space pirate turned around, and Samus was able to take a closer look at her enemy. They were about nine feet tall, but hunched over just a bit, rendering the top of their head about eight feet off the ground. Typically, the pirates were fairly reptilian like, with a good amount of machinery on and in them, making the space pirate a formidable foe. But these seemed to be much more muscular and less machine-like. They resembled tall, muscular, and powerful snakes with arm, legs, heads, claws... etc.

As one turned around, to Samus’ dismay, he seemed to be wearing no armor. His member was fully exposed, and began to grow substantially as he looked at her. She now realized that she was not in a good position. Her hands were tied behind her back, and the cord was pulled taunt to an overhanging ledge above her. Her legs were tied to the ground, not suspended, but she still could not find a way to free herself. Then the other monstrosities turned around, and she widened her eyes in surprise and despair as she realized the events about to transpire.

Even for nine foot tall beasts, they boasted very large lengths that ranged from eight to twelve inches, and their diameters must have been nearly twice the size of normal human’s. They formed a line that made her nearly piss herself with intimidation. The first one walked up to her and held a tablet in front of her face that read “you bite, we shoot.”

“Wait, WHAT!” Samus screamed in horror. She had to escape. She wriggled and squirmed but to no avail. She had to wriggle free, and now. She hadn't lost her virginity or ever even given a blowjob but she knew what each was and how unpleasant each was for the female. While these thoughts went through her head, the space pirate grabbed her ponytail, forced her to open her mouth, and inserted his member through her screaming lips. It had begun.
He wasted no time. Immediately he shoved it down her throat as far as he could, causing her to gag uncontrollably. Tears began to well up in her eyes and quickly streamed down her face, both from her shame as well as from the gagging. He quickened his pace and thrust himself rapidly and deeply into her esophagus. Within a few minutes, he pulled out and shot his hot semen all over her face. “Phew,” she thought. “I’m glad that’s over.”
But before she could take a deep breath, another cock was shoved down her throat. She picked up screaming again, in horror, pain, and surprise. This process continued until all six of the space pirates were satisfied. Finally, it was over.

Or so she thought.

After the last pirate came in her throat, the first one walked behind her and began clawing at her zero suit.

"NOOOOO!” She shouted; her voice raw from the screaming and punishment she had received. But she had no hope of stopping him. He clawed his way through the blue suit and revealed the delicate, perfect skin beneath. The cut was just above her butt, and he inserted his hand through the hole and pulled downward, revealing everything from the top of her ass to her genitalia. He gently rubbed her with himself, then took out some kind of lubrication and proceeded to rub that on her. “No no no no no oh no this can’t be happening, this can’t be happening.” What were they going to do to her now?

As that thought went through her head, the pirate’s enormous cock went through her vagina. “AAAAAAAAAAAGH!” Samus shrieked out in pain, but the monster took no notice, nor did he really seem to care. If anything, he enjoyed seeing her squirm. As a virgin, she was extremely tight. He was much too big for her; she felt as though she must have been stretched to the limit. But she was wrong. Another pirate undid the knots that bound her legs to the ground, and tied each one perpendicularly to her body, forcing her to become completely spread apart, inches off the ground.

Responding to this, the pirate smashing her pussy got on the ground below her with his back against the ground and inserted himself once again. While she may have stretched to be able to accommodate him a little better now, the pain she felt was absolutely unbearable. Again she screamed at his penetration. But now she felt another one squat over her back. Then she felt a prodding in her asshole. She began to laugh a little bit. It wouldn't fit; there was no way. No matter what he did, there was simply no way. At least, that’s what she believed.

He squirted a little of the lubrication onto himself and tried again, this time, he seemed to be making progress. Samus’ eyes widened as the tip of his head entered her. Then, suddenly, BAM, his member shot inside of her. She cried like never before, she didn't believe that she had ever felt pain this awful. While her mouth was open, a pirate inserted himself into her throat. Her face was now soaked with sweat, tears, and cum. Her orifices, namely her anus, were bleeding from the stretching, ripping, and tearing she received. Now there were three huge cocks inside of her, but three monsters were still left unsatisfied.

Two of them undid the bindings on her hands and began to use them to masturbate themselves. They let go and she continued to do it for them. She reasoned that she could not escape, and even if she could they could out run her, and they would shoot her if she tried anything, although death was not much worse than this. Now there was still one pirate left unsatisfied.

He walked around to her back. “No, you stupid beast, there’s no room there.” Samus thought between gasps for air and sobs of pain. But he did not come around to the front and use her breasts like he expected him to. Instead, she felt the pirate already in her butt move higher up, and the newest member prod her vagina. “But... That’s not possible...” she tried to convince herself, but she knew what was about to happen. She was already stretched to her limit in all her holes, but this monster still wanted in. As he put force on his member to insert himself into her vagina, she felt a new pain. And then, suddenly, just like what had happened to her ass, he slammed into her. Now she was in a true nightmare.

They continued this for another ten minutes. Now there was a small puddle of blood and semen below her hips. But the latest addition to the gang rape wanted more. He removed himself from her vagina, relieving her of some of the pain. But then she felt additional pressure in her ass, as the beast tried to insert himself into her anus. She was sure, that this time his attempt was hopeless. There was just no way that- “GLOIHIIIIIGLOHIIIIIIGLOH!” She managed to scream between thrusts. The blood coming from her ass now nearly doubled, and the pain seemed to triple. There was one in her mouth, one in each hand, one in her vagina, and now two in her ass. Quite a way to lose her virginity.

This continued for a full hour, the pirates switching places systematically until they were completely spent. Finally she got a break. But her “victory” was short lived. The pirates picked up a tablet and walked over to her, and suddenly Ridley’s face popped up on the screen. “Ridley...” she was so exhausted she could barely talk. “Yes, my dear, good work today. Thanks for raising the troops’ morale. I can’t wait until I have you all to myself. But first we need to loosen you up. This is a job that my soldiers cannot complete, we need something... stronger. I’m having my men take you to the pit. You’re about to become the best friend of good ole’ Obarex. Here’s a pic.” A grotesque mass of tentacles flashed on the screen, and Samus was taken aback at her new foe. “Yes, beautiful, you’re nowhere near done. After this I think I’ll let all the troops sample you once more before tasting your delicious nectar myself. Don’t have too much fun without me.” And with that, the screen cut to black. She looked down at her sorry state. A puddle of blood from her torn holes grew with each passing second on the ground below her, and she could feel the sticky cum both inside of her and covering her skin. The pirates proceeded to force feed her and give her a shot in her jugular that seemed to tighten her back up again. But why? Didn't Ridley say that the whole reason that she was going to meet “Obarex” was to stretch her? Were the pirates apparently that cruel as to force her to relive the pain she had just experienced? Apparently so. I was going to be a long mission.

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Yay! I just can't wait for the next one.

One last thing, this should probably go at the top but whatever If you don't think that the creative corner is where my story should go... sorry. Don't get your panties in a bunch it's really not a big deal though...

Alright i'll shut up now. Peace.
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Re: Story Time!

Postby [Brand_Name] » Sun Oct 28, 2012 4:32 pm

Chapta too.
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She woke up sore, thirsty, and hungry. She had passed out after the brutal gang rape and chained to a heavy weight to keep her from escaping. Not long after she woke up, a space pirate placed a bowl of water and a bowl of food on the ground. As Samus went for each, he got in her way. He grabbed her by the ponytail and undid his armor at the same time. “Not again,” she thought, and he forcefully shoved his cock into her mouth. He thrusted rapidly causing her to choke and gag; the tears quickly ran down her cheeks. The mascara she had worn out of her ship had nearly worn off by now. After a few minutes of relentless thrusting, he came into her mouth.

She quickly consumed each bowl and, feeling a little bit better, laid her head down to rest. But the pirates would have none of it. For a second time, they gang raped her, although this time she was lying down on her back. One pirate laid face down and pounded her face, resulting in a very sore nose. The others lifted her legs up and took turns smashing her pussy and ass. The shot they had given her the previous night made her tighten up again, so she had to relive the nightmare again.

After this brutal encounter, Samus was exhausted. The pirates undid her bindings and dragged her over the rocks for quite a long time. Through half-open eyes, Samus saw what looked like a crater in the distance. This was her chance to escape, if she could defeat this tentacle monster she could surely find a way back to her ship.

As they neared the crater, she saw that this “Obarex” did not appear to be a tentacle monster- instead it was a plant. It had four flaps and resembled a Venus Fly Trap, with leaves and roots upon which sat a green-veiny pod.

One pirate, standing along the edge of the crater, yelled something she could not understand. Then the unspeakable happened. This peaceful... Thing... transformed into another hellish beast. The four flaps on the pod unfolded revealing the mass of tentacles she had seen earlier. There must have been hundreds of tentacles, although she could not discern their size from this vantage point.

The pirates then picked her up and swiftly threw her into the crater. She seemed to be falling to her death. Unexpectedly tentacles shot out and wrapped themselves around her legs, then her arms, then her hips, and prevented her from escaping no matter how hard she squirmed. Now she could tell the size of each tentacle. They all were relatively similar, about two maybe three inches wide but endlessly long.

After she had been restrained, she felt a pressure in her anus and vagina. The tentacles were already trying to penetrate her. The one in her vagina went in with a little effort and began tearing her apart. The other, however, was too big to enter her. Then she felt four tendrils slither through her suit towards her backside.

These four tendrils each grabbed onto an opposite corner of her asshole and pulled, stretching it just enough for the larger tentacle to enter. With this incredible pain, Samus let out her loudest scream. Now that her mouth was wide open, a tentacle shot down her throat and began to rape her there as well.

Now there was a tentacle in each of her holes, tentacles slithering around beneath her suit each waiting their turn to penetrate her, tentacles wrapped around her limbs preventing her from moving, and tentacles squeezing and slapping her boobs.

Ten minutes had passed since the pirates threw her towards Obarex with the flaps of his pod open, but now they began to close. Soon there were only a few shreds of light that made in through the slits between each flap. Additionally, now there was an even smaller space for the tentacles and Samus inside the pod.

Soon all three tentacles raping her came at once, each about half a gallon each. Luckily for Samus, the one in her mouth had shot most of it over her face, but still much went down her throat. She realized that it was very similar to water. A pleasant surprise.

Immediately following this however, more tentacles wanted in. She felt two trying to penetrate her vagina and one in her ass and mouth. The two in her vagina entered with the help of the four tendrils. This caused Samus outrageous pain and she commenced crying and screaming.

This rape went on for an hour with the gradual increase of tentacles raping her. “How long will this take?” she thought in between thrusts. Now there were three tentacles in her pussy, two in her ass, and one in her mouth. This nightmare would continue, to Samus’ dismay, for a full twenty four hours.

Now she was in a state of near unconsciousness. The pain was absolutely unbearable, but it was not enough to overcome her lack of energy. Granted, the water-like semen helped, but it had been more than a day since she really had consumed sustenance. Now there were five huge tentacles in her ass and pussy each- they left her mouth alone.

These ten tentacles came into her and onto her, absolutely drenching her in their spunk. She was finally done. The great Obarex had been pleased. Her orifices had been completely torn apart and now bleed a great amount, but it was nothing compared to the amount of semen that covered her and was inside of her. She might as well have jumped into a pool of semen.

The monster threw her limp, defeated body onto the ground above, and she was picked up by pirates and dragged off to her next task.
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Re: Story Time!

Postby asshatperv » Tue Oct 30, 2012 5:59 pm

Great stuff. This is the kind stuff I love to read. I'm working on something like this, but not sure when I will post it.
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Re: Story Time!

Postby [Brand_Name] » Sun Nov 11, 2012 8:09 pm

chapta three. this one is quite nasty mind you.
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Samus woke up in a prison cell, deprived of nutrients and water. Of course, she was completely soaked in pirate cum. Her zero-suit was ripped to shreds; it only covered her arms, some of her stomach and back, and some of her legs.

She found herself in a fetal position, holding on to her legs and curled up for warmth. Two pirates opened her cell door, took her by the arms, and dragged her out to some undisclosed location.

They took her down a long alleyway with other space pirates whooping and hollering at her defeated state as she was dragged past them. Every now and then she felt a sharp pain on her ass as one spanked her as he walked by. After a few minutes of this humiliation, she found herself in an open courtyard full of space pirates. The pirates handcuffed her to a structure here and walked off.

The other pirates in the camp soon took notice. “Oh no... here we go again...” But this time was different. Two huge pirates came lumbering towards her, pushing the others out of the way. Soon the two were only feet in front of her, and she could see their massive girths pointing at her face. One of them broke her handcuff chains and threw her onto the ground. Before she could react, he was on top of her. He put his foot on the back of her head, shoving the side of her face into the ground. Then he lowered his foot to her back, pushing her boobs into the ground. No matter how she squirmed or screamed, she could not escape. Then his massive cock, which was somewhat close to the thickness of one of her legs, began to push into her vagina. The monster pushed and pushed, and finally his force overcame her. He thrust into her, tearing at the walls of her pussy. He grabbed each of her legs and used them to help him thrust into her harder and faster.

After a few brutal minutes of this, the other monster wanted in. So they took her and chained her to a rock overhead so that her hands were together above her head and her body hung limply below. They admired their handiwork for a few seconds; the defeated bounty hunter dangled there, her head hung lazily looking toward the ground, her tight zero suit covering only a quarter of her body, her legs knees angles towards each other. She was truly beaten.

They regained their grasp on the situation and took her on either side. Her break was interrupted by the unbearable pain in her orifices resulting from the two cocks of beasts much too big for her.

They slammed into her relentlessly, switching off and switching positions occasionally, but never did the awful pain go away for Samus.

After their onslaught of cum drenched her, they took her to another clearing. Samus looked up to see a small hole, about the size of a person, with a bar at the top that ran the diameter of the hole.

They draped her over the bar so that her ass was up in the air- fighting was pointless now, she knew that. They then cuffed her hands and feet together. Now her hands and feet were touching the ground with her ass spread up in the air.

She felt a new kind of fear now. At least before she could see what was coming. Now she had no idea or how long it’d last. Then she heard a grumbling of some sort on the ground above her. She shook herself around, looking for some kind of escape. She was, however, completely vulnerable and open for business.
Then she heard some drilling, and the sounds of a massive machine turning on. Then she felt a huge thud on the ground.

“We meet again my dear,” Ridley roared triumphantly. “What my troops are installing above you is the RipMaster 3000. Aptly named for its ability to rip you apart enough to allow me to fit inside you. Those tentacles surely helped but we need to apply something more... Direct. Don’t have too much fun without me. See you soon.’ And with that he flew off, leaving Samus to her awful fate.

The Samus heard the dreadful noise of grinding gears and spinning turbines, and the machine began to fire its first dreadful appendage into her.

The machine worked using nuclear power to turn various gears that resulted in the pushing, spinning, or both simultaneously, of one of three pistons. The three pistons were either a special type of chainsaw; an unlubricated, spiked, and ridged metallic cylinder; or a spinning drill. The latter was what Samus currently felt beginning to poke into her ass.

The high pitched shrill of its spin scared her into a screaming fit and excited the onlookers. This would cause her pain none of them could cause to her. It slowly crept forward and caught onto her sore and bloody asshole and pulled her tight. She gave a scream of pain as tears streamed down her face. Once the drill had wound her hole tight it began to tear her apart. In addition to the spinning, the drill slid further and further into her, both widening her anus and affecting a larger area inside of her. Samus gave loud cries of pain- there had never been anything as intense as this.

After five excruciating minutes, the drill finally retracted back into the machine, leaving Samus’ bloody ass in the air again. The machine turned more gears as the cylindrical piston moved into place. Of course, Samus could not see this as her head was in a hole.

This drill did not spin, but instead it pumped in and out of the victim, using its ribs and spikes to pulverize her. Slowly it began to penetrate her, and as the first rib stretched her she gave another cry of pain. Following this were the three spikes placed uniformly on the drill. These hurt her even more and she burst into tears from the pain. Once the drill had reached a good foot into her, it retracted, replicating her pain again.

Now, however, it went faster. With each thrust it accelerated, until, five minutes later, the drill gave her a full pound every second. This caused her unbearable agony- her ass was throbbing from the torture. But eventually, this drill was done, and the chainsaw took its place at her vagina.
The other drill had pulled out, and the chainsaw slowly began to spin. It was designed specifically for sex torture- it would not cause enough ripping and tearing to permanently hurt its victim, but it would most definitely give them distress.

As it spun, its small blades picked at her edges and stretched them painfully. But it accelerated as well, and soon it was flying at full speed, giving her relentless and unyielding torture.

Then the first drill was lowered into place at her ass. The shrill noise it made was barely audible covered up by Samus’ loud screams of pain. But her noise doubled as the drill again penetrated her ass.

Then her pain was doubled again. The drill, cone shaped, opened up (still inside of her) to form a cylinder shape, just big enough for the second drill to pass through. Now the first drill spun and tore the outside of her ass up while the second pounded away at her inside. This torment then lasted for more than an hour.
Eventually Ridley descended from the sky and landed on the ground next to her with a loud thud. It was night time, and all the pirates except for the two manning the machine had gone to bed after the day’s entertainment. Ridley asked the two, “How long has it been,” and when given the response, gave the orders to stop. “She is ready,” he bellowed. “Brand her!”

The machine thrust out two red-hot brands onto each ass cheek. Samus gave out a final cry of pain and was released from her bonds. She rubbed her ass, still barely able to keep from screaming. She crawled over to a nearby mirror (she could not walk, she was in too much pain, was too sore, and was too tired). She looked at the two brands on her. To her dismay, they read

“RIDLEY’S BITCH”
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Re: Story Time!

Postby asshatperv » Thu Nov 15, 2012 10:02 pm

Fuck, this is getting real hot. This is the kind of stories I wish there was more of.
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Re: Story Time!

Postby asshatperv » Mon Nov 19, 2012 7:13 pm

Too bad I can't send you an PM for whatever reason since I want to discuss this story with you and talk about about the stuff I'm working on. Maybe over Skype or MSN.
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Re: Story Time!

Postby [Brand_Name] » Mon Nov 19, 2012 10:45 pm

thanks for the uplifting responses!

now that im nearing the end of my original idea, id like to ask you guys for your ideas on where to take it next. even if its a diff character thats fine.

asshatperv Wrote:Too bad I can't send you an PM for whatever reason since I want to discuss this story with you and talk about about the stuff I'm working on. Maybe over Skype or MSN.


im sure this is a bit sketchy but... is FB ok? i dont have a skype or msn :(
but id love to hear mroe about what youre doing.

i took a lil break from the writing but ill get it done this week (break from le school).
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Re: Story Time!

Postby [Brand_Name] » Mon Nov 19, 2012 10:50 pm

asshatperv-

oh wait it's because you're a new user.
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Re: Story Time!

Postby Harcin » Thu Nov 22, 2012 2:28 am

Wow. I like the writing, but damn, poor Samus. She's just going through hell all the time.
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Re: Story Time!

Postby [Brand_Name] » Sat Nov 24, 2012 5:33 am

Samus woke up in a prison cell. She slowly opened her eyes and saw a blue fox standing over her. Then the pain kicked in, and she let out a short scream from the soreness in her pussy and ass. Any pain would be better than this. And it was so degrading; she felt like nothing more than a sex toy, although that’s exactly what the space pirates viewed her as, and, because they were in control, a sex toy is what she was.

She regained her focus on the world and looked at the blue vixen squinting at her.

“Tisk tisk, poor baby. Looks like they really gave you some punishment, huh? Don’t worry sweetie- you’ll get used to it.”
Samus squinted back at her; she had never seen any species like her. She looked like a fox from Earth, except she was blue and had had sizable breasts. The vixen wore
the same amount of clothing as Samus, which was next to nothing.

“Who are you?” Samus asked.

“My name is Krystal, but you can call me Kay for short. I’ve been here for one week short of a year and-“

Samus interrupted her out of shock, “A YEAR?! How the hell could somebody last a year here? I’ve barely lasted a week without them fucking me to death.”
Kay sympathized and gave her a kiss on the cheek, “Oh no baby they would never do such a thing. They know how valuable you are. But yes, I can easily tell that they’ve... Enjoyed you. I’ll nurse you back to health before Ridley has his way, that evil bastard.”

Kay showed Samus to the bath in their cell. At least it had a few amenities. Samus took another look at her behind; it was ravaged and beaten, bashed and abused. Her brands on each cheek were slightly less visible now than they were immediately following when they were seared on, but nonetheless easily visible. She would, for the rest of her life, be reminded that she was “Ridley’s Bitch.”

After taking a bath she felt much better. She had momentarily forgotten about the hell that she was in. But her happiness was short-lived. Kay ordered Samus to lie over the bed with her ass in the air to be oiled for Ridley. She said that if Samus was not oiled up properly, Ridley might kill her. Additionally, Ridley required that the girls wear make-up, so Kay helped Samus put hers on.

“Don’t worry baby, he’s taken me countless times. No matter what you feel like inside, know that he won’t kill you. Well... Actually, he WOULD... That’s what the doctors are for...”

This time Samus just laid her head down and cried. “What do you even mean?”

“Well, Ridley’s cock is so big that it will probably cause some damage to your internal organs, just a little, but the pirates have doctors stationed by to cause any real injury.”

Samus did not take her head from off the bed. “Great. Any what kinds of injuries may I be sustaining?”

“Well, he will certainly tear up the lining in your vagina. He’ll try to push into your cervix, and that’ll hurt. Then your bones will become bruised because he will rub against them a little bit when he gives you anal. If he’s nice, that’s it. I’ve seen him be pretty mean though. You’ll have to hope that you put him in a good mood.”

“... Fuck.”

Then the two heard Ridley’s voice boom into the intercom. “Good afternoon ladies. I hope you’re all oiled up? Please lie down into the proper equipment and we’ll get this show on the road.”

Kay then ordered Samus to lie just like she had yesterday. Then Samus saw Kay crawl into a hole just big enough for her- a bar ran along the top that pushed her ass into the air. Samus crawled into the hole and felt the device begin to move. It seemed to inflate, feeling her body, analyzing it. She yelped in surprise as cold metal pressed against her cheek. Again, her upper body was beneath the ground, although this time the hole was trapping her, not handcuffs, and anything below her butt was underground as well. She imagined what she must have looked like from above, a piece of ass with a brand on it, waiting for anybody in the world to use her to their desire. The sudden movement of the machine broke her daydream.

Now she did not know where she was. She believed that Kay must have been with her too. Suddenly there was a thud in the ground, and Ridley began to speak.
“Well my dears. Here we are. Kay, you have serviced me for nearly a year now. We will let you go on the anniversary. Well, sell you, I mean. I hear there are some tribes on a certain planet nearby that have been searching for a sex slave. And Ms. Aran. Hellooooooo, beautiful. We meet again, although today under slightly different circumstances. You will torment me no longer, you are all mine. I want you to remember one thing- you do not matter. All that is significant is what is above the ground right now. You are nothing but my sex doll, and I will use you to please me when I want and however I want. Finally, you are MINE!”

And with that, he finally shoved his length into her vagina.

He had slowly hovered higher and higher into the air during his monologue and at the end dive-bombed right into her pussy. Even with all that force, however, he could barely get a few inches into her because of his width.

His member was thicker than one of Samus’ legs, and close to the width of her torso. It consisted of a series of cones that, beginning at the base, grew thinner and thinner until a new cone took shape. The thinnest part faced outwards, away from Ridley.

Samus shrieked from the sudden insertion and brutal stretching. She squirmed and tried to escape, but it was no use. She could not move an inch. She yelled out of terror and pain as Ridley tried to press even more of himself into her. He had gotten nearly four inches into her, just one inch short of getting a full cone into her. But with each inch, the penetration became even tougher and more painful. By now, tears streamed down Samus’ face and clouded her mascara.

Ridley gave a grunt of effort and pushed the last inch into her. With this, Samus felt unbelievable pain and then a sense of relief. But now he was pressing against her cervix, and even a human sized penis couldn’t penetrate that. So he proceeded to pull out, and Samus felt an ache tugging against her yet again.
Ridley pulled for nearly a minute, mounting up the pressure against Samus’ vaginal entrance causing tremendous discomfort. She had not stopped bawling since he entered her, but now the pain was brutally intense. She gave a loud scream and then Ridley shot out of her.

“Well that was fun. But I think we can do better,” Ridley whispered.

And with that, the machine that had held Samus in place shot her out towards the ground. She took a look up and saw Ridley looking down on her, down at her destroyed pussy, and to her left and saw a mass of space pirates thrusting and moving about some central object... Was it Kay? Yes, it was, the heartless pirates were gangraping her new friend.

“Stop! Please stop! Plea-GLOUGH!”

The pirates moved over and shut her up with their dicks.

“Stop that now!” Ridley commanded, and the pirates stepped off and returned to their original prize.
Ridley took Samus in his hand and placed her on top of his enormous shaft facing away from him.

“Now the real fun begins.”

Ridley took each of Samus’ legs, one in each hand, and began to pull her down onto his cock. The pressure mounted, and little by little he began to penetrate her. She used her hands to try to take his gargantuan member out, but it had little effect, she was nowhere near as strong as he. As he pulled harder and harder, just like her pussy, she slowly slid down his cock, however this time was painful enough to knock her unconscious. She screamed at him to stop between sobs but that only made him enjoy it more. She was completely dominated by him.

She now knew what Kay was talking about when she said Ridley would bruise her bones. She could feel him pressing against her spine and hip bones. Now he was three inches into her, and her sphincter was spread three inches wide, but he was just getting started.
She gave up trying to pull him out and instead leaned back and let her hands droop down towards the ground. Ridley saw this and began to fly into the air.

"Where are we going” Samus moaned.

Ridley hovered about ten feet in the air then suddenly dropped. This force caused him to slide out of her just a little bit, but Samus knew what was coming and braced for impact.

When the two hit the ground, Samus screamed louder than she ever had before. Ridley not only lodged in the first cone, but another one as well. Now ten inches of uncontained fury burned into Samus, all for her master’s pleasure. By now the pirates were looking at the spectacle, and they saw Samus screaming for mercy while Ridley laughed in glee. They could see Ridley’s cock pushing against Samus’ abdomen. Her hip bones had shattered like twigs to make room for Ridley. Additionally, he had shifted her diaphragm to make more room.

“Aah, there we go. Now the fun begins.”

And with that, a pirate walked up to Samus and shoved his cock in her mouth, while another penetrated her vagina. Ridley responded by forcing Samus on the ground and pounding her from above.

Now Ridley stood above her, hammering away at her ass and forcing in two and a half cones at a time and violently forcing them out, while another pirate lay below her ravaging her devastated pussy, while yet another thrusted into her demolished mouth. The three continued their punishment until Samus passed out one hour later.
She woke up with Kay yet again looming over her. She had tears in her eyes.

“He left this note for you.”

“My personal cumdumpster:
It did not seem to me that you enjoyed what we gave to you. To be quite honest, I did not enjoy it thoroughly either. The human skeletal system is too constricting for a creature of my size. Therefore, I will only be using you irregularly. You will instead be the cumdumpster of my troops. They will perpetually take what they want from you, and even bring out those nasty drills again if they feel the need. We will need to redo the brand to say “cumdumpster” to honor your new title. Report to the barracks to be placed into your home (one of those holes you love so much) for what will be the rest of your miserable life. Oh, one last thing. While you were sleeping, we gave you another shot to tighten you back up again, so you can relive all the fun of the past couple days over, and over, and over, and over again!
Have a nice life, cumdumpster.
-Ridley”

ONE WEEK LATER

Samus lay in her hole, contemplating to herself to try to disregard the awful pain in her backside. Meanwhile the entire space pirate army was wreaking havoc on her orifices. Her backside lay in a puddle of space pirate cum; there was no a shred of skin that could be seen as she had been completely drenched with cum, with infinitely more to come. She dreaded what was going to happen tomorrow (she was going to be turned back to Obarex). She hoped for a miracle; she was so devastated with this hell she could not think of continuing like this. Yes, a miracle was what she needed.

Then her thoughts turned into reality as a ship pulled into the pirate base.

***

ooh a twist! i was going to continue the story with a different character because NOBODY GAVE ME ANY IDEAS :evil: but that's ok. I'll put the next sequence of stories in the creative corner to get more views with a link to this sequence so it can get more views. Sorry for the last chapter being kinda... meh. It wasn't up to par with the others; that wont happen again :oops:

So. If nobody gives me a new character or setting I'll take them to where I want to go which is boring and unoriginal.

Oh, and I began to draw a scene from the last chapter but I can't upload it for a while. No color though.

Alright, next chapter comin up...

Right now Im going with Zelda gettin busy with some sharpclaws, but only becuase nobody gave me ideas. :c

Righty-o then, cheers. oh, happy (late) thanksgiving
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