Despair Labyrinth (RPG) Feedback / Discussion Thread

[KITAmaru]

Hello all! Some of you may recognize me as the author of Despair Labyrinth, an RPG Maker VX hentai game.
If you're not yet familiar with it, check the thread out here:
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=1583

Since the main thread has already used up a poll to see which characters are the most popular, I've put this thread here to acquire feedback as to what fetishes you would like to see in the game most! Although I do have my own plans regarding the game's endings, long-term storyline and main plot points, I am open to possibly catering to certain fetishes that the general populace would like to see most. Some of the scenes in the game are not even really my thing, personally, but in the interest of variety and what not, I've decided to expand my horizons a bit with respects to writing and what not.

Keep in mind that a good deal amount of my capability to visually create the scenes via 3DCG is somewhat limited by 3D Custom Girl mods, unfortunately, but of all the 'custom' type programs, it appears to have the most overall. Some fetishes such as furry lack the appropriate mods from 3DCG (outside of the odd catgirl or two), and stuff like scat / extreme guro I won't personally do, due to my personal reluctance to write about it--sorry! Listed in the poll are fetishes that I can either readily create via 3DCG or make references to in writing.

If a fetish isn't listed on the poll, feel free to comment here and express which ones you'd like to see more of!

[BooFoo]

get some more shota in there. more young boys + adult woman = awesomeness. lol. I like to see the adult woman in the dominating position.

[Kriegor27]

I am, for my part, fond of girls being forced to drink semen from a glass or a condom as part of their humiliation. I also really enjoy when a girl masturbates or shows some enjoyment because an other girl, some kind of a rival to her (let's say our heroine), is well fucked by a bunch of men.
By the way, I love what you have done so far.

[BlueLight]

What is Netorare?

[KITAmaru]

A controversial fetish involving the woman having sex with another person that she is typically not romantically attached to, while her primary love interest / significant other watches (or sometimes doesn't), designed to invoke feelings of jealousy. Otherwise known as cuckold.
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/M ... orareGenre

In this game it'd be presented from the female's point of view, so you'd be able to sleep with someone else while you have a primary love interest in order to garner reactions of jealousy (or however they'd react, depending on the character) if you're mean like that. That or in situations where you're both captured, you can offer your body for their release, and so on.

[BlueLight]

sounds good. Got my vote.

[Ayra]

I'm not going to repeat myself too much, so I'll just mention that I obviously picked the F/F romantic...

... but due to the fact that we can actually pick more than one option, and because the slime scene was so oddly interesting, I also picked the 'monster' option. I'm getting the feeling I'll heavily regret doing so sometime in the future though

[KITAmaru]

Hahaha Ayra, I'd have expected as much ;D
No worries, the monster sex isn't limited to OMFG GIANT HORSECOCK MINOTAUR ASSAULT or typical crazy shit like that; if you're a fan of F/F, even if it be momentary trysts, there's always monstergirls with the mods I have, since I rather enjoyed the english RPG game made by the Architect.
Not saying there isn't going to be some brutal stuff, but like I mentioned in the other thread--I think it'll be apparent from the monster's appearance for the most part. If it isn't, I'll just tip you off so you don't have to see anything too fucked up. Heh.

BooFoo - Don't worry, you'll get plenty of that. Straight shota is something I also wanted to include from the game's beginning, and it will go past Seri and Rion as well once given the chance. With busty girls like Rhiannon and Thyme, there's no way I wouldn't expand on that dominant female guiding meek male type fetish.

Kriegor - The glassdrinking thing seems simple enough and can easily be implemented in any of the bandit / nonconsensual scenes. As for girls masturbating to another one getting violated, characters like Nebula are pretty much ripe for that--I was actually going to write a scene involving her ... uhhh, clicking her mouse to you losing to the plant boss, but I didn't wanna get THAT gratuitous so early with a character I just introduced... ;D

[SpectralTime]

...Literally everything I picked is in the bottom five. *sigh* No footjobs for me... or male romances for that matter...

EDIT: I have read your above post, and am much happier for it.

Also, while I appreciated the game's content (gameplay and (non-rape) sex scenes), I hated the story of the Architect's game too much to fully enjoy it.

[KITAmaru]

Ouh, you chose netorare? ;D
Don't worry, the poll isn't the final word on what you will and will not see in the game--after all, trends change just like characters' popularity (though I guess people will always like Rhiannon, it seems). I plan to at LEAST touch base on each fetish by making at least 2 scenes for each one. Fetishes that are less popular, probably just won't get like 10-20+ scenes or anything crazy like that.

Hahaha, to be honest, I don't even remember a whole lot of the story. I remember doin' it with a centaur and getting raped by slimegirls, uber-feminized goblins and crap like that. LOL

[SpectralTime]

No, actually. I kinda have a thing for a guy trying to get a girl preggers, though usually in a half-consensual way, like the Berserker chick's scene. Netorare... Good lord, that stuff's boner poison fer me.

And... well, I guess one or two M/F consensual scenes is better than no M/F consensual scenes.

Well, my problem with Architect's story is that the main character comes off like a self-righteous murderous hypocrite who does whatever the terrorist cell he's joined tells him. His romance with Random Uninteresting Generic Catgirl was forced and unpleasant, especially when we had to see him dancing hot-and-heavy with his much-more-likeable action girlfriend at school before that mess started.

Also, I liked the honeybees best.

[KITAmaru]

I personally prefer M/F consensual to have some amount of buildup. M/M (which you won't see in this game, due to the target audience plus a lack of a 3D Custom Boy, perse ;D) and F/F are in a way, allowed to have somewhat less buildup in my book, for some reason, but not hetero consensual. Although I guess there's always that 'half consensual' that you mentioned as a relatively common possibility.

Ah, true that. I dunno if it's just me, and no offense to their great designers, but so far it seems like a lot of the RPGVX games made originally in English (not translated) make the main character some guy, using Ralph's sprite, that's basically just out to get as much pussy as he can. So I'd like to think that games like DLaby can be a nice change of pace, or at the very least closer to Japanese-style GOR.

[SpectralTime]

Legend of Opala was a pretty good English RPGMaker game, though its frequent focus on monster/animal sex was a little offputting, and the sequel's shaping up to be even better. Give it a whirl sometime, if you haven't already.

Anyway, I agree completely. Long as it's actually in the game, I couldn't ask for more. Build-up will only make it all the sweeter...

Also, idea for girls wanting to get into a romance with the Paladin after his lost girlfriend: perhaps the hero could start a romance sidequest with both of them at once. That way, the girl gets a happy harem end for once.

[KITAmaru]

SHHHH, quit spoiling it! Seriously. Well, I was thinking mainchara + Wolfram + Orpheus if cards are played correctly.
I was also debating some weird-ass endings too. Like ending up with the twins. Or a slime. Ahahaha.

[ExistentialGhost]

Sorry to interrupt your little dialogue, but who is this Architect you speak of, and what game did he make (sorry for the uber-n00b sounding question)? You have sparked my curiosity.

[KITAmaru]

Ah, here ya go:
http://www.ulmf.org/bbs/showthread.php?t=7663
Using an assortment of monster girl CGI's, he put together an RPGVX game called Monstergirls Unlimited RPG--not to be confused with the Japanese one (which tends to have more art but be a little... creepier perhaps).

[Lucky777]

As to endings, I hope there's one where you're not chained down to any character/s in particular, but rather have free run of absolutely everyone.

(Well, "ABSOLUTELY" is an overstatement: you won't get the high purity peeps unless the organisation enslaves 'em. Which would be totally cool too though)

(Also, actually getting a pet slime sounds pretty hilarious)

[KITAmaru]

Naw, I'm not gonna make you CHOOSE someone to stay with, especially not for characters like Rhiannon and Thyme, among others, who generally seem to be able to return to their old ways.

Yeah, I always thought an ending where you didn't really get anything done besides come home with a pet Slime for pleasure would be pretty amusing and nearly comedy-movie-ending esque.

[ExistentialGhost]

I second the pet slime ending. Comedy gold.

In other news: lolis! Why doesn't the poll include lolis? The game already has shota in it, so it's only fair to throw in a few lolis... >_>

[BlueLight]

I second the pet slime ending. Comedy gold.

In other news: lolis! Why doesn't the poll include lolis? The game already has shota in it, so it's only fair to throw in a few lolis... >_>

I request this feature not to be add. I my self just don't like the idea and we haven't heard if the syndicate brokers in child prostitution and i would like it to stay that way.
If you want a legal reason why you can't i have this to say. The USA passed a law that basically say all art that contains a child having sex is consider child pornography.

I don't remember the detail or if there were any International laws. I'm sorry i can't give you more details.