CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby coyoteredmoon » Fri Feb 13, 2015 2:22 am

update! muhaha :D
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby VintageBass » Fri Feb 13, 2015 3:29 am

Well, I know what I'm not going with...
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby coyoteredmoon » Fri Feb 13, 2015 4:01 am

Dohoho
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby Omnimek » Fri Feb 13, 2015 5:54 am

Question: In order to cross a target off Mana's list it has to have a penis that ejaculates while inside her vagina. Yes?
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby coyoteredmoon » Fri Feb 13, 2015 6:25 am

That was the premise of 'World Tour' but her tailored case doesn't specifically say that. Said creature does have to reach a state of orgasm/ejaculation (which ever comes first) .

Also: pun not intended.
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby VintageBass » Fri Feb 13, 2015 6:27 am

Omnimek Wrote:Question: In order to cross a target off Mana's list it has to have a penis that ejaculates while inside her vagina. Yes?

Well me and Earth are going for a possible lesbian thing with this thief, so it may not be in effect. Although there is that mention of holstaurus not being pure female (I am curious about this... Sounds familiar to me...), so maybe? I dunno.

We're going to see Mana get laid and playing with some pussy eventually.
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby Omnimek » Sat Feb 14, 2015 3:35 am

I'm all for omnisexual Mana and play for fun as well as the mission. I get a kick out of risk though, and the idea of Mana returning from her journey at least +1.
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby coyoteredmoon » Tue Feb 17, 2015 11:24 pm

New UPDATE!
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby VintageBass » Tue Feb 17, 2015 11:45 pm

coyoteredmoon Wrote:New UPDATE!
also: I won't be able to do a full post on Thursday, but I can do a picture of some sort. So you peeps decide what you want a pic of, and I'll try to oblige! :D

Well it seems we are getting more nudity this time around...

Mana and Heikya naked together? >_>
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby coyoteredmoon » Wed Feb 18, 2015 12:00 am

Kay. That was definitely a complain I got about the first run XD Not enough nudes.This is something I should expect considering where I am posting and to what demographic.
The biggest problem with Miss Heikya was that she was not a character heavily inclined to just getting naked (despite her race).
This time around, We're running with Mana and a set of rules that firmly defines how she reacts to things. So before my final roll for this post, Mana had a status condition called 'primed.' This is a part of my under the hood writer's rules. Primed basically is saying 'she's primed to go into heat' which forces me to write her a little more risque and also tells me after every action I am rolling to check to see if she goes into heat (which is why in this case, she was sleeping naked).
So watch that Character sheet on the front end post after every update, you may see me slip in little notes! :D
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby VintageBass » Wed Feb 18, 2015 12:12 am

coyoteredmoon Wrote:Kay. That was definitely a complain I got about the first run XD Not enough nudes.This is something I should expect considering where I am posting and to what demographic.

Hopefully we can get plenty more, be it good or bad because... well, naked people make the world go round!

coyoteredmoon Wrote:The biggest problem with Miss Heikya was that she was not a character heavily inclined to just getting naked (despite her race).

... I was thinking this would be a non-canon thing, honestly. If that's the case, then I need to think more about it.

coyoteredmoon Wrote:So watch that Character sheet on the front end post after every update, you may see me slip in little notes! :D

I will try to keep up with that when I can... we should really look into that.
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby m3rchant » Wed Feb 18, 2015 5:05 am

Personally, I really didn't mind the fact that our original gorgeous green goblin girl didn't disrobe daily, as her story was good enough to keep me coming back regularly regardless. Frankly, it felt like a game that defied traditional rating systems all together: Not an M rated game that might only have sex for some cheap laughs and even then keep it hidden, but also not an AO rated game that would treat it's audience as if it's no more than a bunch of dicks(and vaginas) that also happen to have some people hanging off of them like parasites. Instead, your game treated us like actual, reasonable, intelligent people who understood that sometimes, people get horny and when they do, sometimes they have sex.

Also, thanks for clearing up a question I had but hadn't gotten around to asking, 'cause I was wandering whether Mana was going into heat based on a cycle, or it was based off of a roll of the dice with her chances going up with every failed dice roll.
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby coyoteredmoon » Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:30 am

Super cool to hear comments like this :D
I do my best to make seem more like a natural logical progression rather than 'an all problems can be solved with sex scenario.' but like I said, there were many comments that led me to believe that I may have been playing the prude a little more than I should have on this side of the internet. Part of the character creation process that I put up was to partially gauge how much I needed to let it loose and how much I need to hold back. Some of the builds I received were quite sex centric and were counted, but ultimately the three averaged out characters ended up quite reasonable on a scale of 'nun to county-baby-mama' . That aside, I do believe that Miss Mana is a bit more prone to loss of pants than out old character; I do however intend to write her intelligently as we continue forward though! :D
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby bestusernameEVER » Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:30 pm

I already forgot this thread existed :D

I like how it's going so far.
For the picture, I want to see our Heroine in Heat try to keep a straight face while she's getting a footjob from Sis under the table in sitting Heikya's pub. Make her squirm :twisted:

If nobody has a better idea, I mean. Feel free to share.

Or, another idea: Again Mana in Heat; this time behind and under the bar, eating out Heikya, and probably furiously masturbating while doing it. While Heikya deals with customers.
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby Omnimek » Thu Feb 19, 2015 1:00 am

I love all the little and great pleasures and challenges our heroines face.

-Snuggling a fluffy dog
-Flirting with a fiery bar maid
- Splurging on a good meal with friends, a hot scented bath and a feather bed
-Cat calls from drunk laborers
- Teasing the adorably shy stable boy because his reactions trigger the domme in her.
- Boob pillow and that twining tail moment with big sis. (Being caught was fun)
- Sis at her bedside, looking into her eyes as she draws that thin sheet further up to cover her bare body (I really love their dynamic, it shows how sweet Mana is)

I've loved how Heikya and now Mana have lived, though I'll likely to always have my finger resting on the pleasure side of the scale.

I want a sensually fulfilling and rich life for the heroine, sure I'm 80% likely to turn her into a bimbo or a succubus if given half a chance but that doesn't mean I seek to discard her heart or mind... (As librarian bimbo and loving-gentle succubus are my favorite types)
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby VintageBass » Thu Feb 19, 2015 2:06 am

Omnimek Wrote:I want a sensually fulfilling and rich life for the heroine, sure I'm 80% likely to turn her into a bimbo or a succubus if given half a chance but that doesn't mean I seek to discard her heart or mind... (As librarian bimbo and loving-gentle succubus are my favorite types)

Well I don't want Mana to become a bimbo or succubus, even if the demon we meet offers the chance. In fact, part of why I made my request was just out of fun and nothing too serious, just something to show that both Heikya and Mana can have some fun when it comes to sex. Nothing canon, just a fun little thing.

There's nothing wrong in that, right?

If anything, I am liking the blackjack use so far to burn off some heat, but there's the choice in either getting the horse job done, checking up with Heikya and maybe talking to the lonely individual, or waiting for Sis to burn off the rest... choices, choices...
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby Omnimek » Thu Feb 19, 2015 8:03 pm

We know her life and thoughts won't revolve around sex, even if she gets a steady girlfriend, a boyfriend or two. Currently I'm pushing for her to be a http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GoodBadGirl

I hadn't thought of the demon=dark wish scenario...Better still than becoming a monster would be at will access to their powers and traits when needed as some sort of temporary or half-state.

lonely individual?

And no, nothing wrong with wanting to see them together cannon or no.
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby coyoteredmoon » Fri Feb 20, 2015 6:48 am

Updated, Expect regularly scheduled programming to continue on Tuesday! :D
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby VintageBass » Mon Feb 23, 2015 3:30 am

coyoteredmoon Wrote:Updated, Expect regularly scheduled programming to continue on Tuesday! :D

Sorry for being a little late, but thanks for the pictures!
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Re: CYOA Tales of Lona: 'Under the hood' thread

Postby m3rchant » Tue Feb 24, 2015 1:50 am

Quick question: Does Mana's Heat go away after one screw, or does it take a specific amount of time for it to dissipate?
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