Legends: Emily's Route

[Kvothe]

Well, I had wanted to quit, but the ideas keep burning through my head so I've had decided to try once more on this. Even though means recreating all the maps which i had deleted. Unlike many of the rpgmaker designers on here, I'm gonna ask you all for help. If you find a place that has a good number of sprits/battlers for VX let me know in a pm, if you have an idea for a scene or would like to be a writer, let me know in a pm. If you have a link to something that will help me understand how to use Custom Girl 3d better, pm it to me. Most importantly, if you find mods for CG3d (Male/Female/Beast/Other) Pm me a link to it, (No torrents please) I expect to have a small working demo in place with at least 5 scene by start of Feb, If I can get the mods for CG and if I can make CG3d work for me.
Main adventure is alot more general now, The main actress is just a simple person who wants to see the world and events shape where she can and can't go. I'll be taking out the male/male and male/beast since that was a general consensus no no. I will still be doing the added rape factor. 1st rape = 1 scene. 2nd rape by same type = 2nd scene. No This is not a Game Over Rape, it is a Rape on Loss, much like Despair Laby. (Wish I could figure out his purity variable)

[Ardelas]

What kind of story do you want? Plot, Action, or Smut? A bit of everything would be nice.

What kind of smut do you want? Lots of Girl/Girl for the female characters.

Feelings on limiting focus to 2 characters with additional party members. Do you want one of the "extra" chosen to become a main character with his/her own storyline? Two characters is fine to start. Seperate storylines should come with proper planning after you have your main "chosen" worked through properly.

Wanna be a beta tester? I'd love to if you'd have me.

[phoenyxz]

Interesting beginning in the history plan, but what role will the characters take chaotic, lawful we there are playing will choose the characters faith or predetermined small details that can make a difference, and Are you sure there is no lolis in the game , cuz if so count me w8ing for fist release

[Kvothe]

As of right now, all of the playable characters are neutral with a beginning tilt towards lawful. Later in the game players will have a chance to change paths. I am also considering making a special unlockable character that starts off on the chaotic path. A reward for doing certain challenges to be determined later. And yes, no lolis, I live in the U.S and they have some very strict laws about it. Just covering my assets by not dealing with it.

[Knoloa]

On the story part, you should just go with what you want to do. However, there is something I don't understand : the MC fight for their gods right ? You can't really say that they aim to save the world (unless some chaotic divinity rise and threaten the world).
Also, be careful with the names of your character. A bad cliche of fantasy is to put weird names because it sounds "exotic", but the thing is that weird names only sounds weird. And you also have very modern names like Lisa wich sounds really strange when put together with names like Celduin or Preya.
Names are a part of a person's identity, so it's important to be able to feel their culture and even their personality through a name. You don't have to go for weird names, you can make plenty of exotic sounding names by using pronounciations from already existing languages.
For example, taking old irish sounding names can give that medieval feel while being unusual, then just giving french sounding names to some characters will make them even more exotic and thus the player may think of them as being of a different country than his character and so on.

Sorry for my little rant, but don't forget that kind of things when you start searching for names.

Personally, I'd like to be able to play as Ciera, but that's just my love for paladin girls.

Overall, it seems like you have your world but don't know what to do with it. First, your story don't need to give your characters a huge objective like "saving the world", in Harem the MC only want to repopulate his country, in DL it's about saving the princess and fighting the kingdom's corruption, in Anise it's just living your everyday life as a guild member, same for VH were the only "meaningful" plot is just about saving a friend but it's enough to involve the player in this task.
So yeah, epicness doesn't depend on what is the goal, but how you attain it and how you make the player care about it. One can hardly care about saving a world completely unknown to him.

Im not into yaoi unless it invole a trap, but If the game is good I won't drop it because of scenes with a male character on the receiving end.

[Zodiark69]

I'd be more then willing to be a beta tester for you. I'm one for KITA, and as of right now, I'm without work for a beta, since he's busy as all hell. I'll be looking forward to working with you if you do decide to make me a tester for you.

And now, for the feedback part of this:

Story: Honestly, why not a combination of all of them?

Smut: I can deal with just about everything, except Yaoi, but even then, i'll make exceptions, just to see how it was done, and if it was done well.

You shouldn't limit your focus to just two characters. With you having listed all of those, why not give them all their own back story and perhaps an intertwining storyline with one or more of the other characters? I think that would be pretty freakin' sweet!

That's my feedback, and I hope to see what this can develop from. I'm looking forward to this.

[querzis]

Well I'm sure the few girls and bi/gay guys lurking around here would appreciate Yaoi but obviously its a pretty big turn off for hetero guys which I assume to be the majority of the people here. That being said, since its a GoR, I would assume that you'd only see yaoi if you actually take a male character so theres really no problem with it as long as you got a warning or something saying that there will be yaoi if you pick one of them. Beside, since I dont think any of the other RPG maker games I saw have yaoi in them, I'm pretty sure the few yaoi fans will greatly appreciate it. Really you should just pick whatever kind of smut you're interested in and think would fit the scene best. This is the internet, your fetish doesnt matter, you'll find an audience.

With that out of the way, I'm kinda wondering why some of the gods have two chosens while other have only one. Any specific reason for that?

[codered999]

Since you want feedback I will also give you my two cents. The back stories for all characters is a good idea mainly in case you do decide to add in the other characters as starting off characters, main characters, or if you decide you want to add on characters. As for the story as a whole, you are maybe better off with medieval era stuff, but throw in some modern using magic as an excuse, and I don't care for guy on guy, but I have no problems with just skipping it if you do decide to put it in so go ahead. Also, putting in male and female monsters helps in getting creative with the story and the h-scenes by putting in different scenrios with characters maybe based off choices they can make if you do decide to make this a you can be good or bad person type of game. I don't think I would be good as a beta tester though, but would love to throw more suggestions your way if you want them. I wish you good luck with this and future projects.

[Kvothe]

Overall, it seems like you have your world but don't know what to do with it. First, your story don't need to give your characters a huge objective like "saving the world"

The overall picture will be saving the world etc, but that won't come in to play alot later. Until then it will be more simplified, doing a mission or two in each city and moving on to the next.

why not give them all their own back story and perhaps an intertwining storyline with one or more of the other characters

I'm kinda wondering why some of the gods have two chosens while other have only one. Any specific reason for that?

I had planned on having about half the characters intertwine with one character, and the other half the other character. Even though they have two chosen, only one will be in a story line.

And seeing that yaoi apparently doesn't have much fans, I probably wont be doing too much of it. I'll wait for more feedback though before making a decision.

[Kengi]

I like the idea will be nice with some more details or screenshots or even a DEMO is up for us to try.

[OmegaScales]

Sounds interesting...

Story: Try to blend the plot and smut to a comfortable degree. Take Monmusu quest for example; there is plenty of smut, moreso if you let yourself be raped by EVERY monster, but the story itself has brought a lot of people to love it. I simply CAN'T wait for the third part. I've even tried imagining what might happen, but it usually just turns into one of my own fantasies.

...anyways.

Smut: I am good with pretty much everything, even scat and undinism (golden shower/watersports). Male on male doesn't turn me on, but I don't actually have a problem with it... just don't have someone cut open someone else's abdomen and fornicate with their intestines and I'm good... Where did I see/read that again? Nevermind, I don't want to remember, and I'm sure almost everyone else wouldn't want to know.

[Savyar]

Well it sounds rather interesting and i cant wait to see how it turns out. I dont really find m/m ,m/beast attractive i have no problem with m/monster if the monster is female like a monster girl or something


p.s. i really love the name that book series is great

[Kvothe]

Actually I didn't even know it was a book series lol. Sadly the project has been cancelled

[UnLimiTeD]

Bummer.
Well, better quit early than the poor lots of effort into something you're not happy with.

[Lucky777]

To produce nothing for the public to see, rather than producing something vastly sub-par, is a very good decision.
Seeing the "for now," I hope you pick it back up when you feel more competent.
Judging from the acronym in the thread, it was supposed to be Game Over Rape rather than Rape on Loss, and though I find the former to be inferior, good luck all the same.

[Kvothe]

No its a Rape on Loss, and Still being worked on although slowly.

[Lucky777]

Cool.